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The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 61)

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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 1:40am | IP Logged
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Reeha.. Lovely update..Clap

im speech lees..Tongue

haww!! loved every bit of it..Big smile
wow!! manayta! finally u stood up for UV.. Clap

loved tehir fun

and and and!!

Uv's confession.. Loved it completely..






Edited by thejazzgal - 18 February 2012 at 10:30am

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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 1:44am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
Finaly uday confessd hs feelingx...Luv it...
Uday beating akash..my fav partLOL
Update soon...Cant wait..

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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 1:45am | IP Logged
Hi, Reeha!! Big smile

Originally posted by reeha...k

Gaaah!  I was waiting for you (not in a creepy way ofcourseLOL)Hug
Hehe. I am touched. Hug (a big one! Big smile)

AND I hate UV's room (that is one nasty shade of green) 
I don't know. I kinda like UV's room. It's a boy's room. Makes me laugh every time I see his Marilyn Monroe poster chipkofied on the wall ROFL

The RCs may get insider information once and a while..it just depends on who leaks it from inside the palaceLOLWink
DAMN! I was so looking forward to that piece... Why are the royal workers so loyal?! LOLLOL

I KNOW! I love it when UV is cheeky, in the show or anywhere else- I just love Manveer in general.
Two of the reasons I am still watching the show, I tell you! Wink

Want me to email you the draft of the first few chapters LOLWink?
Y.E.S. I would LOVE to read it... Wait, it is romance-humour-fantasy genre right? Believe it or not, my favourite fiction books are still the Harry Potter ones (PoA, OotP to be specific).  I have read some here and there books. Like Nancy Drew and Hardy Boys in school - however, I used to be so impatient, I just read the first few chaps and the last chap where everything was revealed! ROFL There are some non-fiction books I have read; but they make me depressed so I just stick to reading my Commerce-related textbooks now. Stern SmileROFL 
Anyhoo, send it to me, and I will give you my honest review. PM-ed you! Embarrassed

Onto reviewing your new chap! Big smile

And here I am, years later second guessing myself- wondering if it makes me a bad person. Don't we all? *sigh* 
Heck just because I don't have the pathetic lost puppy thing going on doesn't mean I'm the spawn of Lucifer. ROFL ROFL ROFL 
"Start moving Road Side Romeo!" LOL

What would it feel like being with Uday?
Yes! Yes! Finally the thoughts are swirling up! Yahoo! 

He wanted her to see him.
Aww! That was one nice emotional analysis, Ree! Sometimes we wonder if people really do see us the way we actually are. I think Manyata sees Udayveer as he is. Just doubts it if it is true? Udayveer changes his emotions so fast it would be a little disbelieving for Manyata. I dunno. *shrugs* LOL! I am sooo bad with feelings and character analyzing! LOL

Uday: In order to get into my head, you have to let me get into yours.

Manyata: Hmmm, well there's nothing to get into.

Uday: Thank God you said it- It would have been rude if I said it.

 Gosh! These two stubborn people!! ROFL


I can feel like I'm falling when she opens her eyes...Manyata has to want me. *dead* *completely and utterly dead* And then I read this: In a flash she pushed me away and started swimming, her laughter matching the trail of water behind her. REEHA! Angry I got excited! Pst. CryLOL


AKASH! CHIKI! WHY, REEHA, WHY?! *tears a few hairs in process* *reads, holding back her tears of betrayal caused by one of her FF writers* OOH, WAIT! A PUNCH TO THE JAW! A PUNCH TO THE JAW! Dancing I LOVE dishoom dishooms! ROFL 

I loved the entire action sequence. The raging emotions fueled by Majnu's lack of understanding. The dude just needs to grow past his infatuation for the princess. He needs to wake up. I know people say love is blind but is it really? I think love sees the other person for what he/she is, sees what is going around them, understands it... Sadly, Akash lacks that ability. No wonder it's not love. Are you trying to showcase that? Oh, please tell me my Geeky analyzing worked! 

And oh, "the meatball headed girl" - Niiice! ROFL 


You could not have left it with a better ending than the "I love you, Manyata" and her wordlessly telling it back to him - I am having a BIG smile on my face now. I love how you pen down UV-M's emotions, their banters, their thoughts... It's obviously so close to what we feel when we are with a special person... Embarrassed 


Reading this chap made me feel happy, despite the er...hiccup... annoying hiccup LOL I can't say this enough, Reeha, but you are truly one talented writer and I hope you do end up being a famous writer! Truly! SmileSmile


Looking forward to the next update! 


TC.



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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 2:53am | IP Logged
aweome part...they manveers perfect date...only aakash had to ruin it...update soon

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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
hey girl... Okay today i didnt wnet to attend my classes becoz i was sick, which first time in my life im happy that im sick becoz i have time to read ur FF full without any disturing...
I have 3 word to descreib this FF  1: intertaiment 2: intertaiment and 3: intertaiment...
I loveddd it... be honsert and tell how u manage to write everything so clean... its like perfect... everything have their own time to come and emotions and feeling everything is like their own time... OMG these moments between UV and M made me out of breath. Okay reeha im very very emotional becoz of the last scenes between UV and M so i really cant write anymore...
Here is ur stars : StarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStarStar
 
10 out of 10... Everythign was perfect... Im sooo exited to the next part... love u reeha and wish once again a very happy valetinesday... ( i know its littel late) anyway looking forward to the next FF... 
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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Aaah! Reeha! Loved the update! Gosh, I didn't hate the Aakash from the show with such passion like I hate the one in this chapter! What a loser! AS IF she needs your love and acceptance to even breathe?! GROW UP MAJNU!!!!

The chapter was beautiful and beachy :P Hayye, their playfulness, their comfort and the passion all mixed together. Uff! Though I would say this just as a personal opinion, I am not too fond of the breath-taking passion that Uday feels. I dunno why. But it's just ME! Ok! Just saying on my own. Not the general opinion. You portray the feelings beautifully no doubt but to each it's own right?

You just HAD to put ChiKash na? very good girl! I am proud of you! :P The sadist in me was partying like no tomorrow when Uday beat the hell out of Majnu. Was reminded of the blasting episode. Thank you SO MUCH for that! The end literally made me jump. OMG! Update fast fast! CAN'T WAIT NOW!

Now, off to business! :P

(1)Maine tum se kaha tha, ki Moniya kay saath sabardasthi nahi chaligi.

(2) Main Moniya se baath karaha hoon.

(3)
Aaj kay badth Udayveer tumaray saath koi bathamizi nahi kar payaga

(4)
Jo kahna hai, kaho mujsi. Lekin, Manyata ki basithi Hume sai nahi bardash hogi.

(1) - Zabardasti, not sabardasthi; that's the correct word. Chalegi not chaligi.The "E" in Chalegi gives the correct sound, I doesn't. The word is like the word "Lay". So you can put wither chaLAYgi or chalEgi. Both letters give the same sound but E makes the spelling shorter.

(2) Baad, not badth. Badth isn't even a word LOL The correct word is b-Aa-d. BAA like from the rhyme "Baa baa black sheep" and D from the "TH" in there. It's pronounced that way but written with a D. More like, D from "DAAL" in Hindi. So don't say it with your English accent, say it with Hindi :P

(3) Again, baad not badth. Bathamizi - not a word. The correct word is bad-tameez-i. Bad means BAD (English wala). Tameez means manners and I is used as a suffix. Joining them it becomes bad-tameez-i; spelling it would be batameezi, because the D is mostly silent when we say the word. While writing the D is written. But since your writing is informal so D or no D makes no difference.

(4) In the word "MUJSI", the I makes the word weird. It gives off a letter C kinda sound. Now if we read it out like that it sounds like MUJ-C. Weird LOL So just replace the word "I" with "E" so the letters "SE" give the sound of SAY. Which is the correct word. MUJSE. You can spell it with either a E or AY like above in Chalegi.
Basithi - not a word. The correct word is be-izz-a-ti. You can spell in beizzati or I simply write it as Bessti! Not from Best i.e. the third form of Good. See the word is broken. "BE" (from BAY watch) means "without". IZZAT means respect. TI is a suffix used for it. Join it all it becomes be-izzat-ti. Spell it and it becomes beizzati. Write it like that and ignore my version of it. HUME - not gonna work. E is just an extra here. HUM is perfect. And bardash is finely done except the correct word is bardashT. There should be a T at the end.

Uff! What a class. Feel like a teacher now. But Papa says it is better to teach the other person HOW it's done rather than just correcting the other person's mistakes. Not a famous quote but it helps a lot Tongue Hope this was a help for you! Wink

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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged
FABULOUS !!!! AWESOME !!! I HAVE NO WORDS 2 DESCRIBE ...ClapClapClapThumbs UpThumbs Up

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Posted: 15 February 2012 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Ree I hope unremember me...its prerna plz yaaar I beg u could u update by friday morning...I'm going for my friends college fest on Friday I'd be leaving in the afternoon n we all friends be staying with her for 3days...meaning I'd be back on Monday n their god damn college has blocked the net facility so that the students dont misuse it...tab tak if I don't read the continuation I'll pakka go mad ree plz n I won't be able to enjoy the fest also plzzz pretty plzzz with a cherry on the top could u update by Friday morning I'd love to read the update n go n enjoy n enjoy the fest I know I'm asking a lot from u coz ur last update was very recent n trust me when i just saw u updated today I was shocked...more shocked when I saw ur note of updating in 2days...i know its difficult for u but plzzz Cry

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