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The 'Captured' Life#2-Last part Updated-Pg 146 (Page 41)

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by idunno

Originally posted by bhanu_rekhag

awesome part ..
Thanks a lot Hug

Originally posted by Remya_Pillai

Dev looked at her and smiled,so that we all get into the mood of the party , a

 feeling of organizing a party ,everyone is busy in organizing

 and decorating things ,they are  getting into the mood of the party by doing

 such silly things. Getting more comfortable with each other

It's a New-Year party and I don't want it to be formal ,the more informal we be

 while decorating and enjoying it ,the more informal and fun would be there ,he winked.

i loved dese words a lot... i em in love with ur writings..

dere was no awkwardness after deir kiss.. i luvd dat too... 

Awww...Thanks a lot dear 
I'm glad you liked those lines
and yeah there was no awkwardness Embarrassed
Originally posted by jyothikrish

omg... its mind blowing update...
loved it to the core... 
she was a bit hairan and a bit pareshan.
loved this sentence... lol... 
hayeee mera dev... he is awesome... 
the way he explained to pinky was great... 
finally awesome wonderful superb beautiful.. update.. huh!!!
continue soon... LOL aur ek update jaldi se... Embarrassed or else Angry
thanks 4 the pm
Haan...haan...tumhe dev ko ideas toh pasand honge hi na LOL

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anupm04

Wow awesome

loved it it
Originally posted by abinash079

awesome update Clap
Originally posted by tamanna1391

awsem just love it

Originally posted by muraadlovesdd

Originally posted by gangesegb

Originally posted by Maaneet_Vidu

Amazing part.
Loved it.

Thanks a lot friends HugBig smileHug
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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 5:38am | IP Logged
yu updating dr????????????
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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by JanakiSatish


                                                PART 30

Vow...namu that was great start for the new year. maan and geet kissed and finally the new feeling sinking into each of them at the right moment.
dev is a challooo. he knows that something is cooking between these two and is just giving aag to the situation.
pinky is confused...wait ...there is still more..pinky...
vow new year in maan's arms ..what better gift for geet. she has come a long way to understand and make her mind...thanx to maan.. and maan what more of a gift on new year's day.awesome

Yeah Dev is a smarty naughty bhai LOL
bichaari pinky is a bit hairan and a bit paresha!!
yeah finally they both got special new year gifts Day Dreaming

Originally posted by -harneet.gill-

awesome part
i loveeed it 
da way dey were having fun was making me want to go dere to dem loool 
and awww dey hugged each other first cutee ^.^ 
cont sooon

harneet <3
hehe even I was tapping my foot while typing the update LOL

Originally posted by niticool


book marking 

beautiful,awesome,superb,classic...all possible words for dis update 

i just loved the last paragraph 

cont. soon
Awww...thanks a lot nitya dear...I'm glad you liked the last paragraphBig smile
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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 5:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l


u always make them decorate while enjoying...i like it...seems more enjoyable...(but not more than throwing buckets of paint over ur painted wall...Cool)

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
haha...when will you drop the idea of over painting!! Ouch
first let my paint on some wall and that will be possible only when someone rents their wall my mom-dad are defo not gonna allow me...they'll kick me out of their room and my room aswell LOL

Originally posted by zahra15

so the kiss was real like you said... :)))

me so happy... :P

but that phone...did it have to ring at that time only...?? lol!!!!

geet feeling strange all the hairan and pareshan according to pinky...

and maan and geet sharing an eye lock...

i loved how dev indirectly was teasing them...

an dev's idea to enjoy themselves...loved it..

it seems all were having a gala time...

and then that last bit...

their journey n was awesome...

continue soon n thnxxx...

yeah da kiss was real...and yeah those mobiles always ring at the wrong time !!! LOL
this parampara is coming from ages LOL
I'm glad you liked the new-year celebrations dear...thanks a lot Big smileHug

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 5:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayapari

yu updating dr????????????
will update tonight dear Embarrassed

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by World-of-Dreams

Originally posted by mayapari

yu updating dr????????????
will update tonight dear Embarrassed
okiz Big smile
ll be waiting...
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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 8:06am | IP Logged

                                                     PART 31

It was getting hard  for all of them to wake up the next day...Geet woke up late , she stretched her arms lazily and rubbed her eyes and sat on the bed.

She checked her mobile , she saw the new year and smiled.

She remembered the last night.

Many things happened .

There was a total different feeling in her ,she thought about Maan ...the party , their dance ,their kiss , their craziness everything brought a huge smile.

She felt fresh and excited.

She still sat on the bed and she heard Pinky's voice??

Pinky Itni jaldi uth gayi?? She thought in a lazy voice ,she got down from her bed and walked towards  the hall.

Pinky looked very excited while talking to someone ,Get went closer ,Pinky introduced Geet to her father. After the introduction ..Geet hugged him and wished him. They talked for a while ,then Geet went to freshen up herself.


Aj New-Year hai!! Sudesh Uncle se toh milna hi hoga tujhe.

Par abhi toh 8:30 baj rahe hai...woh abhi park mein honge??

Haaa...hone toh chahiye...aj shayad wo bhi late aaye ho walk ke liye!!

Agar woh aj aaye hi nahi honge toh?? You don't even have his number!!

Geet zyaada soch mat ,tujhe unse milna hai na to bas ,ready ho jaa aur bhaag.

Geet  reached the park as fast as possible ,She wanted to meet him very badly.

She ran as fast as possible ,to reach early.

She looked all around after reaching the park but she couldn't find him.

She got disappointed.

Happy New Year young gir!!!

She heard a voice that came from behind.

She turned back ,Uncle ??

All the disappointment in her face vanished in just a moment.


She went to him and hugged him tightly.

She was very happy to meet him on the new-year and wish him.

Even Sudesh was waiting for her for last 20 minutes.

Even though they only met once a day during their walk but still they shared a very sweet and special bond ,that developed very quickly.

They both sat together to talk ,Geet was happy than the usual days ,Sudesh asked her the reason behindthis new chamak...Even though Geet didn't tell him about the whole thing but ,her words were enough for Sudesh to understand that Geet is in love with some-one ..the wa she spoke about her special friend ,the way he supported her , the reason behind her smile.

Geet kept talking  and Sudesh looked at her and kept smiling at her ,the happiness and the amount of excitement in her voice while talking about him.

Geet looked at Sudesh and realised that she has been talking to him continuously.

She stopped speaking  because she herself thought that she was talking a bit ..a bit?? No too much about Maan without even mentioning his  name.

She tried to divert the topic.

Areh Geet ,tum acchanak se ruk gayi??

Nn..othing Uncle woh bas yun hi...woh I was just thinking about tomorrow ,kal office mein bahut kaam hoga na.

Waise Geet ...In which company do you work??

Sudesh only knew that Geet is an architect ,but he never asked about the company ,because they always talked of different things and rarely talked about their work.

Uncle I work...

Just then Sudesh's phone rang LOL

He picked up the phone.

Geet waited until he finished the call

Geet I'm so sorry bte ,I need to go now ...actually there's some work.

No problem Uncle ,we'll  talk tomorrow .

Babye...see you tomorrow.

They hugged each other before leaving.

Geet was happy after talking to her morning-walk Uncle...She loved to spend time with him.

She went back.

She planned to spend time with Pinky and her dad the remaining day.


On the other side,Dev was still sleeping and Maan was dying to meet his Geet.

But it wasn't possible for him to meet her as it was the new-year a lot of people ,friends ,relatives came to their house to wish them.

After a lot of efforts of the members of Khurana family ,Dev woke up finally .

Calls, flowers , guests kept them busy.

After the busy day.

Everyone got tired.

After everyone left Khurana Mansion.

Sudesh called Maan to his room.

Maan went to his room.

Sudesh sat on an armchair and Dev sat near him on the floor ,theyboth were looking at an album and talking to each other.


Aao Maan ,tum bhi aao .

Yeh kaun si album hai??

Bhai...our childhood memories!! Dev smiled.

Accha ...Maan sat on the other side and all of them went through the whole album ,each and every photograph had a story attached to it ,which was making those moments more beautiful.

Dev and Maan teased each other while watching few photographs and Sudesh narrated some of their  funny childhood incidents making them rewind all those incidents.

They watched all the photographs and Sudesh closed it after completing the album.

The all came back to the present after laughing ,teasing each other.

Waise Maan...Tomorrow I'm going to come to KC.

I haven't visited the office for many days, I haven't even attended the new year party ,so I'll be coming tomorrow ,meet the whole staff and also wish them.

Sure dad.


PRECAP : Sudesh In Khurana Constructions...The Boss or Geet's Uncle?? WinkLOL

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 12 January 2012 at 8:51am

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