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The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 49)

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Posted: 03 February 2012 at 4:04am | IP Logged
!!!! Thank you ! I always look forward to your reviewEmbarrassed
Really? Aww! Hug 

2. Glad you enjoyed the Manveer moments...I know they were tainted...frankly you're the only one who hasnt mentioned thatLOL!
Putting on my Geeky glasses. Tainted? They were tainted by other people and not ManVeer - Frankly, who gives a damn about what others say? That's my funda. Approve

3. I know, UVs internal reaction is LOL worthy. Personally I think in the show his internal reaction is a little more confused, so I'm trying to stick to the very confident UV in the story on here...just to make up for it!
Yesterday's ep made me feel incredibly sad for him to see him so vulnerable Cry. So I am glad you chose a confident UV in your story. Made me happy. Big smile 

5. I REALLY hope it comes down to this somehow. When M and U finally have a relationship in the show, and one day J just has a verbal rant. I WANT M TO SAY THIS. I will wait patiently for it to happen, and will live vicariously through my writingSmile
You and me both, sistah. You and me both. Approve

TC.


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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 3:05am | IP Logged
hey!
well...somehow i hadn't came across this ff earlier...my bad luck..
but now i have...so i have only few words to says...
its amazing,splendid,fantabulous,very very well written...
and the most amazing thing is its from POV of Uday...
as his character is with so  many layers, you are doing an outstanding job by understanding it and penning it down here...
Coming upto the updates..
they are simply marvellous...
the flashbacks,the current scenorios all are very beautifully written..
and a the most amazing and my favourite one is the way you have shown the growth of Manveer's relationship...its so balanced...

In simple words, I am so in love with your ff...
plz continue soon...
thanx a lot for pm...

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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 3:28am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by pri01

Hi Reeha meri jaan Hug sorry for coming late dear
 
Reeha each time I read your FF I run out of words to express myself...you write so beautifully dear and Part 11 is marvelousStarStarStarHeartHeartHeart love every bit of it
 
Loved the way you described Manyata fighting with her inner feelings and slowly but steadily she is on her way to understand the true meaning of love.
What can I say about the kiss ... it was so sweet wowBlushingBlushing
Yeh J aur Akash always in wrong place at the wrong timeAngryAngry they witnessed ManVeer private moment anyway it's good at least  they have sensed that ManVeer are soulmates.
 
Finally Manyata has accepted her family and loved UV and Akash confrontation
 
Waiting eargerly for the next chapter.
 
Hey Reeha I have a request hope you won't mind ...whenever Manyata will fall for her UV and ManVeer will be together I want a magical first kiss and I trust you on thatWink...I know I am besharamEmbarrassedLOL 
 
 
 

GAAAH!!! Priya!! I was waiting for you lovie!!!Hug

AND BTW, I'm soo obligiing your request, trust me, I know we'd never get an onscreen kiss, so IT WILL HAPPEN HERE!LOLEmbarrassed
I know everyone is upset about J and A seeing the moment, but trust me it was necessary! Plus there will be other private Manveer moments nah?Wink
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Hi Reeha Hug thxs for accepting my requestEmbarrassed very true onscreen will never happen in the show and looking forward to it in ur amazing FF and as well as other private ManVeer moments.  Believe me Reeha reading ur FF is like watching a movie for me I visualize each and every scene.  You are a gifted-writer dear God Bless U. 
Love u TCHugHug
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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 5:15am | IP Logged
WOW! Just WOW! It was sooo superb...I was living the whole part as if I was present there! You make all of them come aliveSmile

Thanks a lot!

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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
hey Reeha!!! thnks 4 the PM!!!Wink
 
love it yaar u did another amazing job writing!!!ClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStar 5 stars 4 such great work really have no words the way u think as UV is jus great n makes me wonder wat if tht could happen jus leaves me imaginingDay Dreaming it is just awesome seriously no jokes...Embarrassed
 
hope u keep writing like this n plzzz do PM would love to read more!!!Wink
 
P.S. : sorry 4 late reply got caught up with college assignments so couldnt read until now anyways really it wonderfully reading it felt like it was actually happening jus could dream about it...Day Dreaming

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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
lovly lovly lovly lovly lovly it was awesome fantastic minnnd blowing superb love y0u!

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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 3:34pm | IP Logged
when will the next part be up
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EmbarrassedEmbarrassedBig smileReeehaaa, pleasee update soon!!
Really looking forwrd to your next chapterBig smile

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