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SS: Ice-cream and whip cream18+ part 10 page 29 (Page 2)

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its amazingly hawttt..loved it
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Maanvi: I think you should go

Virat: no, let me explain

Maanvi: what will you explain, look just go please

Virat: but let me say what I want to

Maanvi looked down she couldn't stare into virat's eye any more

Virat: I love you

Maanvi: WHAT

Virat: awkward reaction mostly people say I love you back, but you…

Maanvi: ummm, but

Virat: oh come on don't tell me you don't love me

Maanvi: it's is not that

Virat: oh so you do love me

Maanvi: let me finish I mean how can we… like bari maa doesn't like me and

Virat: I don't know if you noticed or not, but I don't really care about what people think

Maanvi: toh main bhi nai sochti

Virat: toh pir…

Maanvi: toh I guess I am your girlfriend

Virat: great

Maanvi: good

Virat: soo

Maanvi: yea so, umm this is fun?!

Virat: yea ummm, why are we feeling so weriod?

Maanvi: maybe because what most people do after being in a relationship we kinda did that before

Virat: oh yea I have a bad habit of doing things before then they suppose to be done

Maanvi: yea same here

Virat: which reminds me

Maanvi: what

 Virat: you are a bad girlfriend

Maanvi: how?

Virat: I helped you clean your ice-cream… but what about the whip cream

Maanvi got shy and looked down

Maanvi: aye hai meri bandariya ko sharam bhi atti hai??

Maanvi: asey baat nhai hai

Virat: acha toh phir… my whip cream…

Maanvi: you won't me to clean it Hannah…

Virat: hmmm

Maanvi: okay then

Maanvi walked towards to Virat with an attitude and in a seductive way

Virat was still staring at her still

Maanvi held his hand and brought him forward, Virat didn't know where she was taking him he didn't even bother look around where she made him stand he was just staring at her, then he felt cold water all over him


Maanvi started laughing: kyun ho gaya na tumhari whip cream saaf??!!

Virat: wait a min

Maanvi was about to run away when Virat caught her by her arm and made her crash into his chest…

Maanvi: Virat…

Virat: kya?

The water was running…

Maanvi: choru mujhey

Virat: nai choru ga… first kiss me

Maanvi: Virat…

Virat: kya virat virat lagi hai… come give me a kiss

Maanvi: main tumhey kiss…

Virat: haan kiss, now stop being this girlish girl…

Maanvi: main girlish girl nai hoon

Virat: toh pir come

Maanvi: acha close your eyes then

Virat: okay, but give me your hand so I will know you won't run away

Maanvi: very bad tum apni girlfriend pe trust nai karta?

Virat: nhai

Maanvi: how rude

Virat: I do, but I just want to hold your hand

Maanvi gives her hand in his hand and Virat closes his eyes

Maanvi stands on her tippy toes and goes and slightly kisses virat's check

Virat opens his eyes with a sad face: yeh kya ha??

Maanvi: tumne toh kaha tha… kiss karo

Virat: not on the checks but the lips you bandariyaa

Maanvi: I am going

Virat: not so fast, I still need my kiss

Maanvi: virat didi must be back home and they must be looking for us

Virat: I don't care  

Maanvi: likan

Virat puts his hand on Maanvi's back and brings her close to him, he lightly picks her up, so Maanvi can easily kiss him… he waits impatiently just looking to maanvi's eyes deeply waiting for the moment when she would kiss him

Maanvi: mujse nai hoga

Virat: Maanvi fine then I won't talk to you

Maanvi: but-

Just as virat was about to Maanvi down he felt her lips crash into his, it wasn't a slow kiss it was fast get set go type kiss… virat was shocked how can Maanvi kiss like that like she was so shy and then able to kiss so hard… Maanvi and virat were moving their lips fast and faster nibbling into each other's lips and their tongue would occasionally meet one another… Virat's hand on maanvi's back were tightly secured on her back… which slowly found their way to her zip and started unzipping it again

Maanvi let go of his lips abruptly: Virat… please

Virat: I love you

Maanvi: I know but this would be a little to much, please try to understand

Virat: but—

Maanvi: but virat please try to understand

Virat: fine

Virat let her go and gave her a stern look and stepped out of the bathroom and went to his room and Maanvi just stood there with tears in her eyes "maine asey keh dia tha… uff meri life mein kam tension hai jo main eek boyfriend pe paal liya hai"


Need another part… comment… and I think ima change the tittle from os to ss! :P love all for commenting! and i know this wasn't an 18+ part but the next one will... or atleast i will try <3Big smileEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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