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Swamini's affect on VirMan (Page 3)

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Hi guys i am so happy with the comments and THANK YOU. I hope you enjoy this part as well.Smile

PART 2:
Rishikesh
Manvi: Di ap yahaa!!
Then she hugs her as she looked behind her she saw swaminiCry
Manvi (thinking to herself): yeh mogambo yaha kya kar raha hai
As Manvi greets them and tell them to come in, Swamini looks at her with a serious look. Behind mogambo she sees her jiju and chep.
Viren: Hi sali saiba tum kaise ho
Then virat cuts in
Virat: yeh to banderia hai toh ek banderia kaise rehti hai vo to ap janti hai.
Manvi: Tum to apne moo band karo (she says while making faces at him)
Swamini sees them talking and has an urge to get virat away from manvi
Swamini: Virat!!!
Virat looks at her like she was a monster (which she is)
Virat: kya bua
Swamini: dabbu tumhe bula rahi hai
Virat (thinks to himself): yeh dabbu k
i koi dimag hai, manvi thik kehti hai vo bilkul dabba hai.
Virat: thik hai me ja raha hu
Right after virat leaves, Swamini calls manvi
Swamini: Manvi, hum tumse baat karna chati hai
and she takes manvi to the kitchen
Manvi:ji ap mujhse kya kehna chati hai
Swamini: Dekho manvi hum tumse pasant nahi karti aur tum yeh janti ho lekin tum bohat lucky ho ki hum jeevika ko mein yahan ane di.
Manvi: ji mein apki baat samjhi nehi
Swamini: mujhe lagta hai ki tum yeh bohat achi se janti ho ki me kya kaha, jab se me tumhe dekhraha hu tum sirf musibaat le kar arahi ho
Manvi: lekin mein...
Swamini cuts her of and says
Swamini: hum chati hai ki tum humari parivaar se door raho khaas kar virat se, aur tum sirf jeevika aur viren ki saath baat kar sakti ho samjhi.
Manvi was torn in to peices and then she realized that she was allowed to talk to her di but why is she so depressed about not getting to talk to chep?
Right in that moment Swamini leaves through one door and jeevika comes in through the other door.
Jeevika: Mannu tu itni sad kyun lag rahi hai
Manvi: woh kuch nehi
Jeevika: saach saach bata, mein jaan ti hu ki tu jhoot bol rahi hai
Manvi: maine kahana me thik, me sirf thori emotional ho gaye thi apko bohat din ki baad dekh ker
Then the two sisters hugHug
Afterwards manvi goes to her room, in the same time virat got annoyed by dabbu and left room when he saw manvi
Virat:oye Ms.banderia ap kya kar rahi ho
Manvi turns around and tries to ignore him
Virat: maine tumhe kuch pucha, achanak itni chup kuyn ho gayi
Manvi continues to ignore him
Virat (thinks to himself): Usse kyan hua, vo mujhe ignore kyun kar rahi hai...

To be continued...

DON'T FORGET TO COMMENT AND PRESS LIKE IF LIKE IT, AND I AM NOT SURE BUT I THINK THAT THIS STORY WILL HAVE MORE THAN 3 PART SO I WILL DEFINITELY UPDATE ON THAT.


Edited by virmanforever - 22 December 2011 at 2:02pm

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 6:11pm | IP Logged
It was amazing lol pls do more than just 3 parts I love your writing!! Pls pls PM me :)) thanks
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hey very nice part and continue soon.. Waiting for your next pm... 
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Nice story yaar,,, well written chapters..
continue soon and do pm me when you update the next partSmile
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Nice one..Continue soon and PM me...
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nice update...continue soon
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Read both parts now...
A really good start :)

Please pm me when you update, Thanks Wink

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