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The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 55)

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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shrarrti

...This update was wonderful Reeha!  I can't help but wish it was longer, but you know I'll wait patiently until the next one! Big smile
LOLYou always do Preet! You always wait patiently! thank you so much!Hug

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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dumas

awesome update loved it he is doing so much to make her feel comfortable with him he is so sweet he is eating thing just because she fed him that was so cute they are getting very close loved it thanks for the pm

Thank you so much! (Is Dumas your name, or is there something else I should call you?) I really appreciate the feedback of what you liked, and thank you so much for the images! It feels like a presentEmbarrassedLOL

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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 2:46pm | IP Logged

I wish they wud hqve kissed in de theatre bt it was amazing long and beautiful update

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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by manveerlover


I wish they wud hqve kissed in de theatre bt it was amazing long and beautiful update

Haha! I'm terrible arent I?

Don't worry, it will happen!Wink

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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by DEKfan2012

Hi Reeha,
It was really well written and also well portrayed...just little things here and there made it sooo romantic but REAL at the same time.   I wish the CV's would go this way...
And, one day I am looking forward to reading a novel that you get published on your own...you certainly have the talent for it.
I am also a big fan of Kesarmania's weekly bulletins...don't you also think she can approach the online publications for her own blog?  Seriously, this forum has a few really talented writers...hope you all pursue this in future...
 

Kesarmania does a FAB job: she actually could use Tumblr and some other site to have a blog: she's awesomeSmile As for a book by me; I started writing one a while back, and have yet to finish. The leads were Darren and Esha, and I have yet to finish their love sagaLOL

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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Mais-

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You know, the dhaba scene was giving me hints like, "Eh? Eh? This seems so familiar..." and when I saw that asterisk and the note below I was like AWWWHHH!!! You used one of my ideas! SO TOUCHED! Ab I'll use yours! I always wanted to write a balcony scene and you just gave me an awesome idea for it. Thank you!

Sleeping in the cinema - EEEPPPSSS!! SO CUTE!!!! Saying such famous lines of DDLJ - SUPER EEEPPPSSS!!! And her response - OMG SUPER DUPER MAJOR EEEPPPSSS!! *dead*

Oh, they are being together again! oh oh oh!!! OMG!! I can't wait for more! THIS IS SO GOOD!! MASHALLAH!!! Update SOON! I hardly get addicted to FFs and this one is driving me crazy!

Oh Maisy! You always bring a smile to my face!

Yes the The Dhaba scene I had in my head for a while, but when I read your orange short-scene, I just KNEW that was what was needed to complete it- so I couldnt help my self but borrow it- thank you for being alright with it!
I read the Balcony scene you wrote- simply AWESOME. I know that Balcony's are over used, but incase everyone hasnt already noticed, I'm trying to overlap past Ammonia moments with Manveer ones: Eating together, riding on a bike, meeting over a balcony- but with their own story and own twists and tons of new memories. And Yes, that means there will be a beach moment tooWink 
I'm glad you liked the cinema moment- I was wondering if it was borderline cheesy, then thought "What the hey, the show is pissing people off, might as well give some Manveerians something to feel happy over"
 
Thank you Maisy!Hug

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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 3:54pm | IP Logged
Reeha Hug  Hug Hug
Finally read the chapter and its amazing as usual.. Star Star.. I luvd it to core. Heart Heart
 
Hugs again Hug coz I luvd it how you put the Whole DDLJ dialouge in the end.. Haii UV Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Blushing.. Also  luvd it how you've described M's room being dominated by PURPLE  colour.. (My Fave)..
 
Actually you've put three of my fave things in this Part:
DDLJ
PURPLE COLOUR
ALOO PARATHA ( with this I m missing Home Unhappy Cry )..
 
ABSOLUTELY LUVD THE PART Heart Heart Heart 
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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by limbu.simmy

Reeha Hug  Hug Hug
Finally read the chapter and its amazing as usual.. Star Star.. I luvd it to core. Heart Heart
 
Hugs again Hug coz I luvd it how you put the Whole DDLJ dialouge in the end.. Haii UV Day Dreaming Day Dreaming Blushing.. Also  luvd it how you've described M's room being dominated by PURPLE  colour.. (My Fave)..
 
Actually you've put three of my fave things in this Part:
DDLJ
PURPLE COLOUR
ALOO PARATHA ( with this I m missing Home Unhappy Cry )..
 
ABSOLUTELY LUVD THE PART Heart Heart Heart 
Simmy

GAAAHHH !SIMMYY!!! I've missed you! Hug

First, thank you for commenting as per usualEmbarrassed

Next... the DDLJ, I'm happy to oblige. Funny enough, before Manyata even quoted the dialogue in the show, I had made a reference about M and UV having a connection like R & S: Simran really hated Raj- just like Manyata does  UV. So I couldnt help but bring in some DDLJ into the FF: I'm glad everyone has responded well.
Second, The Purple was specifically done for you my love. I'm actually indifferent to her room colourLOL Plus I though purple would go well with creams and blacks, as well as the fact that its a very royal colour. To be honest, I don't like UVs green room, so I was happy that with M's room I can make it what I want since we havent seen what it looks like in the showBig smile
Aloo Paranthas are YUMM <3
Finally, I'm sorry for making you home sick, so hugs againHug

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