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The 'Captured' Life#2-Last part Updated-Pg 146 (Page 30)

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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zahra15

hi..actually i wasnt here for the last few days...thatsy couldnt read the previous part... :P


PART 33

it was very nice and sweet of maan to apologise for her earlier behaviour to dev... :)))

both brothers seem to share an awesome and sweet bond... :)))

geet and the khurana brothers' dad have really got close these days...

i wonder when geet will know about who he really is...

am sure she will be shocked initially...hehe...

poor pinky...jhake pe jhatka...the other day maan ...THE MSK came at her place and now he is seeking permission to enter his employee's cabin...lol...and now pinky will be celebrating new year with her boss...she is a goner...hehe...poor girl...but at the same time am sure she will be hell excited... :P

Hey  Zahra u r back Hug

Yeah Geet is soon gonna meet Sudesh as her would-be father in lawLOL

Awww...I'm glad u r liking the Maan-Dev bond Big smile

and haan bichari Pinky ,zor ke jhatke zor se LOL ,hope she doesn't get any other Jhatka in Dev's party Wink


PART 34

pinky and hairaan pareshaan...i was kinda right...hehe...

i loved maan and geet's convo when she entered the party...it was very nice...

and the song sequence...well even i love that song...and it so suited them and their situation...hehe...


and then they finally kissed...dreamyyy...but i dunno why...am having a feeling that it might be a dream...i hope not though...hehe...continue soon and thnxxx for the pm...


n the banner is very nice...i really love it... :)))

Ahhh...it's one of my fav songs!!! So dreamy Day Dreaming

No no Zahra ,why would I write such a lamba "dream"

It's not a dream LOL

It's a sacchai...the dreamy truth Wink

ah...I'm glad you liked the banner dear Big smile

Big smile

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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyothikrish

Originally posted by World-of-Dreams

Originally posted by jyothikrish

wow.. awesome update dear...
loved it to the core...
awww such a dreamy update...Day Dreaming
loved maan talk with geet...
aww dance... hmm no words... Hug
continue soon... LOL kal phir se update milega naa... pretty plzzz


haaye...kitna pretty please hai
LOL
but you know ki kal nahi update kar paaungi!! Embarrassed

hmm  sad but its ok... but angry... Angry maine bhi angry emo beja yay... LOL
humko do din lagatar update mila ... hayeee.. Day Dreaming

par tumhe yeh angry face suit nahi kartaLOL
Yeah...even I'm not able to blv myself...ki maine do din lagatar TCL update kiya Shocked
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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by World-of-Dreams

Originally posted by zahra15

hi..actually i wasnt here for the last few days...thatsy couldnt read the previous part... :P


PART 33

it was very nice and sweet of maan to apologise for her earlier behaviour to dev... :)))

both brothers seem to share an awesome and sweet bond... :)))

geet and the khurana brothers' dad have really got close these days...

i wonder when geet will know about who he really is...

am sure she will be shocked initially...hehe...

poor pinky...jhake pe jhatka...the other day maan ...THE MSK came at her place and now he is seeking permission to enter his employee's cabin...lol...and now pinky will be celebrating new year with her boss...she is a goner...hehe...poor girl...but at the same time am sure she will be hell excited... :P

Hey  Zahra u r back Hug

Yeah Geet is soon gonna meet Sudesh as her would-be father in lawLOL

Awww...I'm glad u r liking the Maan-Dev bond Big smile

and haan bichari Pinky ,zor ke jhatke zor se LOL ,hope she doesn't get any other Jhatka in Dev's party Wink


PART 34

pinky and hairaan pareshaan...i was kinda right...hehe...

i loved maan and geet's convo when she entered the party...it was very nice...

and the song sequence...well even i love that song...and it so suited them and their situation...hehe...


and then they finally kissed...dreamyyy...but i dunno why...am having a feeling that it might be a dream...i hope not though...hehe...continue soon and thnxxx for the pm...


n the banner is very nice...i really love it... :)))

Ahhh...it's one of my fav songs!!! So dreamy Day Dreaming

No no Zahra ,why would I write such a lamba "dream"

It's not a dream LOL

It's a sacchai...the dreamy truth Wink

ah...I'm glad you liked the banner dear Big smile

Big smile

u mean they really kissed...well am being so excited for the next part now..
i mean this will be so nice...
but didnt anyone see them...?????
is it why u said geet soon gonna meet sudesh as her would be father in law...
this is getting so interesting...
me waiting!!!!!!

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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 9:28am | IP Logged
beautiful Smile

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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by World-of-Dreams

Originally posted by jyothikrish

Originally posted by World-of-Dreams

Originally posted by jyothikrish

wow.. awesome update dear...
loved it to the core...
awww such a dreamy update...Day Dreaming
loved maan talk with geet...
aww dance... hmm no words... Hug
continue soon... LOL kal phir se update milega naa... pretty plzzz


haaye...kitna pretty please hai
LOL
but you know ki kal nahi update kar paaungi!! Embarrassed

hmm  sad but its ok... but angry... Angry maine bhi angry emo beja yay... LOL
humko do din lagatar update mila ... hayeee.. Day Dreaming

par tumhe yeh angry face suit nahi kartaLOL
Yeah...even I'm not able to blv myself...ki maine do din lagatar TCL update kiya Shocked

tume nahi pata muje bohot gussa ata hain... LOL
hmm tum ko kaise laga hame nahi pata... but hum tho bohot khush hain... Big smile
balle balle...

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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zahra15

Originally posted by World-of-Dreams

Originally posted by zahra15

hi..actually i wasnt here for the last few days...thatsy couldnt read the previous part... :P


PART 33

it was very nice and sweet of maan to apologise for her earlier behaviour to dev... :)))

both brothers seem to share an awesome and sweet bond... :)))

geet and the khurana brothers' dad have really got close these days...

i wonder when geet will know about who he really is...

am sure she will be shocked initially...hehe...

poor pinky...jhake pe jhatka...the other day maan ...THE MSK came at her place and now he is seeking permission to enter his employee's cabin...lol...and now pinky will be celebrating new year with her boss...she is a goner...hehe...poor girl...but at the same time am sure she will be hell excited... :P

Hey  Zahra u r back Hug

Yeah Geet is soon gonna meet Sudesh as her would-be father in lawLOL

Awww...I'm glad u r liking the Maan-Dev bond Big smile

and haan bichari Pinky ,zor ke jhatke zor se LOL ,hope she doesn't get any other Jhatka in Dev's party Wink


PART 34

pinky and hairaan pareshaan...i was kinda right...hehe...

i loved maan and geet's convo when she entered the party...it was very nice...

and the song sequence...well even i love that song...and it so suited them and their situation...hehe...


and then they finally kissed...dreamyyy...but i dunno why...am having a feeling that it might be a dream...i hope not though...hehe...continue soon and thnxxx for the pm...


n the banner is very nice...i really love it... :)))

Ahhh...it's one of my fav songs!!! So dreamy Day Dreaming

No no Zahra ,why would I write such a lamba "dream"

It's not a dream LOL

It's a sacchai...the dreamy truth Wink

ah...I'm glad you liked the banner dear Big smile

Big smile

u mean they really kissed...well am being so excited for the next part now..
i mean this will be so nice...
but didnt anyone see them...?????
is it why u said geet soon gonna meet sudesh as her would be father in law...
this is getting so interesting...
me waiting!!!!!!

I mentioned na...Geet rushed towards the terrace (and now don't ask me that where did the terrace come from LOL)
There was no-one on the terrace.. Wait I'll make it clear in the update Tongue
Well...coming to would be father in law part I'll update that part soon..but it's defo not in the next update Wink
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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 9:47am | IP Logged
ahh,,,...they kissed...Day Dreaming

in la la land right now...Day Dreaming...no maaneet land...LOL

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Posted: 03 January 2012 at 9:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by World-of-Dreams

Originally posted by zahra15

Originally posted by World-of-Dreams

Originally posted by zahra15

hi..actually i wasnt here for the last few days...thatsy couldnt read the previous part... :P


PART 33

it was very nice and sweet of maan to apologise for her earlier behaviour to dev... :)))

both brothers seem to share an awesome and sweet bond... :)))

geet and the khurana brothers' dad have really got close these days...

i wonder when geet will know about who he really is...

am sure she will be shocked initially...hehe...

poor pinky...jhake pe jhatka...the other day maan ...THE MSK came at her place and now he is seeking permission to enter his employee's cabin...lol...and now pinky will be celebrating new year with her boss...she is a goner...hehe...poor girl...but at the same time am sure she will be hell excited... :P

Hey  Zahra u r back Hug

Yeah Geet is soon gonna meet Sudesh as her would-be father in lawLOL

Awww...I'm glad u r liking the Maan-Dev bond Big smile

and haan bichari Pinky ,zor ke jhatke zor se LOL ,hope she doesn't get any other Jhatka in Dev's party Wink


PART 34

pinky and hairaan pareshaan...i was kinda right...hehe...

i loved maan and geet's convo when she entered the party...it was very nice...

and the song sequence...well even i love that song...and it so suited them and their situation...hehe...


and then they finally kissed...dreamyyy...but i dunno why...am having a feeling that it might be a dream...i hope not though...hehe...continue soon and thnxxx for the pm...


n the banner is very nice...i really love it... :)))

Ahhh...it's one of my fav songs!!! So dreamy Day Dreaming

No no Zahra ,why would I write such a lamba "dream"

It's not a dream LOL

It's a sacchai...the dreamy truth Wink

ah...I'm glad you liked the banner dear Big smile

Big smile

u mean they really kissed...well am being so excited for the next part now..
i mean this will be so nice...
but didnt anyone see them...?????
is it why u said geet soon gonna meet sudesh as her would be father in law...
this is getting so interesting...
me waiting!!!!

I mentioned na...Geet rushed towards the terrace (and now don't ask me that where did the terrace come from LOL)
There was no-one on the terrace.. Wait I'll make it clear in the update Tongue
Well...coming to would be father in law part I'll update that part soon..but it's defo not in the next update Wink


oops...it seems it kinda slipped...hehe...
i guess i forgot that bit...
am sorry... :PEmbarrassed

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