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The 'Captured' Life#2-Last part Updated-Pg 146 (Page 62)

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srirad

Amazing updateClap
Maaneet conversation and their cylce ride awesomeStar
Liked the way geet teasing devStar
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for nextSmile
Thanks a lot dear
It means a lot to me Big smile

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged

                                                 PART 35

Maan was extremely angry on one of his staff members.

Mr. Rohan I hired a different staff ,taaki kaam jaldi ho more efficiently  but things are not in their place.

It was not a very good day for Maan , He was very angry and many of his staff members had to face his anger.

He worked till late in the night.

It was almost 9.

He was about to leave the site ,he went near his car .

Dev was standing near his car.

Dev what are you doing here?

Bhai...It seems that you are angry.

Dev...r u here to guess how I am feeling right now.???

Well it's not a bad idea ,Let me guess what's going on in your mind right now..aah...

Oh great ,so let me help you in that ,I feel like kicking you out of my way right now ,sorry if I sounded rude ,no offence.

Wowo bro ,you are extremely angry I guess ,no problem ,I have a medicine to make your anger vanish completely.

Dev ,I'm in no mood to sit and chit-chat with you ,let me go.

Ofcourse bro chitting-chatting LOLwith me is defo not your  medicine I know ,mere kehne ka matlab

Let me GO Dev!!

Ok bhai...I'll drive.


Please bro .

Dev drove them towards the fields .

Maan leaned back and closed his eyes.

He opened his eyes after some time just to find themselves in a completely unknown way.

Dev where are we going.

Bha..bhai...woh ..woh Dev fumbled ...bhai  lagta hai ,hum galat raste pe a gaye!!

WHAT?? Maan shouted at Dev in anger!!

The car suddenly stopped in the middle of the road which increased Maan's anger.


What the hell is going on.

Bhai...I think something went wrong ,let me check.

Dev wasted as much time as possible ,he called a mechanic and told Maan that he was on his way ,it was getting very late now but there was no clue of the mechanic.

Dev...What's happening ,tumne mechanic se baat ki??

I don't even know the route from this place!!

I couldn't even find it from my mobile.

I could hardly find the name of this place online.

Maan and Dev were struck in a village, they knew nothing except for the name of the village.

Dev called the mechanic to the entrance of that "newly-found" town.

It's 11 and we are struck in the middle of the road!

What's happening??!!

Ek minute..Ek minute...Maan's expressions were enough to tell that he suddenly dicovered something new .."Eureka moment"LOL

Maan raised his hands in air and sighed in disbelief. have planned for my birthday right!!

WHAT?? Dev almost screamed.

Yeah Now I get it!!'s my birthday tomorrow and It's almost 11:30 now ,Gosh Dev ,you should have thought of something better dude!!

Dev did't knew what more to speak ,he stood there silently ,what more to speak his brother got to know the reason behind his stupid behaviour!!

Damn !!

Chalo.. mere bhai..

Dev stop it ,I know ki gaadi kharaab nahi hui ,chalo.

Ok bhai...Dev nodded and sat in the car as he had no other option left!!huh!

Maan sat in the car,Dev... actually that was not a very bad plan dude..Maan smiled at Dev's expressions.

Bhai...agar aapko pata chal bhi gaya to bolne ki kya zaroorat thi??


Well ,I guess even Geet is involved in your plan.

Yeah bhai..sadi a disappointed Dev.

Dev drove towards an old house.

This house??

What are we doing here?? Yeh ghar toh..

Bro ...just come with me.Dev smiled.

Maan followed Dev ,

Dev looked at his watch ...It was 11:58.

He smiled and opened the door ,he signalled Maan to come in ...Maan still looked at the either sides confused ,

Bro ...just switch on the lights.

Maan switched on the lights .

As soon as the lights lit up , a group of people shouted Happy Birthday.

Maan smiled ,but didn't knew about the people who gathered together to wish him on his birthday.

A guy came towards Maan ...

Aj homework nahi kiya yaar ,Keh dena yaar ki tune bhi kaam nahi kiya ,dono class se nikal jaayenge  aur milke football khelenge ...forwards khelte hai ,he winked.

Maan couldn't believe that the guy standing infront of him is his old-old-childhood friend Shankar whom he hadn't met from  years .

SHANKAR. Maan hugged him in excitement

They both hugged each other tightly relishing all those days they spent together.

Shankar...I just can't believe this!!

Shankar mere bhai..

Maan looked around he could recognise each and every friend.

Rahul ,Vijay ,Aman ..his whole group!!

His whole group .

How strange ,they hadn't met for years but Maan was able to recognise all of them.

All were very happy ...they were a lot of emotions coiling in their mind.

How long had it been.

They all shared a strange relationship as childhood innocent friends ,whose life only revolved around the school ,games ,friends and their homework.

They all spent some of the best days of their life with each other.

Meeting everyone again was something that was beyond expressing .

They all wished him .

Dev and Geet looked at them with a smile on their faces.

Nothing more than Maan's happiness can make her happy.

Thanks a lot bhabhi..Geet looked at Dev ,it was the first time Dev called her as bhabhi .


Aj tak bhai hamesha doosron ki khushi key liyue bahut kuch karte gaye ,now I'm very happy to see some-one who can give the same happiness to him.

You don't even know how blessed I feel ,to get a person like you in our family.

Thanks Geet.

Geet definitely didn't expect such response from Dev...It was something different from the usual Dev.

They both hugged each other.

Dev , itne senti?? I just can't believe this ,smiled Geet.

They broke the hug.

Dev smiled ,kya karein...It happens sometimes ,but haan he whispered ...Ssh...don't tell this to anyone.

Sssh ,she kept her finger on her lip ,no-one.

They both smiled.

Dev saw Maan and went towards him.

Happy Birthday bro

He hugged Maan.

Thanks a lot Dev ,It couldn't have been better.

All because of Geet ...She is the one who planned everything...I just helped her , he smiled.

Ek minute bro..Dev left from there.

Maan looked at her ,she was talking to one of Maan's friends with a sweet smile on her face.

He kept looking at the woman ,who is responsible for this wonderful surprise.

She never fails to make him fall in love with her every time she smiles or makes him smile.

He went towards her.

She was looking no less than an angel .

She came towards him.

Happy Birthday Maan ,she hugged him and gave a peck on his cheek .

Thanks a lot Geet.

Maan gently kissed her cheeks.

You actually brought all those moments alive ,that I thought would never come back in my life ,Geet.

I really don't know how to thank you for making me revisit all those memories once again which I thought would never come back.

All those wonderful ,innocent lovely days!

He kissed her forehead.

Maan ,stop thanking me.

Geet  placed her hand on his cheek and looked into his eyes.

You deserve all the happiness Maan.

It's only from you that I learnt ,that it's a small life and we are very small parts of this whole large world ...Nothing is beautiful than making a difference in the lives of people around us and spreading smiles in everyone's life , you made me look at a world that starts where hatred and darkness ends.

So..Mr Maan hamesha isi tarha hanste rehna and spread smiles in everyone's life .

You deserve each and every bit of it.

Oh..then thanks a lot Ms. Geet

Even though happiness is not a permanent member in anyone's life ,it's a short and sweet guest so enjoy it...and when you smile ,the beauty of your smile is enough to mesmerize anyone ,he leaned closer to kiss her again.

Geet pushed him back with her finger.

Maan saab ..lagta hai aj aap kuch zyaada hi khush hai.

Bilkul ...

She smiled and hugged him.

Happy Birthday ...


Precap: Surprise abhi baaki hai  Wink


Next :  Part 36

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 28 January 2012 at 9:49am

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Remya_Pillai IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 7:45am | IP Logged
yaar..still the like button not working..!
loved the part a lot..
ds s the best bday gift one can ever give to him...
words r not needed for deir luv..
surprise abhi bhi baaki...
hmm..lagta hain it will b more nteresting one

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Remya_Pillai

yaar..still the like button not working..!
loved the part a lot..
ds s the best bday gift one can ever give to him...
words r not needed for deir luv..
surprise abhi bhi baaki...
hmm..lagta hain it will b more nteresting one
Thanks a lot dear Big smile
Haan...surprise abhi bhi baaki hai my dost Wink
yeah the like button is not working...but comments of the readers are more than everything.Smile
Thanks Smile
renjini263 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Heyyy dear awesome update loved d parts...
sry due to my xams i couldnt comment...
Loved it...loved maaneet nd dev nd geets convo...
plzzz continue lyk button is nt working :(

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anupm04 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Wow awesome update
Loved it
Waiting for surprise
Sorry like button is nt working

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Tuli Senior Member

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 9:47am | IP Logged
it was a awesome updt. Liked d chemistry btw dev n geet. And most of all loved d maaneet convo. Will wait 4 nxt updt n d surprise.

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