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The 'Captured' Life#2-Last part Updated-Pg 146 (Page 80)

billy_ritu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 February 2012 at 10:22am | IP Logged
awesome update loved it

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Posted: 02 March 2012 at 6:22am | IP Logged
superb update...
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Posted: 04 March 2012 at 1:52am | IP Logged
Thanks a lot for your support friends...Love you all


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Edited by World-of-Dreams - 04 March 2012 at 2:11am

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Posted: 04 March 2012 at 2:09am | IP Logged

                                              PART 39

It has been two weeks, a lot of things happened in these 2 weeks .

All of them returned back to Delhi , Dev gave an interview in KC and successfully got a job , Adi  and Pinky got to know about the relationship between Maan and Geet , everyone is waiting for the official announcement. The bond  between Geet and Sudesh grew more stronger during their morning walks , Geet for the first time saw the nervous side of Dev while he was about to give the interview ,today it's Dev's first day in the office and he is quite nervous .

They both are sitting in the park for last 1 and half hour  , because of Dev  Geet's morning walk  also got cancelled . Dev came to the part early in the morning to meet Geet.

Dev ,what are you doing dude!! You and Nervousness!! They both don't suit together.

So relax , everything will be fine Dev .

Geet knew that it's not the first-day nervous feel which is making him more nervous but the expectations from him that has planted a seed of nervousness in him.

But Geet...I dunno why but...

Dev ...believe me ...everything will be alright , you'll prove yourself .

There's no need to worry ,just smile and let things happen .

Dont' think too much .

He smiled slightly Okk

Thanks Geet.Dev took a deep breathe.

*****In the Office***

Adi : Hey Geet...oops...sorry..I guess now I should address us an Maa'm as you are the fianc of  my boss ...our new boss.

Ohh..Puleeaze Aadi..Geet smacked his arm playfully.

They both smiled.

So Geet ,when are you going to announce this among the whole staff ,asked Adi while sipping his coffee.

Hmm...Soon I guess  ,just waiting for the right moment.

So when is the right moment gonna come asked  Adi while talking another sip.

You'll get to know when it comes ,she smiled so Adi ...tell me about yourself ... What's happening ,how are the talks going on?? For your marriage??

Pretty Good, Everything is fine but I guess  my mom is so particular about the muhurat's and all so  just waiting it. Mr. Aditya you are soon gonna get married .

Waiting for the big bash !!

They  both smiled and shared a joke.

While talking  Adi and Geet heard someone's loud voice.

Geet and Adi looked at the direction.

They saw Dev and Komal ...Komal works in the administration Department.

It's your first day Dev ,if your doing such a mistake on the first day itself ,what should be expected from you..It's

I'm so sorry ma'am actually.

You are not suppose to cut me Mr. Dev.

Sorry ma'am.

I want the right files in 5 minutes .

Ok ma'am

I'm not going to spare such mistake from next time.

Sorry said Dev with his head down ,he surely looked disappointed.

He arranged the files as soon as possible and went to Komal's cabin as per her orders.

Adi : Aah..Komal is a bit too strict and harsh ,but I guess Dev needs to get adjusted to her ,afterall she is his boss.

 Dev was a bit nervous and as he thought today something went wrong !!

Adi : It's not gonna be easy for him  , by not exposing his real identity real identity ,he'll be treated like any other   .

They both looked at Dev who was coming out of her cabin.

Geet  went to him .


I have some files to work upon ma' you want something?

Nothing..I want to meet you after the office ..I'll be waiting for you.


Dev came out with and he found Geet standing outside.

Hey Dev.

Hi Geet.

So how was the first day??

It was ok and the rest I guess you saw that...why not the whole office saw that.               

Dev...don't get disappointed, everyone gets to face such incidents while working so it's ok...these all are jst learning steps , even if you fall , it doesn't matter you can still stand up.

Now smile ,this ummm...wala face actually doesn't suit you.

Maan came towards them .

Hey..guys ...Kya chal raha hai??

Looks like some serious discussions are going on..


Dev. you seem upset??What happened??

So how was my bro's first day??

Kuch to bol yaar..itna chup kyun hai??

Accha chod...I have something that will lit you people up.

And what's that Maan?? Hope that itsn't some chocolate.

Hahaha..was it supposed to be funny?? I'm sorry to say but wasn't !!


Ok...ok..he took out something from his pocket

Look here ,Passes for the band performance.

Dev almost jumped.

Oh My God!! Bro...this is my fav band!!! 

WOW!!!  I too love this band!!!! I just can't believe this!! Concert kab hai inka??


Oh Gosh..I'm damn excited.

I love you bhai!!!

Dev hugged Maan tightly.

I love you too Maan...and Geet too hugged Maan tightly.

Oh God...what's this let me breathe.


That evening Geet went to a grocery shop to buy some items.

Suddenly a girl tapped her shoulder and shouted Geet's name!!


She was so excited to meet Geet after a real long time!!



They both hugged each other!!

KAISI Hain..Geet tu??

Main bilkul theek..tu bataa!!

Shravya and Geet are cousins , Shravya didn't meet Geet from long time ,Geet's parents and brother passed away and after that no-one knew where Geet went ,she lost all the conncetions.

Shravya is the first one whom she met after she came back to Delhi.

Shravya : Geet ,tujhe pata hai..meri shaadi fix ho gayi..Lucknow mein hai are the first one to whom I'm informing  ,even i came to know about the day today itself.

I'm so excited Geet ,It's in the next week.

Mama keh rahi thi next week there's a very amazing timing , so we all decided to start the preperations ,kal  wedding cards bhi send kar denge.!!

Oh Wow Shravya..I'm so happy for you.

Geet kal main lucknow jaa rahi hoon ,tub hi aana kal!!


Yes Geet..please !!

Shravya's marriage ,Geet was very happy for her but if Geet goes to that marriage ,she'll meet a lot of people ,few relatives and everyone which means a lot of questions will be thrown at her.

So many unanswered questions . She didn't meet them after she lost her family ,how will it be to meet all of them after a long time. Strange thoughts revolved over her mind.

Geet stood there blank ,not knowing what to do!!


Precap : ****What will be Geet's answer? Will she attend the marriage??

              ***Dev , Geet and Maan at the concert!! Geet  is a huge fan of one of the band  members...what'll happen when she'll watch him perform!! LOL


Edited by World-of-Dreams - 04 March 2012 at 2:15am

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abinash079 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 04 March 2012 at 2:26am | IP Logged
awesome yupdate
loved it

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paponecon IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 March 2012 at 2:30am | IP Logged
****What will be Geet's answer? Will she attend the marriage??...she needs maan...

              ***Dev , Geet and Maan at the concert!! Geet  is a huge fan of one of the band  members...what'll happen when she'll watch him perform!! LOL ...maan jealous


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Posted: 04 March 2012 at 2:33am | IP Logged
awesome update dr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nice precap...
ll be waiting!!!!!!!!!!!

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ajenn IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 March 2012 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Poor Boy Dev. Pity him. Guess Komal is the young angry Lady BossLOL
Am just little curious. So am guessing that no one knows who Dev is really, am I right?

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