The 'Captured' Life#2-Last part Updated-Pg 146 - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

859

Views

112381

Users

94

Likes

3029

Frequent Posters

mishtimia thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Congo 4 new thread n love da update
zaara2212 thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
loved this part dear πŸ˜Š
maan really was truthful hope geet understands
harshdb thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
part: 25






for the new thread...



for the pm

abinash079 thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
congrats for new thread
-Crayon- thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

                                          PART 26

-Next day morning-

Sudesh as usual went to the park for his morning walk and after his walk he looked here and there and searched for Geet but she was nowhere to be seen.

On the other side ,Geet woke up a bit late than her usual timings ,she wasn't able to sleep the whole night ,she slept very late.

She went into the washroom and splashed water on her face

Geet tum bhi na...!!

Kal woh sab kya bol diya tha tumne ,you  again started to think about those old incidents.

 Maan always made you smile but what did  you do?? Instead ,you cried infront of him!!

Usse door jaane ki koshish kar rhi thi jabki woh ...

She remembered his words

Meri hansi tumse judi hui hai Geet you yourself

She smiled remembering those words

He always wants you to be happy Geet ,he is true ...only I can change my life ...thorns are a part of everyone's life and If I can keep on hanging with them ...I can never be happy!!

Par yeh sab itna asaan bhi toh nahi hai...and it's not even impossible Geet.

While thinking about him she heard Pinky calling her.

Geet jaldi fresh hoke aa jana ...aaj maine accha sa breakfast banaya hai.

Aayi Pinky

Geet  got ready.

Kya hua Geet ,aaj tum itni late kaise uthi ??

Kuch nahi Pinky,yun hi!!

Accha chal maine aaj paranthe banaye hai??

Paranthe?? Par kyun??

Areh Geet roz bread kha khaake main bore jo ho gayi

Agar aisi baat hai to tum mujhe uthati main bhi tumhaari help karti

Koi baat nahi Geet and haan papa na 3 dinon me vapis aa jayenge !!

Geet smiled  and ate the paranthas served by Pinky.

--Khurana Mansion--

Everyone sat together to have breakfast

Maan came and sat silently.

He didn't even wish anyone as he usually does.

Dev: Good Morning bhaiya

Good morning Dev ,said Maan in a low tone.

Maan served himself  the breakfast and ate it silently.

Maan  bte aap itne chup kyun hai??

Dadima lagta hai bhai kisi ke bare me soch rahe hai?? Kyun bhaiya?? Dev said in a teasing otne

Just shut up Dev shouted Maan angrily

Bhai..par mai to sirf mazaak kar raha tha

Har baat pe mazaak karna band karo Dev,just stop it!! Do you get me .

Everyone was shocked to see the sudden reaction of Maan , no matter how much Dev talks Maan rarely shouted at him...but this instance was one of the very few incident when Maan shouted on Dev.

I'm...I'm sorry bhai.

Sudesh: Maan is everything  alright??

Yeah Papa..I'm going to office

Maan bte breakfast to poora khake jayiye

No Dadima ...I don't feel like eating this.

Maan left the table without  even completing his breakfast  and even Dev didn't feel like eating .

Dev bte aap Maan ko to jaante hai na..unhe bahut kam gussa aata hai toh..

It's ok dadima ,bhai hi toh hai ,Dev smiled and completed the breakfast to satisfy dadima


---Khurana Constructions'

Maan stood near the reception and was talking to some-one on his mobile

Just then Adi came and waited till Maan finished his call.

Sir , is file pe aapke signatures chahiye .

Ok let's go to my cabin

Just while talking to Adi ,Maan's eyes caught a glimpse of Geet  standing behind Adi  ,She looked at him and smiled.

But Maan turned his eyes and walked towards his cabin.

Maan...sir...she tried to call him.

But Maan left the place leaving a confused Adi behind.

Sir..woh Geet

Adi...Maan glared at Adi angrily.

Kya..Maan mujhse baat nahi karna chahta?? Geet stood there with a sad face.

In Maan's cabin

Sir humare clients ke company se aj ek employee aane wala hai with the documents .

He'll be here in one hour.

Okk Adi and what about the interviews of my secratery

Sir...applications have already come ,so we have to just shortlist them and soon arrange an interview.

Okk Adi ,make it as soon as possible ,Maan said while reading his file

And Adi where's the other file ,there's supposed to be another file right!!

So..sorry Sir..that file is with Geet

So call her and tell her to bring the file right now.

Okk Sir.

Adi called Geet as per Maan's instructions.

Geet ...Maan se baat karne ka accha mauka hai..no no..but waha pe toh Adi honge na!!

Oh..God!!

Geet knocked the cabin and went inside.

Good Morning Sir ,Geet wished Maan.

Maan looked at her a smile cropped up on her face as soon  as she saw him looking towards her.

Good morning .

Maan signed the papers and Adi soon left from the cabin but Geet still stood there.

Geet kya hua ,koi problem hai??

Nahi Maan woh mujhe tumse baat karni thi.

Geet we'll talk later ,I have some work now.

But Maan...

Geet  please ,Maan said maintaining the consistency of his tone.

Ok Maan.

Geet came out of the cabin ,Maan was not angry on her but he there was some sort of disappointment in Maan's tone which made Geet upset.

I'm sorry Maan ,Geet  wanted to tell this to Maan .

I'm really sorry.

Main bhi kitni pagal hoon..kitna mood kharab kar diya Maan ka.

Mr.Smile ko Mr. Gussa bana diya!!

The whole day Geet tried a lot to talk to Maan but Maan gave a cold response .

After the office timings got over ,Geet went to Maan .

Maan...ghar ja rahe ho??

Haan ,said Maan while adjusting his laptop in his bag

Woh..actually mujhe kahi jaana tha tum mujhe leke jaoge??

Tum chali jao Geet ,aaj mera mann nahi hai!!

Maan please na , mana mat karo ,please please chalo.

Geet!!!

Maan!!

Agar tum nahi jaoge..toh phir main bhi nahi jaaoungi!!

Geet...yeh baccho ki tarah behave karna band karo.

Maan...mujhe nahi pata please chalo na ,main tumhe haunted house jaisi jagah toh nahi le jaungi na..tumhe darne ki zaroorat nahi!!

Haunted house??

Geet pehli baat. Hum ja kaha rahe hai??

And dossri baat agar tum haunted house bhi le jaogi na to bhi mai nahi daroonga!!

Maan pehli baat ..tumhari pehli baat baat nahi ek question tha

Aur doosri baat ,main bata doongi raste mein ,chalo chalo

Aur teesri baat..woh bhi raste mein bata dungi ,said Geet with a cute smile on her face.πŸ˜ƒ

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 12 years ago
-Crayon- thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dearies πŸ€— First of all

MERRY CHRISTMAS πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


 May the joy and peace of Christmas be with you all through the Year
Wishing you a season of blessings from heaven above. 
Merry Christmas

***********

Well well coming to the update
Hope you liked itπŸ˜‰
Actually I wanted to include more in this update,but I typed it  till here and thought of updating it todayπŸ˜›
Your likes and comments are gonna encourage me to write the next part πŸ˜‰
I'll update the next part in two daysπŸ˜›
And dearies please please please don't forget to click the like button!!
The no. of likes keep on fluctuating very badly...and its very disappointing  to see the decrease in likes!!
So please bring a smile on my face this christmas  by clicking the like button πŸ˜†
Jokes apart πŸ˜†..if you don't like it do tell me but don't gimme silent treatment 😲 by not clicking the like button or not commentingπŸ˜›.
--Namratha--πŸ˜ƒ


Edited by World-of-Dreams - 12 years ago
abinash079 thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part dear
loved it
Remya_Pillai thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
dat was awesum...
so geet realized her mistake...
i think after the manofying part  maan shud apologize to dev..
i really felt bad for him..

Happy X'mas..
-Crayon- thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

dat was awesum...

so geet realized her mistake...
i think after the manofying part  maan shud apologize to dev..
i really felt bad for him..

Happy X'mas..


Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome part dear 
loved it


Oh gosh...you are really very fast..I was editing the Merry christmas and my bhashan wala post!!πŸ˜†
and after editing I saw your comments ..thanx a lot !!
I'm glad you liked the update..I'm sorry there was nothing much in this update ...but next part will be a maaneet part πŸ˜‰
Merry ChristmasπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by World-of-Dreams - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
awesooome...loved it...
merry Christmas to u too dear...