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The 'Captured' Life#2-Last part Updated-Pg 146 (Page 36)

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Haaye sach me woh kya din the!! Day Dreaming
ek saal pehle woh suhaane din ,I hope world doesn't end this year LOL
if so pls let me know I have to fulfil my  wishes myself only without waiting for some Maan Geek
kam se kam you are not like Mayank Sekhar...the filmi critic of Hindustan Times...his review cracks me up ...he never gives more than 2 or 1 and half stars for films ROFLROFL
bechaare directors.LOL
Awww...this emo is soo cute

Now a days I see a lot like these here...ther are choo cute!!
Hmmm...about the plastic sheets well then I'll paint you with my 10 saal puraani oil paints Evil Smile

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ahh..remembering the old time...

i also hope the world does not end...so many things to do......

irritate others...make them mad...criticize u...which i havent done in a long time...i really have to think abt it...

oh plz..that critic..i wonder if he has ever givenmore than 2 stars...at least TOI wale dono jyada toh dete hai...

even i love that emo...LOL

paint me......girl u r dreaming...

that is so not going to happen...Evil Smile...first u have to save urself ...then think abt moi...Cool

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 11:18am | IP Logged
waiting Day Dreaming

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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 7:35am | IP Logged
yu updating?????????????

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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti_l

Haaye sach me woh kya din the!! Day Dreaming
ek saal pehle woh suhaane din ,I hope world doesn't end this year LOL
if so pls let me know I have to fulfil my  wishes myself only without waiting for some Maan Geek
kam se kam you are not like Mayank Sekhar...the filmi critic of Hindustan Times...his review cracks me up ...he never gives more than 2 or 1 and half stars for films ROFLROFL
bechaare directors.LOL
Awww...this emo is soo cute

Now a days I see a lot like these here...ther are choo cute!!
Hmmm...about the plastic sheets well then I'll paint you with my 10 saal puraani oil paints Evil Smile


ahh..remembering the old time...

i also hope the world does not end...so many things to do......

irritate others...make them mad...criticize u...which i havent done in a long time...i really have to think abt it...

oh plz..that critic..i wonder if he has ever givenmore than 2 stars...at least TOI wale dono jyada toh dete hai...

even i love that emo...LOL

paint me......girl u r dreaming...

that is so not going to happen...Evil Smile...first u have to save urself ...then think abt moi...Cool
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Haila...criticize me !!!
Me running away 

Hehe...I don't mind getting drenched in the paint...but I'll surely pour the whole bucket of paint on you 
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Posted: 07 January 2012 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyothi111

lovely nammu...
its really a nice update dear...
i loved it sooo much...
and it was hot a  bit too at the end...
though i was not expecting it...but am happy that they did it...
oweosme work Nammu...
waiting for the next one...
hope u make it soon darling...
hey di...Hug
Thanks a lot for the lovely comment di Big smile
luv ya 
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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 12:19am | IP Logged

                                                            PART 30

After breaking the kiss ,they both looked into each other's eyes ,Geet was now unable to look into his eyes ...those eyes were only making her more weak ,she gulped down her saliva,she slowly lowered her eyes flapping her eyelashes .

He took her name ,Geet

She looked at him .

Just then Maan's phone rang , the phone broke the silence that was all over  on the terrace.

Geet left the terrace .

 

After some time Pinky went to Geet.

Geet tu kaha chali gayi thi... Dance ke baad???  waise Geet mujhe na yakeen nahi ho raha hai ki tune Maan Sir ke saath Dance kiya aur pata hai  you danced very well .

Geet didn't hear to Pinky's words ,she was lost in Maan's thoughts and their first kiss...it just happened !!

Pinky ...tapped Geet's shoulder

Geet!! Geet!!!

Kaha kho gayi

No...nothing Pinky ,Geet  stammered .

Just then Geet's phone rang.

It was Dev who was shouting at Geet  as she was getting late ,she left with Pinky to Dev's party after his call.

Maan and Geet thought of going to the party together but Geet  told him that she would go to party along with Pinky.

So Maan left without Geet.

On the way to the party , Geet  was unable to forget their Dance and their kiss , all those moments flashed in her mind, those beautiful moments ,they had the beauty to remain in her eyes forever. She still couldn't remove those intense looks of him from her mind ,the feeling of his hands on her waist , the softness of his lips on her face.

She still felt like those eyes were still looking at her ,admiring her.

The cool breeze blowing ,touching her reminded her of him .

She felt a sudden strangeness in the air.

Pinky talked to her and Geet listened to her silently without speaking a word .

They finally reached Dev's house .

Geet...yeh kya hai?? why  You are late!!! We all are waiting for you from so long.

And where's bhai??? You both are coming from the same party na ,so where is he??

Dev, Dev, itne questions ek saath??

Hum andar aaye

Ohh ...dev hit his head..I'm I'm sorry andar chalo

After entering Geet introduced Pinky to Dev.

Pinky shook her hands and stammered He...hello Sir .

Pinky we are meeting for the first time and that too in a party so why are you making this so formal...call me Dev he smiled and took them in.

Geet hugged Meera and wished Yash , She introduced Pinky to them ,she soon got comfortable with Meera .

Dev and Geet both were waiting for Maan , Dev went near Geet

Geet Maan bhai kaha hai??

Dev ,mujhe kaise pata hoga??

Woh aa hi raha hoga, rate me late ho gaya hoga New-Year's eve hai na..toh  may be he got struck in traffic.

Hmmm...Waise he isn't even picking up his mobile ,may be he is driving.

Dev, Geet what secret talks are going on??

Humein bhi toh sunaao!!

Meera ,these are secret talks na, so they can't be revealed sorry.

Accha bacchoo.

Just then the doorbell rang and everyone knew that it's Maan ,as they expected it was Maan ,Pinky didn't knew how to react after the entry of Maan ,Geet looked at Pinky and smiled at her and told her to relax ,it's just a get-together and other side Geet and Maan both  didn't miss a chance to look at each other and smile and however this didn;t go un-noticed from the eyes of Dev ,strangely even Pinky didn't fail to notice that ,she felt really very strange ,she was a bit hairan and a bit pareshan.

Dev finally broke his silence ..waise Yash we aren't here to look at each other and smile na..I mean it's not a very bad idea but I'm scared that It might turn into a staring night ,dev said with a naughty smile

Maan and Geet removed their eyes from each other and  looked at Dev suddenly and Maan glared at Dev.

Just then Arjun and Shraddha joined them ,they are Maan's and Dev's family friends and are very close to all of them.

They all wished them and talked for a while

And  then Yash stood in between to announce something.

And he announced something that made everyone present there very happy ,a perfect start they all thought.

Meera is pregnant now, Yash's happiness had no bounds ,they all congratulated Yash and Meera and hugged them

They all were very happy after hearing that wonderful news.

Dev even suggested names for their baby.

Kya baat hai Yash ,what a perfect start ,so we'll all be celebrating our next new-year with your kids,

So let's start the party with a sweet romantic slow dance of Yash and Meera.

Yash knelt down and extended his hands ,May I

Haaye how romantic, said Shraddha

Meera smiled ,blushed .

They both danced on  a romantic song ..

Dil ko tumse pyaar hua, pehli baar hua

Tumse pyaar hua

Main bhi aashiq yaar hua, pehli baar hua

Tumse pyaar hua

(Chhaayi hai betaabi

Meri jaan, kaho main kya karoon)

 

Yash twirled her ,he then went near her and gave a peck on her cheek ,Meera again kissed him on his forehead...

They both hugged each other.

Thanks a lot for this wonderful gift .

 

Ahem...ahem looks like some-one is getting romantic ...said Arjun while looking at them. This made Yash and Meera break their hug.


 Waise sirf hum doni hi dance kyun karein?

Why aren't you people joining us??

Ahaan ...first of all we all are going to the ground and then we'll celebrate in

 the lawn said Dev,

There but we didn't even decorate it!!!

It's ok we'll decorate it now

What ?? Dev have you gone crazy

Why ??? What's wrong??

Hello people let's shift there

Chalo chalo.

They all didn't understand the logic behind wasting the time in decorating place.

But with Dev's persuasion they all agreed and went to the lawn.

Dev brought bunches and bunches of flowers ,lighting  , some logs to lit fire , and some

 miscellaneous items to make it more beautiful.

Maan ,Geet took the flowers and spread them all across they didn't even knew

 why were they spreading flowers ,Yash ,Dev ,pinky took care of the lights

 ,Meera gave them the directions.

Soon Dev played the music ...they all decorated the whole place with more fun ...

They threw petals on each other while decorating , they arranged curatains , wrapped

 themselves in the big ,long curtains.

Waise Dev ,what's the idea behind this ideas? asked Pinky

Pinky ,so that people get into the rythym of this party.

What??

Dev looked at her and smiled,so that we all get into the mood of the party , a

 feeling of organizing a party ,everyone is busy in organizing

 and decorating things ,they are  getting into the mood of the party by doing

 such silly things. Getting more comfortable with each other

It's a New-Year party and I don't want it to be formal ,the more informal we be

 while decorating and enjoying it ,the more  fun would be there without any formalities  ,he winked.

Pinky looked around, he was true, Geet who was somewhat lost ,lost while

 coming to the party was now more comfortable and enjoying heself while

 playing with the flowers.

And Look at Maan Singh Khurana who would expect him to decorate a small

 lawn with various things ,and throwing petals on his ither friends , they all

 were enjoying the session of decorations.

Laughing and teasing each other  at their crazy creations and ideas.Pinky who

 was completely new was not at all feeling uncomfortable

They soon finisehed everything it wasn't heavenly but was something that

 made them laugh and tease and forget everything else.

Soon Dev  pulled everyone to the dance floor ...and that's it

They were no more eye-locks ,no more blushing sessions,...Yash danced with

 Pinky, Dev danced with Geet  Arjun  danced with Meera ,shraddha danced

 with Maan

 ...they tapped their foot and body according to the beats of the groovy songs

 playing

 ,moving their heads,shaking their hands in the air ,tapping , enjoying each and every moment.

They forgot everything , popping and tapping their foot ,moving their body and

 dancing crazily ...they were no more couple dances. The laughed , they were

 no uncomfortable feelings in the air ,they moved their heads ,jumped to many

 songs ,enjoying those lovely crazy moments ,enjoying their friendship

 ,removing all the tensions ,insecurities, pains from their mind. Who doesn't

 have problems?? 

But they kept everything out of their mind and took the pleasure of the music

Pinky and Meera removed their heels ,to dance more comfortable.

They danced and danced , lifting each other , they were no boundaries , no

 more thoughts running in their mind...onlt thing they knew was groove ,like

 anything ,sing at the peak of your voice , no-one to stop them , enjoying the

 freedom that the air created.

It was 10 minutes to 12 ,10 minutes more for a new year to start ...There danced

 a girl  forgetting everything ,smiling and laughing continuously.

In the beginning of the year she didn't even knew that this year would end with

 such lovely moments.

She got a new life this year...

It was now10 seconds to 12..everyone counted till one and Dev opened

 champagne,everyone clapped and hugged each other...Geet  first hugged Maan .

He deserved the first hug in the new year from Geet.

Who knew that his journey along with his camera would take him to her ,

 exploring her

 ...right from her anger to her smile while watching the sunset ,her anger ,her

 thank you ,her smile .

Who knew that his journey would change some other's journey .

Two different people ,leading two different lives, his journey changed her

 journey.

But ofcourse no 'one of them thought such tings at that moment while

 hugging ,because

 at that moment ,they were enjoying their insanity and craziness.




Edited by World-of-Dreams - 08 January 2012 at 7:21am

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Posted: 08 January 2012 at 12:23am | IP Logged
awesome s the smallest word dear...
speechless...
wow... wat a party n wat a thotSmile
yu deserve thisClapClapHugHeartHugHugwaiting for the next  part update soon...yippe me firstDancingDancing


Edited by mayapari - 08 January 2012 at 12:32am

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thanx for updating yaar
ill give comment after reading it k

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