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Love Beyond Limits !! THREAD 3 pt 91 pg 128 - Page 28

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                Part 83


as geet was busy giggling..talking wid her frnd...
her cell bipped a msg...
geet read it...it was from uttara..." meet me in ur roon now..its urgent yaar...im waiting..."
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geet shook her head...
and excusing herself..left to her room...!!

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maan noticed her going up...he instantly massaged her.." where r u going..."
geet got d msg n smiled as she replied..."...hayye..ye kyu nahi kehte..ke mere bina man nahi lag raha...achhha...achhah...muh mat banayiye...me apne kamre me ja rahi hun..kuchh kaam hai..."
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maan shook his head wid a smile as he read her reply..he too replied.."..jaldi aana..kyunki mera sach me man nahi lagta...tumhare bina..."
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geet was going upstairs..but smiled naughtily as she read his ans...n instntly replied..."..aapna na bilkul besharam ho gaye hai..me mazak kar rahi thi...bas 10 min me aa jaungi..."
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maan smiled as he read it n replied..." me mazak nahi kar raha tha...watt 10 min..nooo...5 min r allowed..."
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geet shook her at his ans n replied .." ...* wid a naughty face*...MERA INTEZAR KARNA..."
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n wid dat she left to her room.
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maan almost giggled at her reply...

...
dadi came on d stage wid maan dev n naintara...
brij n leher took blessing of dadi ma followed by mohinder and rano...
rano lovingly - har rasam me apna ashirwaad bhara hath rakhkar..aap ne sab rasmo ki shobha dbada di maji...
dadi smiled gratefully while maan's eyes were roaming around if geet is back...
dadi nuzzled maan to concentrate deir n maan nodded making baby face...
maan n dev congratulated brij while naintara hugged leher wishing her goodluck..
dadi maa appreciatively introduced naintara as her chhoti bahu to rano n mhinder...
rano blessed d couple wen naintara n dev took deir blessing...
rano - bahot hi pyari bachhi hai...
dadi smiled - bilkul..humare dev ki pasand hai...aur hum bahot jald apko humari badi bahu se milwayenge...

dat part said dadi litle loudly making maan look at dadi in shock...
dev n naintara also looked at dadi n maan surprised...
maan smiled weakly..trying to over cum his shock...while dadi maa smirked...
rano smiled weakly - she definitely loved dis family n maan..specially d way he calls her MAAji...its has sum feeling..sum power..sumthing very different...
maan uncomfortably smiled at rano n mohinder...throwingly angry glances at dadi maa...
dadi maa didn't give a damn...n enjoyed herself...
rano - beta..mujhe yakin hai..jo bhi ladki tumhari zindagi me aayegi..wo bahot khushneseeb hogi...
maan loved dat...how much he wanted to say..its ur duaghter MAA...its GEET...n she is not d 1 who is lucky..im d 1 luckiest d hav her in my life..its ME all d way...

he took blessing of rano n rano blesed him with all her love n affection..
rano lovingly gifted dem GANPATI ji ki idol...
dadi maa looked at dem surprised and den it striked her...she was d 1 who gave dis idea to maan wen he asked abt his frnds wedding...ohh so it was a lie...
dadi looked at maan wid naughty eyes...while preferred not to look at dadi..as he understood..dadi came to know abt his lie...
y dadi has to be so smart..he wondered...oughh...for god sake..its MSK's dadi maa...she has to be best in herself...

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mayank held nupur's hand - thnk god..tum maan gayi...pata hai mujhe laga tha..pata nahi is baar kitne papad belne padenge..tumhe manane ke liye...
nupur rolled her eyes - oyye hello..ye sab mene isliye kiya..kyunki mujhe shadi me apna mood kharab nahi karna..i wanted to enjoy...
mayank made baby face - means..u r still angry...
nupur made thinkng face - sochungi..depends on my mood u see...
mayank made shocking face - mera dil tumhare har facial expressions ke sath dhak dhak..dhak dhak...karta hai..n u saying it depends on ur mood...
nupur rolled her eyes...
mayank - u r impossible u know dat...

" u still wonder..." , said ranbir in a faking surprised tone..as he joined dem along wid nisha n karan...
nupur - oyye..tu kehna kya chahta hai...
ranbir instantly hugging her side-wise - ..arre me to teri side le raha hun...oyye..mayank..meri nupur ke bare me kuchh mat bol..she is my best frnd...
nupur waked him - keep dreaming...meri best nisha hai...said nupur giving nisha teddy bear hug...
nisha smirked at ranbir,...
ranbir made baby face - kaisa zamana aagaya hai...masoom logon ki koi kimat hi nahi hai...said ranbir putting his head on mayank's shoulder dramatically...
mayank rolled his eyes - over dramatic...
ranbir instantly raised up - mera matlab hai..koi baat nahi..mayank hai na..mera best frnd...
karan - i wonder guys..wen vil u all grow up...

all d gang looked at each other wid shocking face...
nupur checked ranbir's myscles...
karan rolled her eyes - mera matlab...mature...kaun kiska kya hai..pata hi nahi chalta...
gang giggled saying in union - dats we we r...
karan smirked idiotically - waise tum logon ki shaitan gang leader kahan hai...
nisha looking around - haan yaar..ye geet kahan hai...
dats wen...hameer joined dem..
hameer - wats happening guys...
mayank - kuchh nahi yaar..just chatting non-sense...waise we r searching geet..did u see her...
hameer confused - kuchh der pehle mene usse upar jate dekha tha...par ab pata nahi...
nupur - ye geet bhi na..kitna make up karegi...
ranbir rolled his eyes - tera kya ja raha hai...
nupur waked him...

ranbir annoyed - tum log me koi punching bag nazar aata hun kya...jo bhi aata hai..maar ke jata hai...
nisha rolled her eyes - agar tera drama khatam ho gaya ho..to koi jake geet ko bula layega..we r getting bored...abhi tak surprise dance bhi shuru nahi huva...
hameer surprised - surprise dance...
mayank smiled - yaah...actually we hav arranged a surprise function for all guests...n its going to be a beautifull salsa dance...wid slow n romantic music...
hameer smiled - sounds interesting..den were is geet...she is d 1 who vil annouce right...
nupur n nisha - dnt worry guys..hum log upar jakar dekhte hai...
wid dat gals left while boys got engrossed in deir chats..

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annie making annoyed face - dadi maa...for how long i hav to stand here like putla smiling at every1...
dadi maa rolled her eyes - 2 min apne dosto ke bina rahogi...to kuchh nahi bigdanewala...
annie made face - bigdega na...??
dadi confused - kya...
annie made cute face - dey all vil miss me...
dadi shook her head in disbelieve...
dev naughtily - dadi...naintara ko b sab abhi se sikha do...
naintara looked down blushingly...looking baby complaining at dev...while dev smirked...
maan - dadi..let her go na..her frnds vil be missing her...
dadi smirked - hmm..like GEET...
maan looked away..like he didn't hear...while annie nodded her head...
maan looked around but geet was nowhere to be seen...
maan noticed all d boy ( boys from gang) were enjoying deir chat...but no gal was dere...
maan rolled hei eyes.." ye ladkiyan..din me kam se kam 10 baar make up aur 100 baar touch up karti hai...geet...u said 10 min..n its more dan 20...not done..."complained maan in his mind...
annie looked at maan who was lost in hismelf...
annie - bhai...
maan startled - yes annie...
annie - aap kay soch rahe ho...
maan playing wid his words - wo me dekh raha tha..ke tumhare group ki sari ladkiyan gayab hai...kahin tumse bore to nahi ho gayi...
annie looked around and found no1..but dats wen she saw nupur n nisha cuming down from stairs...
annie instantly weny to dem b4 dadi could say anything...
annie - tum log kahan the yaar...aur geet..where is she...
nisha - hum bhi sse hi dhund rahe hai..hume laga tere sath hogi...
annie rolled her eyes - mujhe to dadi maa..bore kar rahi thi...
nupur - ab kahan dhunde usse...surprise dance ka time ho gaya hai...she vil d 1 who vil annouce...
annie - waise...uttara bhi nahi dikh rahi...
nisha - blind...upar dekh..uttara is dere on d stage wid leher bhabhi...
annie - to useless gals..geet ko call karo aur puchh lo...kahan hai wo...

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" d number u hav called is currently switched off...plz try again leter..." , heared maan for d 10th time..as he dialled geet's no. for d 10th time...
maan rolled his eyes n cut d call...
"switch off...firse switch off...ab kahan dhundu isse..ye ladki ek jagah kyu nahi ruk sakti...kahan tha 10 min me aayegi...adha ghanta hone ko aaya...sab yahan hai..aisa kya kar rahi hai kamre me...aur cell kyu off aa raha hai...battery charge karna to yaad nahi raha hoga...kya karu me iss ladki kaa..." thought maan n having no option he made his way upstarirs...

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" geet..geet...r u dere in...geet..." asked nisha litle loudly as dey entered geet's room...
nupur checked in bathroom while annie checked in gallery...
but dere was no geet...
all gals looked around room but failed to see maan who was hidden behind d curtain holding his breath...
...
d thing was..as maan made his way in geet's room..he searched for her in room..but she was nowhere...dats wen he noticed her mobile on study table near her pc...
it was switched off...
maan rolled his eyes n put d mob in his packet...
he was abt to call her name loudly but dats wen he heard d door open...
not wanting to take any risky chance...n hid himself behind d curtain...
n thnk god he did dat..coz he heard geet's shaitan frnds taking her name along wid his idiot sister annie...
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as gals left...maan took a deep breaths n sighed in relief..bachh gaya...
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but a worried thought came to his mind..." where r u jaan <3 ..."


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear
continue soon
plz 1 more part


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
geet is missing
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
where is geet?????
i think its hameer...uuufff babaji
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...
i guess i knw wht happened...d msg is not frm uttara...its frm hameer n he took geet with him...i will kill him if dis happens...
plz dont do dis...