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Meow_Aleena IF-Sizzlerz

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yupTongue its so interesting n very nice i really enjoyed it Clap keep continue n thanks 4 the pm  pm me next tym alsoEmbarrassed

preethis IF-Rockerz

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very nice.. waiting for next part.. PM me...
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hey u defos need to continue but plz can u do it fast thanks xx
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bechaari maanvi...abnd virat is too smart haan...
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i must say u r a vry naughty writer n u hv a quite wild imagination..part 1&2 wre too gud nw hw abt givin us part 3 vry soon..???Wink
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do write another part:)
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hey nice os...plz do pm me whenever u update...
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Part 3

RECAP: Virat let her go and gave her a stern look and stepped out of the bathroom and went to his room and Maanvi just stood there with tears in her eyes "maine asey keh dia tha' uff meri life mein kam tension hai jo main eek boyfriend pe paal liya hai"

Maanvi dried herself and went outside to see everyone just entered the house

Jeevika: hey maanu, how was day

Maanvi thinks to herself 'well my day, I kissed a boy for the first time, I then made him my boyfriend, then again we made out under the water, which btw was beautiful, then he got mad and went away because I refused to give him what he wanted and he got mad and went away'

Jeevika: arey bol na kasey tha tera din

Maanvi: it was good

During dinner Maanvi tried to make contact with Virat but couldn't as he totally ignored her, after dinner when everyone went to sleep Maanvi sneaked into virat's room

Virat was sleeping

Maanvi thinks 'meri needh haram karka khud sou raha hai'

Maanvi goes near virat and sees him, 'he is looking so adorable in his sleep'

Maanvi slowly goes and kisses his check lightly making sure not to wake him up, and she turns around  to go but suddenly virat puts his hand on her arm and makes her fall on top of him

Virat: mujhai pata tha you would come

Maanvi tries to get off of him but again virat puts his hand on her back

Virat: where are you going?

Maanvi: I am going to sleep  

Virat: if you were going to sleep then why did you come in my room

Maanvi: just to see if you were awake or sleeping?

Virat: acha so I m awake'

Maanvi: okay' leave mee

Virat: nai choru ga

Maanvi: I thout you were mad at me

Virat: no I m not

Maanvi: but you went away

Virat: because for a second I got selfish for my own reason I made you do something you didn't want to do I am sorry

Maanvi blushed and put her face in his chest, Virat hugged her tightly

Virat: I love you Maanu

He kissed her head

Maanvi looked up at him: you only di calls me maanu

Virat: no only those people call you maanu who love you a lot'

Maanvi again got shy

Virat: phir se sharam ahgi?

Maanvi looked up at him and kissed him on the lips; it was again her hard kiss on his lips, she put her hands behind his neck and virat started rubbing his hands around her back, Maanvi again stopped the kiss just as it was getting hotter by the moment

Virat breathing heavily: ab' kya' hua

Maanvi: I was' just.. showing.. you I m' not a '. Shy girl

Virat: oh so if I get this reaction every time, I think mein tumhe har baar tumhe sharamili larki kho hoon ga

Maanvi smiles at virat: acha, asey baat hai kya

Virat: yes

Maanvi: leave me, I have to go

Virat: nope

Maanvi starts tickling him and he loses his grip on maanvi's back and she runs away

Virat: ek minute

Maanvi: hmmm

Virat: kal sarey kisses ka shadi mein ja rah hai you don't go

Maanvi: likan mujhey jaana hai

Virat: uff tum na bandariya ki bandirya hi roho gi

Maanvi: aur tum chep ka chep

Virat: bas nai jaana

Maanvi: likan kyun?

Virat: because kal hum donu phir se icecream aur whip cream kha ga' tik hai

Virat winks at Maanvi

Maanvi again get shy

Virat: phir se sharam??

Maanvi: nai'

Then Maanvi also winks at virat and blows a flying kiss and goes to her room and sleeps, but Virat is unable to sleep just by thinking about tomorrow

Virka and Virman were the only people left in the house everyone else had left

Jeevika: maanu tu chal ti toh kitna  maza ayta

Maanvi: maaza toh bhoot ayta

Jeevika: toh phir chal na

Maanvi: toh phir mein jaon?

Jeevika: arey tu kis is pouch rahi hai?

Maanvi: virat se

Jeevika: kya? Kyun?

Virat: bhabhi Maanu ka mutlab hai kay' kayy mein kyun nai saath jara ha

Maanvi: haan yes virat why aren'y you going?

Virat: I have to meet my friend and plus I can not attend two weddings in one week

Viren: kya mutlub?

Virat: meaning I got bored on my own brothers marriage toh phir kiss aur ka wedding pe mera bhoot bura haal ho ga

Viren: and saali g apka kya excuse hai

Maanvi: jiju mera koi excuse nai

Virat eyed Maanvi

Maanvi: I mean I am not feeling well

Jeevika: maanu kya hua'doctor ka pass jaana hai?

Maanvi: arey di asey koi baat nai, I will just sleep and then I will feel better

Virat: yea aur bhabhi mein tu idhar hi hun maanu ka khyal rakna kay liya

Jeevika: that is the second time you called her maanu' and maanu you didn't react, yaad hai na jab ek dafa chachi nay tumhe jab maanu khaha that oh tumne purey ghar ko sar pe chara liya tha' then how come you didn't say anything to virat'?

Viren: is ka kya mutlub?

Jeevika: I mean I only call her maanu and maanu doesn't like it when someone else calls her maanu, she gets really mad'

Maanvi: umm di actually I didn't realize when virat called me maanu, oh chep agli daafa mujhey maanu nai buhlana

Virat makes a face and say "acha" in a sad tone

Viren: I think we should leave jeevika

Jeevika: okay then maanu you take care

Virka leave

Maanvi: Virat don't call me maanu infront di

Virat: but I can't control myself'

Suddenly virat goes to Maanvi and hugs here, Maanvi returns the hug back

Jeevika: MAANUUU

Virman let go of their hug'

Maanvi: ummm didi, you didn't leave yet?

Jeevika: I was just going but I forgot my purse, likan tum donu ka kar raha tha?

Virat clears his throat: ummm bhabhi woh hum na' ummm hum ek dusrey sa

Jeevika: kya dusrey sa?

Maanvi: we were fighting

Jeevika: asey kasey fighting hoti hai?

Virat: yes we were fighting, by'

Horn sounds come outside from virens car

Maanvi: di hum ek dusray ka gaala dubarey tha'.

Jeevika: tsk, when will you to grow up?

Virat: soon bhabhi

Jeevika: acha just don't hurt one another, and virat she is not even feeling well

Virat: g bhabhi

Jeevika leaves this time, virman make sure virka's car has left. Then virat picks Maanvi up in his arms

Maanvi: arey put me down

Virat: nope, you herd bhabhi, she told me to take care of you

Maanvi: but I was never really sick yaad hai na'?

Virat: toh?

Maanvi: toh I can walk

Virat: nhai meri jaan e jaana, aj mein tumhe tumhare haseeen par necha nai rakna doon ga, tumhare per ganda ho jaya ga

Maanvi starts to laugh: tum aur itna flimly? Kasey, you don't even like movies

Virat: I don't but you do' so look oour kitchen has arrived'

Maanvi: is it must hum ice cream aur whip cream ka saath ganda ho?

Virat smirks at her: but my favorite desert ice cream with maanu'sorry sorry sorry ice cream with MY maanu

Maanvi blushes

Virat: don't worry this time we won't make a big mess

Maanvi smiles, virat puts her down on top of the counter and opens the fridge and gets shocked

Virat: our ice cream

 Maanvi: what happened to it?

Virat: it is finished

Maanvi: but till yesterday the box was full

Virat: and look there is no whip cream either'

Maanvi: but even that was full till yesterday

Virat: I know maanu then who on the earth stole our ice cream and whip cream???

Maanvi: It must sholuk

Virat: no it can't be him, he has cold and chachi will not let me eat more than half box of icecream

Maanvi: yea then who?

Virat and Maanvi stared at one another in shock


Any guess who stole thier ice cream and whip cream and beware for the next part as it will be very hot and sexiEmbarrassed, and for all who want a pm I am sending you guess a friend request so it can easy for me to send out pm <3 thanks for the lovely comments' and please comment again! JBig smile

Edited by Mina H - 24 December 2011 at 6:28pm

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