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Ruchi-interest Goldie

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Posted: 16 January 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Sweetheart do you have any idea what your Ice-cream & Whip-cream has done to my sensesWink, i m shaking, my stomach is fluttering & i m speechless... God u have to deffo. send me a PM otherwise i will turn mad thnk you.

Edited by ruchi245 - 16 January 2012 at 8:15am

DivanIsh IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 January 2012 at 9:02am | IP Logged
awsome awsome...freaking awsome..again a super duper hit part..loved it completely...thanks for the pm btw...update the next part soon and plz pm me
Khushi15 Senior Member

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Posted: 16 January 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Great update..
Plz continue and PM me when u update...
teri-diwani Groupbie

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Posted: 16 January 2012 at 3:21pm | IP Logged
LOVEDDD ITTT <3 <3 pleasee updatee sooonn.. and pm meee <3 <3 mwahxxx
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Posted: 16 January 2012 at 3:31pm | IP Logged

RECAP: Maanvi just smiles at him and he kisses her forehead and goes to his room to sleep while Maanvi sleeps in her room!

Next morning

Jeevika: Maanuu, Maanu, kadir hai tu

Swaini: she must sleeping Jeevika

Dadaji: acha Swaini aj kar breakfast ka order dey do

Maanvi: GOOD morning all,

Maanvi is well dresses in a suit and goes to hug her di and take asherwad form the elders

Maanvi: dadaji I have already ordered your breakfast and the food is waiting for you at the table

Dadaji is impressed but swaini is just more irritated by her trying to take over her or jeevikas duites

Vansika: where is Virat Maanvi

Maanvi: he is at the breakfast table waiting for you

Vansika: arey wah beta, Virat aur time pe table pe wait ker raha hai…

Jeevika is really happy: mera behan boot samjdar ho gi hai

Maanvi just smiles and everone goes to the table and have breakfast together and after breakfast everyone goes to rest. and virmaan go to virkas room!

Viraat: bhai I missed you soo much

Viren: me too

Both of the brothers are lying as both of them were busy with their lady love! :P

Maanvi: di and jiju woh na… wo h … mujhey… nhai nhai Virat ko kuch kehna hai apko

Virka: haan bolu Virat

Virat: me.. NO it is Maanvi who has to say something

Viren: acha Sali saaba bolu

Maanvi whispers to Virat: I thought you were going to say it

Virat whispers back at Maanvi: I can't say it mein larki hoon

Virat: toh main larka hoon… what is the big deal


Viren: guyz if you are just going to fight then leave because we are treid and want to rest

Vimaan: NO

Jeevika: then talk, what it is…

Virat: okay umm bro and bhabhi we are in… love

Viren was drinking water when he choked on it and spit out the water

Viren: WHO IS WE?

Virat holds Maanvi's hand: we bhai me and Maanvi

Jeevika is stunned and looking at them holding hand

Maanvi frees her hand from his hand

Jeevika: Maanvi kya yeh sach hai?

Maanvi: di umm….

Jeevika: BOLU

Maanvi: ji di yeh sach hai

Viren who is still in trauma can't say anything

Jeevika goes and sits down with Viren and taps his shoulder

Jeevika: app tik hain

Virat to Maanvi: agar in donu ka yeh reaction hai toh phir baki ghar waloon ka kya reaction hoga?

Maanvi just giggles: vasey jiju bechara kuch bolu yah soney ka state mein nhai hain

Virmaan both smile at one another

Finally Viren comes back to his senses:  

 Viren: Virat, Maanvi ka tum donu sure ho?

Virat smiles and holds Maanvi's hand again: very very very sure…

Jeevika again stares at them holding hands, and Maanvi tries to free her hand but it is no use as Virat is holding it tightly

Virat: bhabhi mera honey wali biwi ko asey nhai ghur rey

This time Jeevika was drinking water and chocked on it and spit it out

Viren and Jeevika both together say: HONEY WALI BIWI??

Virat: agar ap donu ko itna shock laga raaha then how will you tell other about us

Virka are again in shock and don't say anything or move

Maanvi: I think we should leave

Virat: okay sweetie come lets go

Virmaan leave

And virka look at one another and together say: SWEETY??


I know it is a short update and not the romantic but I still hope you guyz liked it, so please comment and like it! J

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simmy15297 Newbie

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Posted: 16 January 2012 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
it was hilarious cud just imagine virikas facial expression and virman holding hand lol it was to cud u hve to write part 8 quickly can't wait lol xx
teri-diwani Groupbie

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Posted: 16 January 2012 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
OHH MYYY ... LOVEDD ITTT!!!!!  Hahhahaha it wass funnnyy andd cuteee... anddd lovelyyy... waitinggg for the nexttt parttt nowww... yuh betterr posttt it sooonnn... Lovedd ittt.. PM mee when yuh nexxtt updateee .. and thnxxx hahha mwahxxx
zillionaire IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 January 2012 at 3:58pm | IP Logged
pls continue and pm me!

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