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loved the updates...
omg so much of twist...
hate hameer...
but maan came for her rescue but little late and his mishty had to suffer and even he had to...
now the whole world knows abt his love 
that part i enjoyed so much when he claimed geet as his...
feel bad for uttara...
did brij's marriage happen
hope no one got hurt...

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Originally posted by preethia

loved the updates...
omg so much of twist...
hate hameer...
but maan came for her rescue but little late and his mishty had to suffer and even he had to...
now the whole world knows abt his love 
that part i enjoyed so much when he claimed geet as his...
feel bad for uttara...
did brij's marriage happen
hope no one got hurt...

lovely comment...

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                  Part 89


d bullet peirced through d skin..teating d heart apart..taking partners breath along...
n dere came a scream..
...NOOO ...

*************

as d doctor came out of ICU...
every held deir breath waiting for doctors ans...
geet cried - plzz kuch to kahiye...????
dr sighed - m sorry...we couldn't save him...
...
wid dat said dr left from dere leaving every1 in shocks of deir lives...

geet fell on ground wid a thudd...


FLASHBACKS

********

" shut up...just shut up..." screamed hameer not able to bear deir love...
while every1 stood dor motionless lost in deir love...

hameer - agar aisa hai..to ek ko maar ko..dusre ko marne ke liye chhod dena chahiye...kyu...

geet n maan smiled at each other...encircling deir fingers into each other..holding each other tight...

dey stood in front of hameer...like do-wat-u-can...

hameer groaned angrily n pointed his gun on straight on maan...

every1 looked at him horrified..coz dey couldn't possibly take d chance aftr wat he did to uttara...
...
hameer - jante ho maan...mene geet ko kyu kidnap kiya tha...
maan looked at him in shear anger...

hameer laughed - kyunki...me tumhe ussi dard me dekhna chahta tha..jis dard ke sath mene apni adhi zindagi guzar di...

geet cried fearing for maan - mene kya bigada hai tumhara..kyu kar rahe ho ye sab..uttata ne kya bigada tha tumhara...u r bad..u r bad...

hameer got angry - tumne kya bigada...tumhari galti ye hai ke tum mujhe bhool gayi..tumhari galti ye hai ke pehle tumne mujhe khwab dikhaye aur fir unhi khwabon ko tod diya...tumhari galti ye hai ke tumne apna wada todkar is maan se pyar kar liya...

geet was frustarted wid his non sesible talks...

hameer - ab bhi nahi yaad aaya...me wohi chhota bachha hun...jisse tum apne bachpan me beach par mili thi..yaad hai tumhe..me ro raha tha...aur tumne aakar mujhe kaha tha..ke aise rokar kuchh hasil nahi hota...babaji ne sabke liye koi na koi banaya hota hai...

geet looked at him horried..clutching maan closer..as she remebered her childhood...

hameer continued - tumne kaha tha..ke meri zindagi me bhi koi aisa jaroor aayega..jo mujhse sabse jyada pyar karega..jo mujhpar apni jaan tak nochhavar kar dega...kaha tha tumne...

geet closed her eyes...dat kid was so innocent..n dis is a real monster...

hameer - isme meri kya galti hai..ke us pal ke baat mujhe tumse pyar ho gaya...us chhoti si umra me mujhe sirf tum hi dil ki achhi lagi...to fir ab tum mujhse pyar kyun nahi karti...tum apni hi baton se mukar gayi..haan geet...

geet shouted dis time - shut ur non sense...ab mujhe afsos ho raha hai..ke bachpan me mere ek achhayi ne aaj mera presense kharab kar diya...tum ro rahe the..kyunki koi tumhare paas nahi tha...tab mene tumhe kaha tha..ke zindagi me wo insan jarur aayega..jo sirf tumhare liye bana hoga..jo tumhe tumse bhi jyada pyar krega...mujhe wo insan mil gaya...wo mere maan hai...

said geet pulling maan closer while her eyes were spitting fire on hameer...

maan looked at geet wid so much emotional he couldn't count...
d way she claimed him was beyond imagination...only his geet can do dat...

hameer looked at her painfully..

but geet continued - aur tum hi socho..is pagal uttara ne tumhare liye apni jaan de di...kyuuu

hameer looked away angrily...

every1 was shading tears while maan was lost in his mishty...

geet - muh fer lene se sach badal nahi jayega..kyunki ye wohi insan thi jo tumhare liye bani thi..aur tum ne apne humsafar ki hi jaan le li...pyar wo hota hai..jo ek dusre ke liye jaan de sake..jis tarah uttara ne kiya...na ki jaan le..jo tumne kiya...arre tum kya samjhoge..sachha pyar kya hota hai..sachha pyar to iss ladki ne kiya tha..tumse...par tumne ussi ki jaan le li...sachha pyar tumhari zindagi me aaya tha hameer..par tum pehchan nahi paye...aur kho diya usse...

said geet..as d tear made deir out...

she hugged maan tight n hide her face into his neck n started to cry feeling emotionally charged...

hameer looked away angrily...

no..she is lying...she want to be free from me..dats why she is lying...
...
maan pulled get more close into his embrace n giving his warmth..n soothing her...

maan - jaan..u vil not cry more..u get me...?

geet nodded her head into his embrace..still whimping like a cute kid...

maan chukled - jhooti...

geet smiled wid tears into him embrace hugging him even more tight...

dis is LOVE...

...
" shooot " dere came a peircing sound bringing every1 back from maneet land...
gang just wanted to take out d hell out dis psycho...

maan kept geet secure in his arms n looked at hameer wid his peircing eyes...
he havn't forgot yet..dis man had slapped his geet...

dis man had tried to touch maan's geet..tried to hurt maan's angel...

no way MAAN SINGH KHURANA..gonna leave him dat easily...

**********

" aur nahi geet...ab aur nahi..." said hameer wid angry tone making geet more confused...
just know she had tried to make him understand n again dis...

oughhh...

hameer - agar tumhe lagta hai..tumhari ye sab baten sunakr..me tumhari zindagi se chala jaunga..to tum galar ho...uttara ko mene nahi kaha tha mujhse payr karne ke liye...ye uska faisla tha..jiski saza usse mili...

uttara's dad cried in tears - wo tumse payr karti thi..kam se is baat ki to kadar ki hoti meri beti ko marne se pehle..tumhe tumhara apna kehnewala kabhi koi nahi milega...dekh lena tum..koi nahi...

leher instanly hugged her dad..n both cried n cried...

hameer - just shut d hell every1..i dnt want anymore drama...
...
" ye sab kya ho rah hai..." shouted mr rizvi (hameer's father) as he approched dere aftr getting called by commissioner...

hameer - ohh dad..thnk god u r here...do u want to meet geet...

mr.rizvi - just shut up hameer n put d gun down...

hameer smiled - its time geet...get ready to loose maan...

geet looked at him horrified as she saw him putting his finger on d tab n press it...

" NOOO..." 
..

dere came a big scream as hameer shoot n d bullet ran straight peircing d heart of d heartfull person named RANBIR...

" ranbirrr..." screamed nisha in shock of her life as she saw him falling down in front of maan..in d whirlpool of blood...

n dere he fell down...

******

taking d chance..maan ran forward n hit his long foot right over hameer's hand..snapping d gun away...

hameer just looked at maan shocked..but soon his expressiosn changed as terrifying as he saw maan's burning eyes...

hameer tried to move back but maan just held his collar in 1 hold n dere came a horrible slap right on his cheek...making his lip blood furiously...

hameer almost feel like fainting wid d single slap...

but maan had no intension to stop...

dis bloody man had tried to lay his dirty eyes on maan singh khurana's geet...
just how dare he...

dare came 1 more slap on his other cheek wid d back of maan's palm...n hameer fell on ground in d river of blood...

d slaps had been horrible so far ever seen...

" meri GEET ko chhuva tumne...maan ki geet ko..." screamed maan in his worst horrible voice possible..scaring d hell out of every1...

. dere came a tight punch of maan's foot right in hameer's stomach..making him vomit blood...

hameer lied dere half fainted...

every1 begged him to stop along including commissier(who was scared as well) and mr.rizvi ( who knew maan well)...

but no1 could stop maan...

d only voice dat could stop maan was silent...

maan pulled hameer half dead body up n looked at his bleeding face...
but d anger n frustartion inside him was nowhere near going...

maan loooked at geet who was silently looking at ranbir...

her pain..angered maan more...

n maan hit his head badly over hameer..making hameer falls back n faint completely...

maan moved forward n dere he hit his ankle angrily in hameer's heart...

d hit was so hard dat hameer almost choked to breath..spitting bleed furiosly...

maan looked at hameer's hand wid which he had slapped geet...

n dere came a tight stab of maan's ankle right on d ankle on hameer..almost breaking it...

hameer screamed in pain every time..maan punched him...

maan again picked hameer's body up n pushed it over d wall..making him still stand...
n dere came a tight stab on maan's foot as maan took a passionate turn n hit his foot on hameer's body aimlessly...

hameer fall on floar blooding every inch of his body...

maan was about to go further wen he felt d painfull n tear voice of his jaan...
...

maan instanly looked at geet only to find her state horrible...

geet was silent...she had bcum statue watching ranbir lying in front of her wid bullet in his heart...

nupur mayank annie ran to ranbir while rano mhinder n leher's family ran to uttara...
dey tried ti shake uttara but she was long gone...

her parents cried in pain n not able to believe took her from dere...

nisha had long fallen of her knees in front of ranbir...

ranbir knew..dere is hardly chance of him to be saved...

maan went to geet n cupped her face to bring her back to her senses...

as geet came back to her senses...

she chocked in her breath- maan...maan...ranbir..maan...

both to ran to ranbir...

he smiled at every1 wid all his heart...

nisha was so much in shock dat..her tears where falling continuously n she didn't even realize...

nupur started to cry - ranbir...

mayank - we need to take him to hospital now...

nisha looked at mayank in hope..but her hopes fly away when ranbir stopped mayank from picking him up...

mayank looked at ranbir confused..but ranbir smiled n shook his head in NO...

mayank - tu pagal ho gayahai..hum tujhe kuchh nahi hone denge...

geet - ye sab meri vajah se ho raha hai...ranbir im sorry...

ranbir smiled at geet...

for once he wanted to confess how much he loved her...all his life...

he wanted to let her know..he had alwz loved her wid all his purity n innocence...

he smiled as he rembered how every1 was used to wak him wen he wud speak non sense...

ranbir wid all his power trying to speak - finaly tum logon ko mujhse chhutkara mil jayega guys...

every1 was crying bitterly...

nisha started to to cum reality... -  plzz ranbir..we can save u..plzzz...

ranbir made funny face - kya yaar..nishu..tujhe kitni baar bola hai..tu rote huye bahot..(his body was giving lot of pain) bahot buri lagti hai...

no1 was understanding how to deal wid it...

ranbir - nishu..aaj hi suabah mene gadi me kuchh bolata yaad hai...ke agar me mar gaya to tum logon ka kya ho ga...

geet started to cry n looked away...

nisha looked down cryng bitterly...

ranbir continued - etni jaldi timne aa jayega..pata nahi tha yaar...

mayank - aise kyu bol raha hai yaar...

ranbir - mayank..i vil miss u yaar...

tears rolled out of mayank's eyes - im gonna miss u more...

ranbir giggled gently - par..aab teri is bhootni ko tujhe akele hi jhelna hoga...

nupur cried looking away..trying not to show it to ranbir...

ranbir - ab tujhe marne ke liye..koi aur dhundna padega nupur...

nupur cried - ranbir plzzz...

annie smiled wid tears - u r d best buddy u know dat...

ranbir - kya yaar..jate waqt to koi sach bol do...aaj bhi sab ke sab fek rahe hai...

every1 giggled wid tears...

nupur cried - i hate u for doing dis...

ranbir so much wanted to cry..his heart was terribly feeling heavy...
like his heart was not capable of taking d wt of dat bullet..or dose tears from every1 eyes were worst compare to bullet..he was not able to bear dose tears...

ranbir made angry face - tum log mujhe aise wida karoge...

maan couldn't hold himself back - ranbir..tumne kyu kiya aise..mere liye..apni jaan...

ranbir smiled - tumhare liye nahi maan..is gudiya ke liye...

geet looked at hameer wid teary n guilty eyes...

ranbir smiled - aise rotadu shakal mat bana...haan geet...tumhe apna maan chahiye tha..aur mujhe tumhari khushi...aur koi rasta mujhe dikha hi nahi...

geet cried ..hiding her face into maan's shoulder...
while gave a look of assurance at ranbir...even his eyes filled wid dere frndship...
...
instantly ranbir started to cough n spit blood...
every1 looked at him horrified...

nisha cried - ranbir..r u ok...

ranbir controled himself - dis tastes..awfull yaar...

geet - plzz dnt do dis ranbir...

ranbir - vil u give me a promise geet...

geet nodded her head in yes while nisha looked away in tears...

ranbir put his hand over hers n took maans hand over his - me chahta hun..ke dum dono humesha khush raho...maan..meri geet ko duniya me sabse jyada pyar dena...

maan nodded his head..filling very miserable of all dis...

ranbir suddenly made litle naught face - warna...humari sherni..tumhe bahot pareshan karegi...

geet made baby angry face wid tears n slightly waked ranbir as deir habit...

ranbir wined in pain n geet pulled her hand away n again started to cry...

ranbir rolled his eyes - vil u all stop now..sab ne cry baby face bana rakha hai...

every tried to put d fake smile on deir faces but failed miserably...

ranbir - nishu...

nisha looked at him wid pain but still smiled - hmmm...

ranbir - vil u say it once...n last...

he almost pleaded...

nisha couldn't hold back herself n shouted wid all her heart...

" I LOVE U...i love u ranbir...i love u madly..i alwz hav...u alwz considered me as a frnd..but for me..u r everything..i love more dan anything..ur not loving me cnt decrease my love for u...plzz dnt go away..plzz dnt leave me..plzz...i need u..to fight..to laugh..to irritate...to pick me up..to hug me..to love..me...i love u ranbir..i really do..."

said nishu wid all her heart..making every1 bcum surprise like anything...

geet smiled wid tears coz she alwz knew...


Have You ever loved someone
But knew they didn't care?
Have You ever felt like crying
But Knew you'd get no where?

Have you ever looked into their eyes 
And said a little prayer?
Have you ever looked into their hearts
And wished that you were there?

Have you ever felt their heartbeat,
When the lights were turned down low?
Have you ever whispered "God, I love You"
But you'll never let me show?

Love is grand, yet it hurts so much.
The price you pay is high.
If I could choose between Love and Death,
I'd rather choose to die.

So do not fall in love, my friend,
It doesn't pay a dime.
It only causes broken hearts,
Yet it happens all the time.

So do not fall in love, my friend,
You'll hurt before it's through.
I ought to know, my friend -
I fell in love with you.


ranbir felt litle relief dat atleast dis gal loved him...sumwhere he alwz knew...
but he never wanted to give her false hope..as he had long given his heart to geet...
ranbir smiled at her n took her hand in his.placing it over him lips...gave a small peck...

nisha smiled full heartedly...
...
n wid dat ranbir closed his eyes wid a smile of satisfaction...


***************

FLASHBACKS ENDS...


****************

geet was on her knees in d corridor of hospital shedding tears wen nisha stood in fornt of her...

geet looked at her n instanly risng up..hugged her tightly...

nisha didn't hug her back...

geet broke d hug n looked at nisha wid pain...

but nisha smiled bitterly...n asked...

" R U HAPPY NOW GEET...."

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