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The 'Captured' Life#2-Last part Updated-Pg 146 (Page 20)

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Posted: 30 December 2011 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by niticool

hi dear 

just caught up with ur ff 

This is the best title i have ever read 


read it in one go last night 

i just luved it that i read each n every update twice 

n  children  part was beautiful 

thanks for the wonderful part 

pls add me to ur pm list Smile

n happy new year 

Thanks a lot dearBig smile
I'm glad you are liking this FF
Keep reading and encouraging me in the same way Big smile

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Posted: 31 December 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
beautiful fantastic update
love it core

Happy New Year Graphic #25

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 2:11am | IP Logged
loved the update...
finally geet realized that she has to embrace her happiness...
waiting for the next

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 8:12am | IP Logged

                                          PART 28

Maan went to his house ,he was very happy after his conversation with her.

He entered with a huge smile on his face ,he saw Dev sitting on the couch while reading something.

Maan remembered the morning incident .

He went near Dev and sat on the couch with him.


Haan bhai bolo.

Dev ,I'm very sorry aaj subah ,I shouldn't behaved like that.

Sorry Dev.

Come on bhai ,It's ok .

Dev?? Yeh mera chota bhai , Dev hi hain na

Why ? Dev aksed confusingly.

Areh actually agar mera chota bhai hota toh mujhse 3-4 sorry bulwane ke baad hi manta.

Ohoooho accha!! And what abt you?

Even it was my bro he would have just hugged me ,and not this sorry!!

Maan smiled and hugged Dev,

Bhai..koi problem toh nahi hai na...agar kuch hai toh bata sakte ho bhai please

Nahi mere chote...I had  a problem in the morning but notnow ,now everything is sorted out and infact I'm very happy brother.

Dev didn't fail to notice the spark in Maan's face and behaviour.

Bhai seem very happy.

Umm...Do you want to share the reason behind this?? Asked Dev while smiling from the corner of his lips.

Maan nodded and took her name ...Geet Maan smiled again , he remembered their hug and smiled again.

Wow bhaiya ,congratulations

No no Dev, abhi aisa kuch nahi hai..I mean abhi nahi !! Maan stammered not knowing what to tell further.

Dev ,mai fresh hoke aata hai..I'm really very tired.

Okk bhai ,come fast.

--Next day morning--

Sudesh sat on the bench of the park after completing his walk ,he looked here and there searching for Geet ,

Geet came from behind

Good Morning Uncle.

Happy New Year

Good morning young lady

Happy New Year

You weren't there yesterday!!

Yeah Uncle...yesterday I was sleeping like a lazy bug...but today I'm back again after gaining all the activeness of the city. really seem very active young girl

Geet chuckled.

So what else young girl?? Any new year plans??

Hmm...nothing as such uncle...I guess there'll be a formal party in my office but I have no plans for the night... I guess I'm going to sleep.

So what are your plans uncle

Aah...we all old people are planning to meet ,I mean all of my friends thought of having a get-together ,we hardly get a chance to meet ,so what can be better than the New-year's eve.

Wow Uncle it must be exciting!!


And you won't believe my younger son thought of including me in his crazy plans.

Really?? Geet asked in a shocking tone

Aah leave it ,waise bhi I'm not a party person.

Hamaare zamaane mein we didn't even knew the meaning of these parties

We only knew one thing ,climbing the trees ,eating a lot in the marriages and swimming in the ponds and lakes during the holidays that's it!! That was the only party we knew!!

Oh Uncle you know what even my dad used to narrate all these incidents .

So do you live in Delhi with your parents??

No Uncle woh actually I lost my family in a  fire accident.

Sudesh was shocked to hear this ,his heart was pinching...I..I'm sorry he stammered.

It's ok Uncle she smiled lightly.

After that Geet became more free with her Sudesh Uncle.

Sudesh told about his sons  and some more  things ,Geet and Sudesh talked to each other very casually .

After some time Geet lef the park after a Good bye hug and started to get ready for the office.

Geet was happy than the other days and it didn't hid from Pinky ,Geet was more active more happy .

She constantly talked to Pinky in the metro.

They both soon reached the office . Geet went to her cabin .

The other side after reaching office Maan was getting restless to get a glimpse of Geet ,after yesterday Maan somewhat  started to feel different ,special.

He just wnted to get a glimpse of Geet ,her smile .

He stood up and went towards Geet's cabin  he thought of entering the cabin but he wanted to hear her sweet voice first  so he  knocked the door.

Come in , he heard Geet's voice a smile cropped up on his face after listening her sweet voice.

And just then Pinky saw Maan knockin before entering Geet's cabin.

Pinky stood there with her mouth wide open what did she just see??

Her boss, Maan Sir the MD of KC seeking permission of his architect to enter her cabin??

Pinky stood there with her mouth open!!

Geet lifted her head from the file just to find Maan standing infront of her

Maan ,she stood up.

Hi...Hi...Geet Maan smiled at her

Hi Maan par tum yaha..?? achaanak

Woh Main tumhe dekhna chahta tha naa.. Maan uttered .

Geet smiled 

Mmmera matlab hai...

Just then Adi  knocked at came to Geet's cabin and after hearing the knock Maan randomly picked up a file and pretended to read.


Aap yaha ..

Haan Adi kuch kaam tha Geet se.

Sir main hi aapke cabin mein aa jaoungi Geet said to a disappointed Maan.

Maan nodded as that was the only thing he could do.

Sir waise aj interviews hain aapke secretar ke post ke liye ,maine kaha than a Sir ,woh candidates short list ho gaye hai .

Yeah Adi .

Aur haan Adi ,kal 31st Dec  ki party hogi na office mein so send Priya to my cabin ,I'll give her some details about the arrangements of the  party .

Sure sir

Maan left the cabin.

Soon after that , Maan got bus with the candidates and interview for his secretary.

While Geet was working in her cabin.

Dev came

Tan tan tain ...Heyllo Geet

Heylo Dev saab.

AAp aur office mein ?? hum sapna toh nahi dekh rahe hai na.

Hahaha..Dev laughed dramatically.

Kya kahe hum ?? Sapne bhi kabhi kabaar sach ho jaate hain.

Aur jab sach ho jaate hai to hum hairaan rehke reh jaate hai.

Wah wah

Wah Wah Geet repeated ,Kya baat hai .

Waise Geet main tumhe aamantran dene aaya hoon.

Amantran ??

Yeah Invitation ye aaj kal ki yuva bhi na

Hahaha Mr. Dev humein toh pata hi nahi that aamantran ka matlab invitation hota hai...Thanks a lot Dev for translating it said Geet in a teasing manner.

Thank you thank you ,Geet humne kal raat ko ek party plan kiya hai.

Yash ,Meera , Bhai ,main, tum aur haan few more friends of mine ,Yash's and may be Maan's

Aur tum hamaare saath chal rahi ho.

Dev...thanks for inviting but sorry main nahi aa paungi.

Nahi aa paogi?? Smile on Dev's face disappeared.

But why??

Dev I just can't come.

Arreh but why??

Dev ...actually you know na I stay with Pinky and I can't leave her and come just like that.

Please understand.

Geet ,eh toh aur accha hai??

Get pinky with you


Haan Geet ji aapki dost ,hamaari dost.

Get her along.

Waise bhi it's New-Year time to make new friends.

Ahhh...Geet had no problem to take Pinky with her ,she knew all of them and all of them are ver friendly.

Okk I'll ask her Geet smiled.

Oh wow Geet ,done .

Meet you tomorrow

After the boring formal party .

Dev smiled and left her cabin.


 PRECAP : New-Year party in the office and New year bash and masti with friends Wink


Hey friends plss check out the NEW BANNER of TCL below the post and do tell me how is it Big smile

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 03 January 2012 at 12:36am

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Edited by World-of-Dreams - 02 January 2012 at 8:58am

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 8:18am | IP Logged
awesome update
lved it

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 8:30am | IP Logged
wow... awesome update dear...Clap
loved it...
wow... dev is back in this update... Big smile
loved sudesh n geet's convo...
poor maan he is very disappointed... Cry
waiting for new year party...
continue soon dear...

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Posted: 02 January 2012 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyothikrish

wow... awesome update dear...Clap
loved it...
wow... dev is back in this update... Big smile
loved sudesh n geet's convo...
poor maan he is very disappointed... Cry
waiting for new year party...
continue soon dear...

Thank you jyo Hug
check the new banner how's it??Big smile

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