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Love Beyond Limits !! THREAD 3 pt 91 pg 128 (Page 31)

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Originally posted by maaneet5

hi angel nice update
and i love this bannar very much
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Originally posted by sunaina23

Smilehi!!!! mishty i just love ur ff..i was a silent reader of this ff on the discussion board of geet facebook... can u tell me how many parts more to reach that part where u stopped at the discussion board!!! im very eager to know wat happens next!!!!! :)

hii sunaina...

glad to know u sed to read my posts in discussion board.vil soon reach wid fresh parts...
n thnqq so much for ur appreciation...

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             Part 81


maan smiled n took her into his embrace..holding her never to apart...
both closed deir eyes..hearing each other heart beat beating in same tone..
maan gently whispered - jaan...
geet lost in his arms - hmm...
maan - u vil never remove it...
geet hugged him more tightly - never ever...
maan smiled n pulled her into more embrace...

**************

d ladki wale soon reached d place..d bride was taken inside to get ready for d wedding ceremany...
as obvious...cousins good at nothing were busing roaming here n dere..giggling...enjoying d wedding..
leher's dad joined mohinder to welcum guests
while leher's mother helped rano in checking if everything is in place...
karan n shweta were having a genuous look on everything going around..coz could afford to hav single mistake...not just bcoz of d matter of reputation...but dey all hav bcum so good frnds..dey wanted to make it successfull heartly...
karan's eyes were madly searching for anwesha..while shweta was waiting for all d gang to cum out...

...
annie nupur and nisha banged in geet's room...
while mayank n ranbir went to brij's room..basically to irritate him n make fun out of him...on d wedding matter...
...
geet was all ready n dat made gals angry...
nupur - by godd...tu to pehle se hi ready hai...
geet sarcasticaly - tum log etni jaldi jo aaye ho...
nisha rolled her eyes - we r on time ok..
geet - ha ha..now get ready..we hav to get down soon...
annie - btw..u look beautifull enpough to drive any man creazy in d wedding...
geet made cute face - not interested...
nisha giggled...
all gals got ready n made deir way out...
...
mayank n ranbir were helping brij to get ready...
ranbir to mayank in teasing tone - kya halat ho jayegi na bichare ki..aaj akhari din hai khushi ka..kal se to bas roz royega ye...
brij rolled her eyes - vil u both shut up..
mayank mocked - arre we r serious...ji le mera yaar ji le...ek baar ladki zindagi me aa gayi..to samajh le zindagi ki band baj gayi,...
ranbir - haan jaise aaj teri band bajne wali hai...
brij gave him look like i-vill-kill-u-wid my-bare-hands...
ranbir cleared his throat - mera matlab..shehnayi..shadi ka band...
mayak giggled..while brij rolled his eyes...
brij to mayank - u talk like experienced...he mocked...
mayank making too serious face - obviously yaar...ab apna dukhada kise sunao..bas tum dono hi toh ho..jise apne dukh jaya kar sakta hun...yaar ye ladki zindagi ka sara track hi badal deti hai...
ranbir was abt to comment wen he saw all d gals including nupur were standing on d door..looking at dem angrily..specially nupur who was about to run to kill mayank..but galz stopped her to listen more...
ranbir cleared his throat - mayank..i think we shud stop d topic now..its his best day...
mayank - wat best day...aaj me chup nahi rahunga...(to brij) jante ho ladkiyon ko panauti kyu kahan jata hai...
all d gals looked at him wide eyes in shere of anger...while ranbir prayed god to knock sum sense in mayank...
nuput whispering to gals - aaj me ise zinda nahi chhodungi...
all gals held her tight...dey wanted to listen more...
mayank continued - nahi pata..me batata hu...kyunki ek baar ye ladkiyan humari zindagi me aa gayi..samajho humara diwala nikal jata hai...(mocking in nupur's style).jjaanu..aaj shopping pe chalo na...mayu...mujhe ye chahiye..mujhe ice-cream khani.chocolate khane..jaanu..ghumne chale...(made baby sighed face)..
brij kept a supporting hand on mayank's shoulder...
while ranbir asked god to give peace to mayank's soul who is gonna die soon...
mayank - arre..in ladkiyon ko kaun samahaye..ke hum ladke hai masoom se..koi ATM machine nahi...

brij - i can understand ur pain...par kya baki ki baten kal nahi kar sakte..meri shadi hai yaar aaj..mujhe pehli hi mat darao...
mayank nodded in yes...n turned to leave d d room...
...
roflll
...
his eyes widened in shock of his life to see all gals and specially nupur standing right on d door wid deir angry faces...
nupur moved forward...mayank moved back.scared like hell... :P 
nupur - kya keh rahe the tum...
mayank laughed like idiot - kya jaan..kuchh bhi toh nahi...
nupur - me panauti hun..??..haan...
mayank cleared his throat - nahi sweety...ofcorse not..u r my princess...
every1 giggled...
nupur moved forwrd like hungry lion...while mayank moved back like innocent dear...
nupur - jaanu..ye chahiye..jaanu wo chahiye...haan...
mayank fell on bed from back..but ranbir held him from falling - me toh bas mazak kar raha tha..sachhi..u know i love u...
nupur made idiotic smile - and u know wat..go to hell..bcoz..i hate u...
saying so nupur stormed out of room...
mayank ran behind her - jaan suno na...plzz..sorry yaar...ruko to...
...
every1 burst into laughter watching deir tom n jerry show...
geet - bhai chale...ur jerry vil be waiting for u ...
brij confused - wattt
geet clered - i mean..leher bhabhi vil be waiting for u...
all left out...

...

all got mixed in d party...
every1 was admiring geet's beaty a she was looking like real angel in dat deadly combination was dress n jewellary...
geet's eyes were looking for maan..who wasn't reached yet...
dats wen geet saw dadi maa entering along wid dev n naintara...
geet went dere...
dadi was mesmerized wid d beauty of geet...
geet smiled n lovingly took blessing of dadi...
dadi blessed her n den hugged her...
annie to came dere - kya ho raha hai...
dadi held annie's earplayfully...
annie - ouchh dadi...aooo...
dadi left her ear - ese kehte hai manners...aapne aaj tak kabhi humara ashirvad liya hai..??
annie making baby face - liya tha na...
dadi - kab...
annie - last bday par...
dadi rolle her eyes..while geet giggled...
dadi - aap dono to aaj bilkul pariyan lag rahi hai...
geet cutely - sachhi dadi maa...
annie - chup kar...me jyada achhi lag  rahi hun...
geet - nahi me jyada achhi lag rahu hi...
annie - me..
geet - me..
dadi rolled her eyes - aap dono achhi lag rahi hai...
naintara came forward asking slowly - aur me dadi...
dadi liked dat she did took 1st move - aap to bilkul rajkumari lag rahi hai...
naintara smiled n while dev was happy dat naintara was cuming back to herself...
...

geet waited for maan a long...
functionwas going to strt in few min...
geet texted maan..." kahan hai aap...function shuru honewala hai...jaldi aayiye na..."
geet waited wen she got reply of text.." just 10 min jaan..bas pohoch raha hun..."
...
just den hameer entered along wid him father..making his way straight to geet..lost in her beauty...
hameer - heyy geet...
geet smiled - hi hameer..
hameer - u look beautyfull...
geet smiled weakly - thnx hameer...
hameer - i hope im not late..function is not started yet...
geet - no no..its still time...
hameer looked around checking d area...
hameer - u all had made great function..it looks fab...
geet smiled - its karan n shweta actually..dey had done great work...
hameer - dnt tell me..i know u all hav helped dem..dats y u took leave for 2 weeks right...
geet smiled - yaah kind of...ohh dat remind me...can u borrow ur notes..d protion we all hav missed..
hameer smiled - y not...
geet - thnxx...
uttara joined dem...
hameer looked at her disappointed..while uttara looked at him curious...den looked at geet back...
geet - heyy uttara..dis is hameer...
uttara smiled weakly - i know hameer geet...
geet was surprised while hameer looked away...
geet - ohh dats great..how cum u two know each other...
hameer was bcuming uncomfortable now...
uttara - long story yaar...vil tell u sum other time...
hameer looked at her angrily...
uttara - geet..i hav sum importnt to talk wid hameer...just excuse us..
geet smiled confusingly - umm..ohhk...
uttara dragged hameer long wid her...

...
geet left from dere(where she was standing wid hameer n uttara)..n was about to walk through d corridor..wen a strong hand held her hand...
she smiled...wid pleasant surprise...
she knew d touch..its only her maan..who can hold her like dis...
she tunred...
but her mouth fell right open..watching a incredibly handsome maan singh khurana standing very close to her wearing a white n sky blue combined beautifull sherwani...
he looked damn hadsome..damn charming..damn breath taking..n d color was giving perfect combination to her attire...
she looked at him wid d sweetest smile n surpring face...
dat light stuble..she hav noticed so may times while admiring his face naughtily wen he would not notice...it suit him perfectly...
dat glow in his eyes..dose pefect eye-brows..n dose m-shaped lips...
he is d 1 most beautifull creation..made by god for her...
she smiled at her thought..still lost in his eyes...
his hand was holding her tight...
...
maan was lost in her beauty...
its him..who hav made her wear all dat..n still he fills like he hav never sen sumthing so beautifull in his life...
she was d 1 most incredible princess created by god for d prince named maan singh khurana...
maan held her hand tight n pulled her towrds him...
she wasn't ready for dis..
his sudden move made her fall on his strong chest...
she placed her white milky palm on his chest(exposed part through sherwani)...for support n looked at him..still wid dat glow of happiness n surprise...
maan looked at her..she was so lost in his...dat gave him satisfaction...
maan naughtily - agar mujhe unhi ghoorti rahogi..to fir mujhe dosh mat dena agar mene...
dat brought her back to her senses...
she smiled cutely looking down and hit his chest...
she placed her another palm on his chest ...playing wid d 1st buton..cutely
while he slided his both arms around her waist gently..admiring his love in his arms..looking magically beautifull...
geet slowly - me aapko ghoor nahi rahi thi...
maan whispered cutely - dekh to aise rahi thi..jaise mujhe abhi kha jaogi...
geet made baby face - nahi na baba...
maan looked around naughtily..making her notice where dey r...
geet realized where dey r n instantly tried to withdraw...
but maan again pulled her closer...
geet looked at him with wide-eyes - maan chhodiye na..koi aa jayega...
maan naughtily..pulling her more closer - aane do...
geet trying to free herself - maan plz..jane dijiyena...kisi ne hume dekh liya toh...
maan didn't give a damn...

geet tried to free herself..making baby face...
while maan was way to strong even to feel her protest...
geet - agar mumma ya papaji ne dekh liya toh...
maan made thinking face - hmmm...
geet baby annoyed - kya..hmmm...chhodiyena maan..
maan naughtily carrased her bare waist wid his thumb...
dat tickled geet...
geet nuzzled herself trying not to laugh due to tickle...which made maan more naughty...
geet - maan..dekhiye..me has padungi...gudgudi band kijiye...aur jane dijiye mujhe...
maan - ek shart par...
geet still trying to get free - mujhe apki har shart manjoor hai..par is waqt mujhe chhodiye..koi bhi aa sakte hai yahan...
maan - u hav to repeat my every word...
geet confused - wat words...
maan - shall we strt...
geet - maan yahan nahi..koi aa jayega na plz...samajhiyena maan...
maan - shall we strt...
geet made baby face - achha baba..aap na bilkul duffer ho..boliye...kya bolna hai...

maan made naughty face - hmm...say jaan...
geet looked at him shooking her head - jaan...khush..
maan smiled - jaanu...
geet smiled - jaanu...
maan pulled her a bit more into his embrace.while geet gave in willingly lost in his eyes..
maan whispered - shona...
geet whipered - shona..(sliding her hands around his neck...)
maan - my princess...( giving a small peck on her forehead...)
geet whispered - my prince...(giving gently peck on his forehead..)
maan smiled - my mishty...(nuzzling his nose wid hers cutely smiling)
geet smiled too - my duffer...( giggling..nuzzling her nose wid his..he giggled to at her word)

both closed deir eyes gently slowly...lost in d flow of love...
maan gently brushed his upper lip to her lower lip...
geet shivered wid his touch..leting out a heavy breath...
b4 maan could draw back..geet moved forward into his embrace...
pressing on dat small contact of deir lips...
geet let out a breath...barely able to breath..due to sudden ooz of passion...
...
his hand massaged her waist..sensuously..roaming around d bare part..n finally moving on her back...
geet was so lost in his touch...she pressed her lips more over his..snaking her arms completely around his neck..pulling him closer...
dere lips were pressed on each other...maan gave a passionate peck over her lips..not letting her breath..she moaned in his lips...searching for air...
...
he gently let go of her lips...still mere inches away from...
as he tilted his head to hav a good access of her lips...her fingers travelled into his hairs..carrasing dem...pulling his closer...
he once again presses his lips over hers..n she gave in willingly...his lips parted as he pulled her lower lip in by teething it...
she moaned into his embrace...
her lower lip was trapped between his lips..he gently licked it..making it wet wid saliva...and his thumb gently carrased d end line of her blouse from back...where d strings started...
she chukled wid tickle..wriggling her back...
she wanted her lip out so dat she could do same wid him...
but he didn't leave her lip..n nibbled on her wet lip...

her upper lips dat was still dry, was dying for his touch..but for dat moment..his conrcern was lower lip...
she pressed her upper lips over his upper lip..pleading him to take dat in as well...but he didn't do it...
he sucked on deir mixed saliva over her lower lip..
she felt herself as an ice-cream and he was enjoying it...
..
he pushed her gently on side by wall...as forced his weight over hers...his desire was sumthing like heaven for her...
she wanted to moan his name..but he wasn't giving a single chance...
all she could do was whisper filled wid passion...
his thumb slowly moved inside her blouse from back..and she scratched her nail over his neck..as respose...
he winced as her nail peirced his skin...and he took litle flesh of her lower lips between his teeth.giving her a bite..as response...

she moaned peircing her nails further...
he sucked over d bite again n again..giving her d taste of his pleasure...
both were gasping for air...
but d moment was too vulnerable to think of anything else...
maan knew..she needed air to breath.. n she being she..vil not complain to his need...
he gently licked her lower lip again..slowly slwly...
brushing his lips again n again over her wet lips...
n finally gave a small peck..moving back a bit...

both were panting highly..like dey were just cuming from marethon or sumthing...
dere forehead were resting over each other..trying to regain deir senses...

...
maan gently opened his eyes n saw geet into his arms tight..eyes closed n taking deep breaths..trying to cum to normal state...
maan smiled at his mishty n gently gave a small peck over her forehead..removing his finger out from her blouse...
geet gently opened her eyes..looking down...
she was blushing..flushing...dying wid d blush..
her cheek had already turned dark pink shade...
maan gently carrased her cheek wid d back of his fingers...
geet smiled cutely still looking down.
maan looked at her lower lip...it was swolen n turned into dark reddish shade...
while her upper lip was still pink...
maan smiled at dat...
geet was resting over wall while maan over her...
he adjusted his face in her neck as he brushed his lips just below her ear...
maan - mishty...
geet smiled - 
maan - im gonna cut ur nails every week...
geet blushed cutely n looked at his neck..
it was bleeding a bit..
her fingers gently carrased d scratch mark...
geet naughtily - u deserve dat...
maan made baby face - mene kya kiya...
geet rolled her eyes - aise bholi shakal bana rahe hai...apne cheating ki...
maan naughtily - kya kiya mene...
geet - aapn sirf ek hi lip...

but in a fraction of second..she closed her eyes thinking wat was she abt to say...
geet u hav bcum such a shameless...u r complain to him dat y he didn't kiss ur upper lip..u hav lost it completely...
maan looked at her amused...he did know wat she was talking abt..but her cute talk alwz makes him insane...
maan gently whispered - next time...
geet blushed more looking away...
maan smiled - achh ab chale...function shuru ho raha hoga...
den geet reminded..where dey r n wat dey were doing...
she looked at him wide-eyes while he gave naughty smile..
geet pushed him away naughtyily n ran from dere...
maan smiled..shooking his head...n went behind her..

...

wrapped in a beautyfull red bridal attire...
leher was brough our by uttara n her mumma...
every admired d beautifull bride...
while brij's eyes couldn't move who was sitting in d mandap..waiting for her...
as leher sat beside him...
both looked at each other..lost in deir beautifull moment...d most beautifull moment of deir life...deir weding moment...
pandit started wid his mantra while every blessed d new couple wid all dere love n care...
...
geet and her frnds were standing very close to madap..
while maan n family standing at a distance...
maan's eyes would glance at geet sumtime...who was lost in d happiness of her brother...looking at d bride n groom...dreaming sumthing...
mayank was looking at nupur making sorry face...but nupur didn't give a damn and was enjoying full attension...
ranbir was enjoying d scene..while nisha hit his arm..rolling her eyes...
...
d moment bcame memorable...
as BRIJ took d MANGAL-SUTRA in his hands...
...and placed it around LEHER's neck...
...leher closed her eyes in anticipation..
...giving her whole life d her groom named BRIJ HANDA !!!!

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                                                    Part 82


d moment became memorable...
d whole atmosphere started to look magical...d main spot-light was on d mandap..wid litle bluish shades on dulha  dulhan...which made dem look awesumly beautifull...
like d climate of love...atomophere of love was got created...
brij was looking straight...while leher's eyes were looking down...
a smile of contentment was visible on both of deir faces...
brij slowly turned his eye-lashes n looked at leher wid a feeling of completion...while leher's beautifull eye-lashes..gently made a litle movement of blush..knowing brij was looking at her...
d petals of different different flowers were continuous falling on dem...as d people were throwing petals on dem during d time pandit was completing his mantra...
dose petals were nothing but d blessing of each n every person present dere to wish dem a happy married life...
dose petals were blessing of dose all people dat..brij n leher's life vil flow like a delicate petal and no thorn could ever touch dere life...

...
as d pandit was done wid his mantra-jap...pandit called leher's mom n dad for KANYA-DAN's rasam...
leher's mom n dad came forward n sat behind leher n brij...
every pair of eyes was looking at d function wid meaningfull n respectable eyes...
leher was told to raise her hand further and brij's hand was kept below it...
brij held her palm tightly...
d kaliren which was tied on leher's wrist...made soft noise in happiness ...
leher's mom n dad put d flower on leher's hand as shagun...
a smile wid tears placed on leher's face as brij took her hand near his forehead and touched it...
kaliren twinkled..spreading its color..showing d contentment and excitement...
leher's mom dad blessed deir childrens n moved back...
brij n leher looked at each other wid so much of emotions and smiled wid tears of happiness...
as said by pandit..d flower was further devoted to AGNI...

...

d whole area held deir breath in excitemnt as brij's fingers picked up SINDOOR from d thaal...as told by pandit...
as brij picked sindoor..his eyes turned to meet leher...whose eyes were filled wid so much of emotions...
uttara removed leher's mang-tikka a bit.giving proper space...
leher closed her eyes in acceptance as brij placed d color of his love in leher's mang...
uttara put d mang-tikka back...moving away...
brij kept looking at her wid confidence and trust as leher slowly and gently opened her eyes to see d world wid new view...she was not just uttara handa anymore...she was mrs.brij handa now...
in a matter of second..her own idendity..her whole world changed...
she was not a mere gal anymore..she was a woman...a wife...a daughter-in-law...
life changed in 360 degree...

every1 eyes filled wid happiness and blessing for dis new couple...
who took d next step in deir life...who moved further from daughter or son to wife or husband...

geet's eyes kept looking...carefully looking at each n every function..every n every rasam..
and wen brij filled leher's mang wid sindoor...
geet's emotioanl eyes raised to search for her maan's face...
her lips curved into a beautifull smile wen she noticed her maan was staring at her from dnt know how long...
he closed his eyes in assurance n opened again..like he was assuring her dat he is dere for her...wenevr her eyes vil want to see him..he vil be dere for her...wenever she vil fill like talking to him..he vil be dere for her...wenever she vil need him.he vil be dere for her...wenever she vil feel like sharing anything..he vil be dere for her...she never need to find him...she vil alwz find herself wrapped in his strong arms..gaining d warmth of each other...

...

pandit told brij to pick up d mangal-sutra and place it around leher's neck...
BRIJ took d MANGAL-SUTRA in his hands...n looked at leher...whose eyes were filled wid love n trust...
al d guest looked at couple wid deir blessfull eyes...
leher's mom had tears in her eyes..d tears of happiness..dat her daughter is starting a new life...
leher's father looked at brij and leher wid proud and happiness...
rano and mohinder looked at deir son and his life partner wid hopes and blessing...
hopes dat dey vil be deir furure...and blessing dat...dere life vil be full of love n peace...
geet who standing wid her frnds..looked at maan wid a dream of deir future life...to which maan gave a smile of assurance..dat he vil complete every dream of his angel...its his duty and his right to fullfill her every wish...every dream...
uttara looked at hameer who was looking at geet wid his possessive eyes and dat didn't go unnoticed by uttara..n her life filled wid pain dat she hav created in her life wid her own hands...
nupur was still making annoyin face wen mayank threw d petals at her instead of brij n leher...
nupur showed him angry eyes..while mayank made baby face...
nupur rolled her eyes n winked at him...
mayank sighed in relief and smile at his lady love of his life...

...
brij's eyes spoke d language of assurance to leher dat she vil be his now..n taking dis authority to be called her husband...he promised her to fullfill eyes dream and wish of her life and placed d mangal-sutra around LEHER's neck...
as leher felt brij's touch around her neck tieing d knot of his love...tie d dhaga of his authrority over her...leher closed her eyes in anticipation..acceptong to his ownership...giving her whole life d her groom named BRIJ HANDA !!!!

as she slowly opened her tearfull eyes...she found him staring at her wid all his love n trust in deir relationship...
she smiled at him wid tearfull eyes..he smiled back...
dat smile of his had so much strngth..it made her believe him...
dat he vil alwz be dere for her wid his full authority as her husband...

...
d round of appluase spread in d whole area..wishing dis new marrying couple...
a bunch of petal which was hidden at d middle upper shade...took a blast...spreading d unlimited petals allover...
everything looked beautifull...magical...giving satisfaction to heart...
every clapped for d couple...
rano n mohinder had no limit in happiness...while leher's mom n dad were on 9th cloud of happiness...
nisha held ranbir's hand and smiled at him...not at understanding her action..ranbir too didn't think much n smiled back at her..letting her hold his hand...dat made nisha happy...
mayank n nupur held each other hand..lost in each other...
while geet n maan's eyes could break away from each other...like dey were hypnotised by each other...

...

surrounding became more colorfull and live...as brij held leher's hand in his strting for deir 1st phera...
pandit told d meaning of 1st phera dat in 1st phera d groom promises his bride dat he vil accept her as his wife wid all respect and love..her rights vil be as same as his..she vil his 1st priority..taking her care vil not be just his duty but his right...
as d pandit said dis...brij n leher completed deir 1st phera...
...
petals couldn't stop as people were continuously throwing d petals of blessing on dem...
phere strated to take place...while leher couldn't take her eyes off her husband..her life-partner...
d way he had held her hand..it showed his faith in deir relationship...
...
as d 4th phera started...
leher came forward...pandit told d meaning of d phera dat..in dis phera d bride promises d groom dat if d death cums..she vil d 1st acpt it...its her right to die being a wife dan being a widow...she vil love to die wid her sindoor in mang and mangal-sutra in her neck..its her right...
d completed deir phera..and brij just kept looking at her endless love for him...
...
as dey continued wid deir phera's..dey held each other's hand tightly...
no1's life is perfect...each relation has to face..new new things..problems..duties..responsibilities...new relationships...n much more...
but dey promised each other..too face every problem..every tornment of deir life wid each other's support..holding each other hand...
dey vil respect each other and each other's in-laws...dey vil try to complete every duty towrds each other wid all deir love n heart...
dey pormised to each other...dat dey vil be enough for each other...
forever...
...n...ever ... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
...

as d phere completed...
brij n leher happily n lovingly took d blessing of every old person present in d wedding...
wen brij n leher took d blessing fo rano n mhinder...dey blessed deir children to hav a great married life...may deir love last forever..no problem could ever touch dem...
as brij n leher tok d blessing of leher's mom n dad...
leher's mom broke into tear..hugging leher tight...while leher's father joined his hands in front of brij...being a father of a gal..pleading to take care of his baby doll...
old relationships r not easy to break..though its d rule of our society..but its not easy...
its not easy for a gal to leave for parents house..her house...which was never hers..d thought is so painfull...
y its not her house..y she is called parayi..if she is born deir..grown up deir...
y she is called parayi...
y she hav to create her own world sumwhere else..is it not her world...
is she not part of dem...
so many questiosn..but no1 hav answer...
it is like dis...it vil alwz be like dis...we like it or dnt like it...
...
brij held leher's dad's hands n shook his head for a no..dat he is small n not to join hands in front of him..
both hugged each other..n brij promissed dat he alwz take good care of his wife...
uttara n leher hugged each other tight..crying...
while every1 giggled wid tears..admiring deir love...
geet n her gang also had tears in deir eyes...

...

as d wedding function finished...
bride n groom were taken to deir respective rooms...
it was lunch time...
every1 praised lunch...giving satisfaction to rano n mohinder...
reception was gonna strt soon...
lunch function was almost done
...
all d gals went to get ready for d function...
maan couldn't meet geet as her stupid frnd were sticked to her all d time..even in her bedroom...
he preffered to stay wid dadi maa..which was even more tough..as dadi couldn't stop laughing at him for his helples condition...
maan rolled his eyes...

...
geet's room...

annie - i dnt believe dis...it was all so beautifull...omggg...im so excited..meri shadi kab hogi..(lostin dreams :P)
nupur mocked - karan se bol du..abhi tujhse shadi kar lega...
annie rolled her eyes - he is just a frnd...
nisha - ya ya...aaj jaise wo tujhe dekh raha tha..we dnt think so...
annie ignored...
naintar - btw gals...SR ka kuchh plan banaya hai ya nahi...
every looked at naintara wid wide -eyed...
naintara rolled her eyes - im not talking abt u..im taking abt leher n brij..any funny plan for dem...
nupur nodded in NO making baby face...
geet - no wayzzz bhai ko pata chala...to wo mujhe jaan se maar denge...
nanitara giggled - dnt worry yaar..kuchh nahi hoga..unki SR par kuchh funny hoga..to unhe khudko etni sharam aayegi ke wo ye baat kisi se discuss hi nahi karenge
nisha wed cheeky smile - wais umhari baat me to dum hai..kuchh kare kya...
...
uttara came running in - no wayzzz
geet rolled her eyes - tujhe kya prob hai...
uttara - bilkul nahi..warna me leher di ko pehle se hi bata dungi...
nupur annoyed - leher di ki chamchi...
uttara rolled her eyes - watever...but no funny plans...
geet pulled her from shoulder - arre yaar bahot maja aayega...pehle plan to sun..fr decide kar lena...
uttara made thinking face...
gals smirked looking at each other n screamed in excitemnt...
yeyyy
all gals got ready n went out for reception...

...

as all came out...
geet saw maan talking wid sum busymen...geet rolled her eyes...n naughtily passed through him...making him notice it...
as maan's eyes fell on her...his heart missed a bit..
how cum she alwz manages to look so breath taking...
dat rani pink colored sari made her look..breathh takingly awesum..n purely beautifull like rani colored rose...
he came back to his senses wen 1 of dem called for him...
maan cleared his throat n went back to his talk..
dough he couldn't stop himself for stealing glances of his mishty...
geet giggled and got mixed wid her frnds...
...
leher brij rano n mhinder were on d stage...
peopel started to cum familiwise on d stange...and gifted dem sumthing or d other..congratulating dem for newly married life...
and for return..rano n mohinder gifted every family a idol of GANPATI BAPPA...
people liked deir gesture so much...
every1 was praising abt deir great hosting
...
as geet was busy giggling..talking wid her frnd...
her cell bipped a msg...
geet read it...it was from uttara..." meet me in ur roon now..its urgent yaar...im waiting..."
...
geet shook her head...
and excusing herself..left to her room...!!

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