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RECAP: Maanvi: yea then who?
Virat and Maanvi stared at one another in shock
Maanvi: ab kya karey ga?
Virat: we will find out who stole our icecream
Maanvi: yes but how
Virat: I have my doubt on someone
Maanvi: realy who?
Virat: viren bhai and jeevika bhabhi
Maanvi: arey nai virat di doesn't like so much icecream she will not eat more than a half box of icecream
Virat: when did I say she ate some… bhai and bhabhi must have done something what v did yesterday
Maanvi blushed: but how can you be so sure
Virat: well you liked it, meaning your sister likes it as well… I liked it meaning my brother must have liked it well
Maanvi: hmmm you're right, but what do we do now??
Virat: I don't know, maybe we can just get it started…
Maanvi: get what started?
Virat: you know, without the icecream
Maanvi: gosh virat I meant something other then that… tumhare dimag bhi na
Virat: acha acha don't get mad…
Maanvi: then let's go watch tv or a movie…
Virat thinks: Maanvi ko manie movie dekhaaney ki liya toh nai roka tha…
Maanvi: what are you thinking—asked Maanvi in the most cutest way ever
Virat: nothing maanu just thinking which movie we will watch
Virat went towards Maanvi and picked her up in his arms and took her to his bedroom, made her sit on his bed and put on a movie
Maanvi: which movie is it?
Virat: the dirty picture
Maanvi: VIRAT I don't wana watch that movie… at least not with you
Virat: what does that mean?
Maanvi: I mean put something else on…
Virat: I don't have any other movie
Maanvi: kya mutlab chachi ka pass toh hoongi na
Virat: chachi apni movies ek lock closet mein rakti hai, jis ki chabi who saath rakti hai
Maanvi: oh my god fine we will do something else
Virat: no maanu come on lets watch that movie
Maanvi: nai, I am going to the bathroom and after that we will decide what to do
Virat came close to Maanvi to pick her up again, and Maanvi backed away
Maanvi: mein washroom jaa rahi hoon
Virat: yea I will accompany you
Maanvi lightly pushed virat away from here and went to the bathroom herself
Virat thinks 'well thank god movie ka idea toh gaya, warna teen gante ki movie ka khamtam hona se phela sarey ahh jaata, but I don't wana force maanu into getting intimate with me, but I so wana kiss her again gosh what do I do'
While Maanvi was in the bathroom she thinks… 'I know what virat wants to do likan, likan everytime we want to do something more than kissing and fooling around and somehow I get enough courage to stop him, but what if I m not able to stop him now… I want to feel his touch all over me, but I know it is wrong, but how something that feel so good be so worng… I love him he loves me, toh phir kyun… uff I will go crazy stop thinking Maanvi and lets just go with the flow'
Saying that she went outside, to find virat in a black and white coloured suit all dressed up, looking hot as fire.
Maanvi was just stunned her eyes were soo checking him out, top to middle to bottom, virat for a got nervous and started getting sweat around his forehead… which Maanvi noticed and looked away
Virat: I thout we would go out on a date….
Maanvi was still in shock seeing the most hottest/handsome guy asking her out on a date, Maanvi still didn't make any eye contact with him
Maanvi: umm a date
Virat: yea I m all ready and I got this for you, change into it and I will meet you downstairs
Before Maanvi could say something virat had step out giving Maanvi a gift- which was all wrapped up
Maanvi kinda panicked for a moment, 'I have never been out on a date…' Maanvi opens the present to see a beautiful white colour dress with white cinderalle shoes, Maanvi was speechless 'virat ni yeh sab kasey kiya… like I was just in the bathroom and I come out to see all this how can he be so fast?"
After 10-15mintues Maanvi was wearing the stunning dress and adoring herself in the mirror when she saw virat behind her, Maanvi lowered her eyes as virat came closer, he came closer until he was standing right behind her, he lowered his head so his lips were right on her ears, Maanvi could feel his breathing on her, she left such a electrifying current go through her
Virat in a low seducing voice: hey look beautiful but something is missing
Maanvi looked up into his eyes: kya
Virat was still half in her ear half in her neck nape: asey nhai close your eyes then
Maanvi did as she was told without any argument virat was very happy for the first time she did as he told her "gosh she is so beautiful" virat thought to himself and slowly started moving her hairs away from her back to put them on one side of her shoulder he felt Maanvi shiver as his hand was touching her bare back and her shoulder. He brought his hands around her neck to place a diamond necklace around it "now open your eyes" Maanvi couldn't believe her eyes "yeh, yeh toh bhoot manga ho gay"
Virat: maanu don't kill the romantic mood…
Maanvi just smiled: virat but--
Virat: no but okay fine let's go my princess
Virat: haan ab mein toh prince lag raha hoon, toh tum meri princess..
Maanvi: apni tareef khudhi?
Virat: haan now what can I do… I have a shy girlfriend now she won't praise me
Maanvi: I know what you want by calling me shy, likan har bar vasey effect nhai hota
Virat: acha meri jungli bili
Maanvi: I look like a wild cat to you
Virat: no you look like a sexy run away bride
Virat: okay we can argue as much as we want later lets go on our date
Maanvi and virat had a silent drive to the 7 star hotel The Pearl Continently
Virat parked his car and went outside to open the door for Maanvi, Maanvi was infact treated like a princess
Soon they were sitting in their private cabin staring deep into each other eyes sitting infornt of one another
Virat: asey mat guray tumhey mujhse pyaar ho jaya gay
Maanvi: who toh ho chuka hai…
Virat: acha toh phir kaho I love you
Maanvi: phela tum
Virat: kya tum mujhey app kaho show some respect for your would be husband
Maanvi just stares at him blankly: respect aur tumhey… okay g agar tum—nai agar app yehi chata hain toh phir tik hai mera sartaj
Maanvi: g sartaj
Virat: Maanvi I was joking
Maanvi: nhai sartaj apka khukam sar ahkon pe
Virat: maanu stop it, it is irritating
Maanvi: nhai karu gi stop
Virat who was sitting infront of her moved from his chair to sit right beside her
Virat: yes so what were you saying?
Virat: good varna mein na kuch karna lagta
Virat: tumko chup karna laga tha
Maanvi: who kasey?
Virat: by a kiss
Virat: uff don't say my name like that… it makes me wana go crazy
Virat burrys his head in her hairs and half around her neck, he lightly starts kissing her necks nape and doesn't even realizes when his kissing picks up speed and he is down to her collar bone, Maanvi had no sense left in her she was in a trace of love which was very intoxicating Virat was by her cleavage this time with full force he heard a moan escape her lips as he was on her cleavage he wrapped his hands around her back to keep a hold on her, because the force of Virat's kissing her, Maanvi was being pushed back. So he was going left right all over her neck, to on top of her chest, he went to her shoulder and started kissing her insanely their… Maanvi too her hands wrapped around his head and was playing with his hairs in her hand… suddenly virat gave a bite on top of her shoulder and the place became blue right away, which made Maanvi gave out a light scream, virat stopped and looked at her "sorry Maanvi I was just so lost and I didn't mean to hurt you" virat said with a apologetic look, Maanvi just smiled in return "it is okay virat I know you didn't mean to" replyed Maanvi
Suddenly they hear a knock on their private cabin it was their waiter with the food
W: sir your food
W was gone immediately after he had set out their table, Virat looked at Maanvi's hickey and left terrible about it, Maanvi could notice virat was tensed and tried to cover the love bite with her hairs… virat gave a weak smile to Maanvi
They quietly ate their food; after they were and the waiter took their food… there was an awkward silence between them Maanvi felt bad for Virat, because he still felt bad for what he did, Maanvi had to finish the awkwardness
Maanvi: ummm Virat wana dance?
Virat nodded his head; there was enough space in their cabin for them to dance in
Maanvi extended her hand and virat held it and placed on his shoulder and held the other one in his hand, Virat put his hand on her back and lightly pulled her close to him, Maanvi put her head on his shoulder and they both started to move around slowly
Virat: I love you
Maanvi just buried her head more in his shoulder
Virat: you also it
Maanvi: say what?
Virat: you love me too…
Maanvi stood on her tippy toes to reach his ears and Virat shut his eyes to get into the feel of Maanvi
Maanvi: I lo—
Virat: aga bolo
Maanvi: oh my god virat look at the time it is past 6, sarey ghar ponch na wala ho ga… we have to go
Virat: no we don't
Maanvi: kya mutlab
Virat: woh all of them are going to stay their for the night
Maanvi smiles: really but—
Virat: no buts or if… tell me what I want to hear…
Maanvi looked up to his face, they were just inches away… Virat pushed her hairs behind her ear and put his hand around her check and other one on her waist
Virat: so tell me
Maanvi: I love someone
Virat let go of her: WHAT
Maanvi: budhu I am talking about you
Virat again got in the position they were inn and smiled at her: you got me scared for a second likan banderiya asey khata hai I love you?
Maanvi smiled at him, virat opened his mouth to say something, but couldn't say anything as his lips were unable to move beause maanvi's lips were on his mouth, Virat was really enjoying the kiss… Maanvi was still standing on her tippy toes too much to his height… Maanvi and Virats kissing got faster and harder by the moment and virat could feel Maanvi was tried form standing like that so he picked her up from her waist and went near a wall to support her, not for a sec did their lips apart they let each other tongue play in their mouths, soon they need grasp for air and broke their kiss…
Virat: that… was… amazing… Maanu… you are… amazing
Maanvi just smiled at virat
Virat: likan yeh kis liya tha?
Maanvi: asey hi mujhey tum pe pyaar ahh raha tha
Virat: kash yeh pyaar har waqt aya karey
Maanvi: pyaar har waqt hi hota hai
Virat: acha bhi?
Maanvi nods her head and Virat holds her hand and takes her out of the hotel and sits in the car
Maanvi: where are we going?
Virat: somewhere special and for that place you need to change into something casual
Maanvi: so we are going to go and change at home?
Viratno if we go back home it will get late there is a mall nearby here, lets go there
Maanvi: thanks virat
Maanvi: for everything
Virat: there is no thanks or sorry in love
Maanvi: acha I thought woh dosti mein hota hai…?
Virat: pyaar dosti si hi hota hai (Virat smiles) ma'am your mall is here
Maanvi: thank you driver
Before leaving Maanvi takes off the necklace and leaves, Virat waits outside the changing room for more than 20minutes he gets worry and knocks on her door
Virat: maanu sab tik hai, why are taking so long I have already changed into jeans and t-shirt, please come out na we are getting late
Maanvi: haan chep woh meri… is someone outside to help me
Virat: yeh chep hai na… what do you need help in?
Maanvi: no I mean koi aur
Virat: maaanvi open this door right away
Virat: no but open this door
Maanvi hestinatly opens the door and virat looks at wearing jeans and a kurti
Virat: sab tik hai, you look fine come lets go
Maanvi: I can't go
Virat: what why?
Any guess what can be worng… or where virat will take her next… anyways I hope you guyz like… I know I said last time that this will be a hot part, but I just get stuck in writing… that's why this part even took long… I will get some pointers on how to write a sexy scene… and I will add that to the next part inshallah… please comment… bad or good… for some odd reason I think this part didn't turn out good L so please comment good or bad J
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