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The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 40)

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Posted: 27 January 2012 at 6:22pm | IP Logged

WONDERFUL REEHA!!!!!WinkWinkWinkWinkWink

Your OS is one of the best I read so far!!!!!
PLEASE DO CONTINUE WRITING!!!!
It would make us MANVEERIANS VERY VERY HAPPYSmileSmileSmile!!!!!!!
 


Edited by Aysha247 - 27 January 2012 at 6:27pm

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Nice one as usual dear, thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 28 January 2012 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by reeha...k

Originally posted by tvlover92

LOL! My name's actually , not TC (which stands for Take Care. Too lazy to write the long form LOL). But you can call me . I prefer it that way. Big smile

The marriage proposals BAHAHAA. I can pretty much imagine myself in that crowd too 

The car banter was adorable. Embarrassed


...And M eats it! Bahaha ROFL Well, it is expected. I am totally like her as well. I do not care when someone eats or not but I have to eat and if you do not want to eat, great! More for me! LOL


Dupatta moment! OMG! I love it! One of my favorite romantic props! LOL


Over all, a great chapter! Loved it, the dress, too. Maybe I should buy one like that and possibly end up with a U... Day Dreaming  LOL


TC.

Baahhahaa! I obviously don't know my Abbrehviations very well!LOL

Thank you , for your feedback! Always look forward to it!
I agree with the spontanious proposals! As I was writing it  I thought:
PICK ME!!! PICK MEE!LOL
to be honest, I really wanted her to feed him: but it's too soon, I don't think one should run before they learn how to stand up firstErmm, so I thought her eating it was the more viable option Tongue.
 
the Dupatta thing I LOVE! Seriously, KZK, Prerna and Anuraj made me FALL IN LOVE  with it! And then Prem and Mukti's moments with the watcha and duppata! I seriously think every great couple needs one of those moments! I don't care if its overusedBig smile
 
Thanks for the input ! Hug

Hehehe. Join the club. Even now, I still don't understand most of the abbreviations. This new generation also naa... Tongue

OMG! You too! You like the cliche moments, too?! Hug So glad to meet you Wink

Psh. Thank you for writing so wonderfully. Your stories and many other IF Manveer writer stories is my refuge after a huge blow from the show's episode.:| or when my thoughts are stock pondering over what the next episode will be like and I have to read someone else's story from there LOL

Anyways, onto your update: O.M.G. SO FREAKING LONG!!! I LOVE YOU! Hug You have immediately improved my mood regarding yesterday's pukeworthy episode!! Big smile This update was amaaazing. 

My favorite parts:
- The article on ManVeer. 
-The TV News and the commentaries! So TV-like. Approve
- Manyata going through that emotional turmoil as Komal shared her childhood stories. Fantastic. Star
- How UV is still stunned on seeing M in different clothes. Adorbs!
- ManVeer reverse dialogue deliveries.
- The salute Cool

I am really loving where your story is going. And cannot wait for Akash being kicked out of the story [I cannot bear him in FFs as well, not after yesterday's episode Angry], M to turn into Manyata, ManVeer falling in love... Oh, gawd, I am getting way ahead of the story, aren't I? LOL 

Anyways, a marvelous, amazing read, Reeha!

Cannot wait for the next update!! 

TC. 


Edited by tvlover92 - 17 January 2014 at 9:57am

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Freaking awesome asusual...Clap
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OMG I loveee your FF. You write so wellClap I can't wait for your next update. Please update soonEmbarrassed
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Posted: 28 January 2012 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
hey reeha! Hug
when do we get our next update?? Embarrassed
dying to read the next part!
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Please update soon.
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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
FREAKING LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lolz, I have been reading this for the past few days and finally finished reading. It seemed a little boring in the first few chapters when they were children but as Uday started to grow up, I started liking it. And now that they are grown up and together, just LOVE it! Reeha! You are amazing! Love the plot of it! Sure, there are some minor typos in some English words and major typos in Hindi ones but they can be easily ignored. The Hindi ones catch my eyes often but since you are weak at Hindi I'll forgive you :P Catching this opportunity to tell you, if you need translation from English to Hindi; I can help. Because this FF is bloody awesome! I want it to remain so!

The shopping scenes were awesome. My head was spinning reading those designer names...would defo ask you for help regarding them. You know them better than I do anyway. Also, your FF is inspiring so many short scenes in me. HAVE to write them. Will give proper credit don't worry.

Update update update! Can't wait to read more you awesome writer!!

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