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rev4eva IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Aww it was so sweet for Virat to rush all the way to Manvi... I think Buaji's decision is a blessing in disguise. VirMan can spend more time together alone without being worriedWink

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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 11:13am | IP Logged
pm me on next update.

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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
wowww very nice... waiting for next part... 

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Posted: 30 January 2012 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Aww Poor dem yaar...arghhh dis Bua...she really is gettin on my nerves nw..Angry
loved der hug...Hug
ps: sry 4 being soo late..Embarrassed

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Posted: 01 February 2012 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
arggghh ii hatee buaa too bitss; howw couldd shee doo thaah, buh aftaa all she iss heartless :@
arwwhh virat wheenn all the waay too maanvi's apartmennt just to see if she wass okaaay. 
ii lovee emm updatee soon x

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Posted: 02 February 2012 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
ufff tears in my eyes mannu got nothing to eat i loved it o my god i have read it 7 times and still rading!!!!!!!!!

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RECAP: Maanvi hugs him back: I love you Virat….

Maanvi: but bua g… what will she say?

Virat: she doesn't know

Maanvi: what if she finds out?

Virat: she won't she is probally sleeping right know, and won't you make me enter your house

Maanvi: no I think you should go home right away

Virat: nhai I wana see the 5star apartment bua got you

Maanvi: it is a nice apartment

Virat: move

Maanvi: no I will not move

Virat: fine babe you leave me with no choice

Maanvi: what does that mean?

Virat picked Maanvi up from her bum and came inside her apartment

Maanvi: Virat put me down

Virat slightly put her down on her feet but still held her in his arms tightly from her waist

Virat: I wish you can back to the vadehra house,

Maanvi: me to, acha leave me do you want to drink something

Virat: no i want to eat something
Maanvi: thier is nothing to eat
Virat gets worried: wot you had nothing to eat why didn't you tell
Maanvi: nhai virat i ate some chips
Virat: wot are you trying to say mein apni bhooki sherni ko nhai jaanta, that how hungry you get
Maanvi just smiles at him and virat orders mcdonalds for her and says they guy will be here in about 30minutes

Maanvi: acha choro na

Virat: I ordered micckys for you but nothing for myself cuz wana taste your lips, with that my tummy will go full!

Maanvi goes shy and puts her head on his shoulder

Virat: oh ho phir se sharam ah gi… my sharmili maanu

Maanvi looks up at him: I am not a shy girl

Virat: acha then kiss me

Maanvi: Virat

Maanvi takes her hand and puts it on his eyes and gives a small peck on his lips. And for that one second Virat has loosen his grip on her waist and Maanvi runs out of his embrace

Virat: Maanu not fair come here

Maanvi is running around and Virat is following her. When suddenly Virat trips off of the rug and falls on his back hardly, Maanvi runs back towards Virat and is worried about him

Maanvi: Virat, Virat open you eyes are you fine Virat… Virat say something

Virat had his eyes closed

Maanvi: Virat get up oh my god… Virat

Maanvi got up to get some water and drop it on his face but as soon as she got up Virat held her hand

Maanvi; Virat you are fine… thank god

 Virat gets a huge grin on his face

Maanvi: hawww you were joking asey bhi koi mazak karta hai kya?

Virat smiles: I didn't know you would so worried for me

Maanvi: please Virat don't ever joke like that with me again

Virat: okay

Maanvi gets up and o does Virat tries to get but he feels a shooting pain in his right shoulder and lays back down on the floor

Maanvi: kya hua?

Virat: I don't know my shoulder is hurting

Maanvi: Virat stop it, I said don't joke with me like that

Virat: I am not joking Maanu for real it is hurting

Maanvi gets worried for him: really here let me help you

Maanvi gives Virat her hand and stables him to get up and takes him to the sofa and makes him sit down

Maanvi: I don't have any pain killer Virat, what should I do…

Virat: it's alright I think I just pulled my muscle it will be soon

Virat's phone rings and it is Jeevika's and Virens call

Maanvi answers the phone and tells Jeevika she had just fell asleep and how Virat tripped form the carpet and has hurt his shoulder, Jeevika tells Maanvi to see weather there is a bruise or not and if there is she should apply warm oil on his pain as it will heal faster (okay guyz I don't know if that actually helps or not)! and she also says not to worry about being Virat Home late as everyone is sleeping and shuts the phone

Maanvi: Virat bhoot dard ho raha hai?

Virat: yea… I mean no it is getting better  

Maanvi: di said to check your shoulder and see if there is a burise or not

Virat: nhai Maanvi I have just pulled a muscle it is fine

Maanvi: Virat zid mat karo mujhey dekhna do

Maanvi goes and stands behind him and lightly picks up his shirt, and her cold hand touches the nape of Virat's neck which gives me chills and Maanvi does see a bruise L

Maanvi: Virat tumhey neal (burise) par rah hai… tab hi tum hey itni dard ho rahi hai, di said if I put warm oil on the pain it will heal faster

Virat: you mean to say you don't have a pain killer but you have oil

Maanvi goes to the kitchen and warms oil and goes to Virat

Maanvi: you have to take off your shirt Virat

Virat get very excited: really Maanu how desperately I have waited to hear those words

Maanvi just makes a face at him!
Virat tries to take of his shirt but his shoulder hurts so he is unable to do that

Maanvi: let me help you Virat

Virat smirks at her

Maanvi hesitantly goes near him and lift his right arm and takes his shirt out from his arms first then she  then takes out his shirt from his neck, Maanvi gets stunned for a second because Virat was not wearing anything underneath and she is exposed to his bare chest and his 6 pacs, Virat smirks as he knows what Maanvi is thinking! Maanvi nods her head and goes behind and starts to apply the oil on his shoulder, Virat shivers because her hands are very cold but he knows why they are cold because she is nervous and Virat just loves that about her.

Virat: Maanvi your hand is freezing

Maanvi: woh…oo..orry

Virat: just relax Maanvi my pain is better know you don't have to—

Maanvi: nhai Virat I want too I somewhere feel guilty of you falling down

Virat doesn't say anything else and Maanvi starts rubbing his shoulder with light strokes and her hand is getting warm by rubbing it against his bare skin, Virat feels in heaven by her touch, but Maanvi just wants to make Virat's shoulder to feel better soon after Maanvi's strokes are getting harder and Virat is loving it by every going moment.

Maanvi: is it feeling better know?

Virat is just into the moment and can only whispers: hmmm

Maanvi: should I stop then

Virat: hmm

Maanvi stops the rubbing and Virat realizes he just said something very wrong

Virat: NHAI I mean the front side of my shoulder is also hurting

Maanvi just wanted to make Virat's pain less so she agrees without knowing Virat's naughty reasons!

Maanvi sits on a table infornt of Virat and slowly starts rubbing around his neck and his shoulder

Virat is carefully looking at Maanvi, at her beauty her innocense, her simplicity and totally loves her for that, Virat leans back on the sofa and closes his eyes after a few minutes of more messaging him

Maanvi: Virat is it feeling better?

There was no answer by him "Virat" Maanvi thinks maybe he is sleeping, but he has to go home, if someone gets to know Virat was here it won't be good, but I don't want to wake him up he is even in pain and…

Maanvi just gets lost at staring his bare body his chiseled chest and she slowly takes her hand from his shoulder down to his chest and feels his heartbeat and blushes for some odd reason, then she takes her hand lower on his chest to his nipples and gets very shy and quickly takes her hand off of his body and is about to leave when Virat's holds her hand

Virat: don't stop Maanu

Maanvi: acha toh yeh drama kar ray tha kya?

Virat: don't change the topic

Virat holds her hand and puts it back on his heart

Virat: it is beating just for you

Maanvi looks up at Virat's eyes and gets lost in them

Virat takes her hand down to his abs… Maanvi is still lost in his eyes and…


I hope you guyz like it… and sorry for stopping at a bad point, will update soon! And keep imagining something very very hoottt and yea another thing if you need a pm please send me a buddy request… THANKS for all of the pervious comment!    

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