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Love Beyond Limits !! THREAD 3 pt 91 pg 128 (Page 52)

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very nice and very interesting mishty, thanks a lot and sorry for delay was out of station

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if hammer touches her i will surely kill him vd my bare hands and uski chhote chhote tukde kar dungi...pls dont do anything to geet...hameer kamine u kidnapped geet and ab shana ban ke sabke saath baat kar raha hai...

pls dont do anything to geet...whts her fault if a psycho loves her...
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lovely n awesome Part. ...
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nice
kuch karna mat ab geet k sath main nai ek part main parha tha geet say k woh shadi k baad do din tak soti rahey gi plzz asa kuch mat karn

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Originally posted by maanmeet1

if hammer touches her i will surely kill him vd my bare hands and uski chhote chhote tukde kar dungi...pls dont do anything to geet...hameer kamine u kidnapped geet and ab shana ban ke sabke saath baat kar raha hai...

pls dont do anything to geet...whts her fault if a psycho loves her...

hm...may be d cuming update vil give d ans for ur question...


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                 Part 84


as gals left...maan took a deep breaths n sighed in relief..bachh gaya...
...
but a worried thought came to his mind..." where r u jaan <3 ..."

...
annie n nisha made deir way to stage while nupur went to boys...
...
ranbir - kidhar reh gaye the yaar tum log..aur baki ki pagal auraten kahan hai...
his joke didn't bring anger in nupur who was litle worried..litle annoyed..
nupur - yaar..geet kamre me bhi nahi hai...humne usse pure kamre me dekha..yahan bhi kahin nazar nahi aa rahi..dance ka time nazdik aa raha hai...pata nahi kahan gayab ho gayi hai...
ranbir paying attnecion - tum logon ne har kamre me dekha..shayad wo kuchh lene gayi..kuchh kaam ho...
nupur - nisha aur annie wohi puchhne rano aunty ke paas gaye hai...ke kahin unhone usse koi kaam to nahi de diya...
hameer worried - uska cell try karo na...
mayanl - relax guys..tum sab etne hyper kyu ho raha hai...shadi ka ghar hai..usse 100 kaam honge..un har waqt hum logon ke sath gappe to nahi ladati rahegi na...dnt disturb her...
nupur - i think u r right...
...

rano - nahi beta...mene to geet to koyi kaam nahi diya..dekho na yahin kahin hogi...said rano lightly as annie n nisha asked her abt geet...
annie - aunty hum uske rom me bhi gaye the..par wo room me bhi gaye the..par wo wahan bhi nahi hai...
rano welcumed sum guests n den cuming back - arre beta...yahain kahin hogi..etna bada function..kaun kahan hai..kuchh pata nahi chal raha...shayad ghar ke andar gayi hogi..kisi kamre me kuchh kaam ho usse...
nisha - par wo kisi ko batakar bhi nahi gayi...
uttara came to dem - uska cell try kar lo..pata chal jayega kahan hai...
annie sighed - uska cell switch off hai...
rano assuringly - uttara beta...ab me to yahan se nahi hat sakti..tum in dono ke sath jakar ghar me dekho lo...geet kahan hai...
uttara smiled - ok aunty..me dekh leti hun...waise bhi dance ka time bhi ho raha hai...
rano - dance..kaisa dance...

annie n nisha looked at uttara angrily..
uttara istantly cleared - nahi kuchh nahi..me to awehi bakwas kar rahi thi..me geet ko dekhti hun..
wid dat all gals left hurriedly...b4 rano could ask anything...

...

maan searched for her all over d wedding area..but geet was nowhere...

a sudden urge to see her..a sudden fear not able to see her...a sudden need to hold her...a sudden wish to check if she is alright..a sudden want to watch her smiling face..a sudden anger..not having her closer..a sudden annoyance of her hide n seek game..a sudden worry of her well being..a sudden sigh..she must be busy sumwhere...a sudden thought.." he want to his geet right now.." ran through his mind..making him restless...

he searched and searched...but couldn't find her...
he searched every corner outside but geet was nowhere...
not having any other option..he again made his way into house..knowing she must b dere...

...

shweta came to karan worried n annoyed...
shweta - karan kitni der aur...reception ceremany kuchh der me khatam ho jayegi...geet aur baki sab kahan hai...its time for d surprise dance...
karan in consoling tone - relax shweta..let me check on boys...
shweta -alright..n i vil check wid gals...
wid dat both left...
...
nisha n annie reacher to other gang
annie - aunty ko bhi nahi pata...
ranbir annoyed - yaar ye ladki bol ke nahi ja sakti...eska cell bhi nahi lag raha hai...
hameer consoled him - relax ranbir..she must be here sumwhere...
nupur - na kamre me hai..na yahan  kahin...
nisha - ghar me kahan dhundenge usse...
mayank - guys relax..thodi wait karte..wo aati hi hogi..uske bhai ki reception...wo etni carelessly nahi avoid karegi...
nisha - i guess..mayank is right...usse kuchh kaam aa gaya hoga...aur waise bhi abhi thodi der hai..wo aati hi hogi...
annie - ranbir...hum ek baar ghar me jakar dekh aate hai...
ranbir - alright...
nupur - ok..hum log yahan sambhal lete hai...agar geet yahan aayi...we vil call u...
annie - alright..
wid dat annie n ranbir left into d house...
...
just den karan n shweta joined boys...
shweta worried - where d hell r u guys...its time for d dance...
nupur rolled her eyes - arre pata ye yaar..par ye geet kahin nazar nahi aa rahi hai...
karan - wattt..dnt tell me tum logo ne abhi tak geet se contact nahi kiya...
hameer - kaise contact kare yaar...na wo kahin dikh rahi hai..uska celll bhi off aa raha hai...
karan confused - u ??
hameer - im hameer rizvi...deir classmate..
karan n shweta smiled at him..shaking deir hands...
karan - watever..but geet ko jaldi dhundo bcoz she is d 1 who is gonna announce abt dance specially for leher n brij...
shweta - exatcly...agar geet time par stage par nahi aayi...den its gonna b a flop...
nisha worried - no yaar..we hav worked so hard...where dat idiot is...oughhh
shweta - did u check in her room..??
nupur rolled her eyex - ofcorse we did..wo wahan bhi nahi hai...
shweta - oughhh...jo bhi karna hai jaldi karo..but geet should be on stage in next 15 min...
karan - yup..we can hamndle uptill deir...
wid dat karan n shweta left...behind worried gang...

...

a restless maan made his way in kitchen aftr checking almost all rooms...
but geet was not dere..as alwzz...
maan sighed in tension.." where is geet...may be wo bahar reception area me chali gayi hogi...uska cell bhi mere paas hai..usse contact kaise karoo...cell on kar deta hun..shayad usse apne cell ki yaad aaye..aur wo cell par call kare..."
thinking so maan tried to switch on her cell...but it wasn't happening...
dat made maan confused..he opened cell only to find no battery in...
maan was more confused wid dat..y vil she keep battery off cell...dats ridiculous..y vil geet do sumthing like dat...

it started to make him more restlessness...while d urge to see her once..atleast once..to check she is fine..started to get stronger n stronger ...
like sum kind of thurst..dat only her smell can reduce...
like his throat felt dry n her sweet talk can only refill it...
a stronger feeling to find her right now...entered his mind...n he knew..wat he needed to do...
he was about to leave d kitchen wen annie entered kitchen wid ranbir...

annie n ranbir looked at maan confused...while man wasn't expecting dis...
annie confused - bhai aap yahan...
maan was not at all knowing..how to answer n wat to ans...but he played along..
maan - oughh..yaa...i was...i was searching for u only...me kabse tumhe dhund raha hun...par tum bahar dikhi hi nahi...so i thought of searching u here...
annie - mujhe..kyun bhai...
maan - kyu...oughh...wo haan wo actually dadi maa tumhe puchh rahi thi...
annie rolled her eyes - dadi maa bhi na..nwz...actually bhai..me meri frnd geet ko dhund rahi hun...
ranbir - yaah..pata nahi wo kahan chali gayi hai...
" wat do u mean...?? " came a sudden n angry voice from maan's lips...
annie n ranbir looked at him confused...
maan instantly calmed himself - imean...wat do u mean...usike bhai ki reception hai...aur tum logo ki dost..u should know where she is...
annie - yaah..par wo pata nahi kahan hai..uske room me dekh..aunty ko bhi nahi pata...humne socha ghar me kahin hogi...to bas...
maan instantly - matlab...wo bahar bhi nahi hai...
ranbir - bahar bhi matlab..kya wo ghar me nahi hai...
maan instnly covered himself - i didn't mean dat..i mean..she should be out..u guys check her..n den annie u cum to dadi n me..got dat...
annie rolled her eyes - yup bhai...
ranbir - but..y were u searching annie in kitchen...
confused maan - oughh..dar asal..mujhe yahan se kuchh awaz aayi..to mujhe laga ke..koi yahan...i mean..
annie - ok ok bhai..hum samaj gaye..abhi hum ja rahe geet ko dhundna hai..waqt bahot kam hai...
saying so ranbir n annie left hurriedly..
leaving behind a worried and restless maan...

...

karan n shweta were worried sick...
shweta - we cnt wait for geet anymore...we hav to do it..
karan - u r right...let give d announcement..we cnt wait for her anymore...
karan n shweta went to stage n announced a beautyfull n romantic sasla dance for d couple leher n brij...
every was heavenly surprised n happy wid d surprise dance...
while brij was on 9th cloud to dance wid his new bride..n leher was blushing like anything...but was too happy...

every1 left d stage...n lights went off...
sum bright spot lights created deir magic on stage in d form of romantic environment...
brij n leher were holding each other wid all deir love n trust in each other...
guests lovingly relsihed d romantic dance of newly married couple...while brij n leher enjoyed every bit on each other...

...

maan not bothering to think of anything else..barged inot geet's room again...
restless worried sick...like a thursty wampire for his blood...
maan started to search for geet madly...
he wanted to see her..he wanted her right now...
no having his geet closer..made his fear...
where is she...ho she vanished all of a sudden..how to contact her..
he was not at all understanding anything...
he checked everywhere in her room madly...wen his eyes fell on sumthing...
sumthing he couldn't believe...
he bent on his knees...to hav a closer look...
n his eyes saw a closer veiw of
...
...d RING...


...
...d ring he gifted his geet in d morning..n took d promise from her dat she vil never remove it...
she had promised  dat never ever she vil remove it...
d how..
how dis ring can be here..on d floar..where is d owner finger of dis ring...
he knows his geet..she can never remove it...never ever like she promised...
what is happening..wat is it he missing...
n den it striked his heart like a peircing needle...
..

WHERE IS GEET ... ???
...

...

as d romantic music ended...
leher gently rested her head on brij chest..n d lights came back..brightening d area completely...
brij n leher looked at each other n smiled...
but deir beautifull eye-lockk was short lived wen d heard an extremely angry young maan..shouting in his worst dangerous voice possible...
...
every looked in shock of deir life...
wen dey saw...
dey saw...D MAAN SINGH KHURANA...

coming deir wid his red murderious eyes...n dangeroulsy angry looks..walking like a hungry lions...making his way towrds d stage...
...
n rano heart stopped wen she saw maan singh khuaran standing right in front of her wid such a dangerous condition...

"MAA...GEET KAHAN HAI...??? "

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                 Part 85


rano's heartbeat stopped wen she saw maan singh khuaran standing right in front of her wid such a dangerous condition...
MAAN wid killing dangerous voice - MAA...GEET KAHAN HAI...???

...
MAA...
d word maa made rano looked at maan wid widened n shocking eyes...
nothing made sense...
like everyhting just messed in matter of second...
did he just call me MAA...or i assumed...
maa...maan singh khurana called me MAA...y it sounded same as geet's ...
omggg
is he...
is he d 1...meri geet jisse pyar karti hai kahin wo...
isne mujhe ma kehke kyu...
oughhh she was so so so confused...to making any sense...
rano barely spoke - maan bete...
wid dat maan held her shoulder tightly...like a child held his mother tightly wen he is feared of sumthing...
rano could feel d fear n concern in dat hold..it was tight..but it wasn't hurting...
n maan spoke again...
maan wid restlessness - maa...mene puchha geet kahan hai...??
a tear of pain..formed in his eyes...
rano scared to see his painfull fearfull restless teary eyes...
every present in d function was shocked n confused...
leher n brij too stood dere wid confusion...
while all d gang came running towrds d stage...
dev n naintara wer equally shocked..while dadi who kew..everything..was worried wid maan's situation and geet's absense...
mohinder came forward...
mohinder - maan bete...aap thik to hai...aap geet ke bare me yu...
maan left rano n held mohinder's hand tightly - MERI GEET KAHAN HAI...??
...
dat was it...
every guest stood up in shock of deir life...
MAAN SINGH KHURANA called sum gal as his...
is he in love...
wattt
D MAAN SINGH KHURANA is in love...who is d lucky gal...crowd started to chat in between demselves...
but silenced at once wid single threatening glare from maan...
leher family..rano mohinder brij n all d gang looked at him in shock like current...
ranbir was not at all wanted to believe..he only knows how much he admire geet...
watching her wid sum1 else vil kill him...
though he never dared to confess his love to her...
but his heart know she is d only 1 who can win dis heart...
he loved her..alwzzz...from dnt know know how long...
n now..sum1 maan singh khurana..came from nowhere claiming geet as his...
oughhh...wat is happening...

annie stood dere motionless wid dis small peice of information...
her bhai is in love wid geet..n she never knew...
how can dat be possible..annie looked at dadi wid confusion..but d smile n concern on dadi's face said it all...
she looked at maan disappointed...doesn't she deserve to know...
y dis all was hidden from her...
d whole gang was disappointed wid dis new information...
geet cnt be possibly hide dis from dem...how can she do dis...
dey all never hide anything..den y geet,...
dnt she trust dem enough to share such a importnt part of her life...
dnt she consider us as best frnd...dnt dey deserve to know...
watever geet did was wrong..she didn't trust in deir frndship...
its not dat dey r not happy for her...
geet n maan singh khurana together...dat vil be d best news possible...

but...
geet...y she hide it...just y...
...
rano's eyes filled wid happiness...love..care..excitement...
he is d 1...finally she met her daughter's prince...
her happiness had no bounds...
she alwz believe her daughter's choice..but now knowing dat its maan..made her heart jump in happiness...
while...
mohinder was still in confusion...
wat did maan mean by meri geet...
r dey in relationship..
how can dat be...
its not dat he is not happy...dis vil b d best he wud ask for his geet...
geet getting married to d MAAN SINGH KHURANA...
wat can be better dan dis...
but den..how cum he dnt know anything about dis...
mohinder tried to calm maan...
mohinder - maan..aap shant ho jayiye...hum reception ke baad..ba...
maan lost it now...but dere was still his anger hav  d right as a son..

maan angrily yet restlessly shouted - geet nahi mil rahi hai...aur aap reception khatam hone ki baad baat karenge...
maan's anger and restless face scared mohinder...
rano came forward tried to calm maan...
rano - maan bete...aap yunhi pareshan ho rahe hai...geet yahin kahin hogi..shadi ka mahaul isliye...
mohinder cut her - rano...tum mujhe bataogi kya ho raha hai...
maan was in no condition to give any answer...
all he wanted to see his geet...
he eyes were continuously searching for a single glimpse for his geet...
his body was shaking wid restlessness...
she was like a drug to his...not having her was waking d monster inside him...
his eyes were getting red n more terrified...
rano closed her eyes n opened in a sec...
..
rano - " geet aur maan ek dusre se pyar karte hai..."
..
every1 looked at rano wid shocking n wide eyes along wid mohinder..who was confused to smile or scare...
scared bcoz..he was not just sum1..he was maan singh khurana...no 1 businessman in india...dnt know how many companies he possess out of india...
he is d most wanted person in society...
how can he like their geet...their idiot n mad geet...
all d gang was in shock n definitely angry n disappointed wid geet...
while nisha painfully looked at ranbir..whose eyes filled in tears of pain...
hav he lost his geet...
not being strong enough to confess his love towrds geet...he lost geet...
she love sum1 else... she is sum1's life...
he was happy too at d same time..to see sum1 loves geet so madly..n dat sum1 is not just sum1 but d most popular 1...how much of love n happiness he vil give to geet...
he was definitely happy for geet..he respect her love...but sumwhere..loosing geet made his heart die wid pain...
...
mohinder litle sternly - aur tum ye sab mujhe ab bata rahi ho rano...
he felt awkward to be like dis in front of all relatives...everyhting was so open...n...
rano looked down...
she was about to reply wen she heard strong and dangerous voice of maan singh khurana...
every1 looked at maan...
who started speaking on cell...
maan looked at drama n felt like he is here dieing every passing sec and dey all r interested in explainations n all...
not wasting time..he instantly called commisioner of delhi...
...
maan - hello...me MAAN SINGH KHURANA bol raha hun...i want u here wid all ur experts team..as my fiance is missing...note d address n make it fast...

wid dat he cut d call aftr giving address...
d fiance word gave every another shock...
deir daughter is engaged..watt..and dey dnt know...
just wat d hell is happening...

...
leher's parents came dere litle angrily - mohinder bhai sahab..bachho ki shadi me yun police aayegi to achha nahi lagega...

rano wid worried face - maan...geet yahin kahin hogi...hum ghar me dekh kar aate hai...

a tear of scream rolled from maan's eyes - maa..mene pure ghar me dekh liye..wo kahin nahi hai..uska cell mujhe kamre me mila jiski battery bhi missing hai...aur ( he took out d ring from his pocket) te dekhiye...(he said painfully)...mene aaj usse ye ring pehnayi...usne kaha tha ke wo is ring ko apni ungali (finger) se kabhi nahi nikalegi..ye uske kamre me farsh par padi thi..kya meri geet aisa kar sakti hai...nahi na...maa...mujhe geet chahiye abhi isi waqt...chahe iske liye mujhe puri duniya talash karni pade...( d anger was visible in his eyes)..maan singh khurana apni geet ko dhund ke hi rahega...kyunki usse mujse koi door nahi rakh sakta...
...
every1 actually started to fear now...
wat does maan mean by geet is nowhere..where can she go..
n y she removed dat ring..y d battery of her cell is missing...
mayank ranbir nisha annie nupur who all were busy blaming geet now started to get worry for her...
yes it is true dat dey r not able to find her from so long time...
where is geet...how can she vanished all of a sudden...
nupur - hum sab sath me hi the..par usne kaha ke usse kuchh kaam hai..aur wo chali gayi..uske baad se mene abhi tak use nahi dekha...
rano mohinder n brij heart started to scare now...
while maan was gathering all information carefully..he didn't want to miss anything...
any clue dat vil lead to his geet...
he cnt bcum weak at dis moment..he has to find his geet...
if nothing wrong happened..still he needs her now...
rano cam forward wid fear - nahi dekha matlab..meri geet kahan hai...
mohinder - rano shant ho jao..bachhi ko kuchh nahi hoga...
rajji came deir crying - mumma kya huva di ko...
leher n brij consoled her...
...
maan thought of sumthing n made another call...
maan on call - maan singh khurana here...mujhe abhi aur is waqt blackberry ki new battery chahiye..at dis address...
n he cut d call...

...

hands tied at d back fo chairs..legs tied wid legs of chair...
and mouth was also covered so dat she couldn't speak..
dere she was...
maan ki geet...lied dere in half unconscious state...
as she got litle bit of senses..she opened her eyes slowly..she was still feeling dizzy...
she found herself in sum unknown place...it was too weired and dangerous place to comprehend...
she tried to think wat happened...
...
as she got msg from uttara..she went upstairs..as she went in her room...
she looked around but dere was no sign of her...
" uttara...uttara...r u dere.."..called geet but still no reply came...
geet shook her head n dialled uttara's number...
she was abt to put d speaker on her ear...sumthing came to her face...
d smell was yukkk...
everything happened so suden..dat she couldn't hink...
she felt dizzy in sec and she fell unconscious...
..
n now as she has opened her eyes...she looked around but dere was no1...
'' mmm...mmm..." ,  geet tried to speak..but d cloth on her mouth didn't let her...

tears of fear formed in her eyes...as she felt very scared in such a weired place all alone...
she tried to think..but nothing made sense...
she tried to see for her cell.but none was dere...
she felt sumthing weired...like sumthing importnt missing...
dats wen he eyes fell on her empty finger...
her eyes widened in shock..where is ring...

WHERE IS D RING...
ohh godd...where is my ring..i hav promised my maan dat i vil never removed it..who removed it...
where im..wat is happening...
where vil i search for ring...
just wat m i to do...
geet closed her eyes in pain n fear and she remembered her last reply to maan...
...
wen she had texted maan..." ...* wid a naughty face*...MERA INTEZAR KARNA..."

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