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The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 36)

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Posted: 25 January 2012 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shrarrti

This was the perfect birthday gift!  A looong update, that established Moniya's transformation to Manyata, her remembering Tom, getting rid of Akash, etc.

Amazing!  Reeha you've done a wonderful job.  There are one or two grammatical errors, but in the scheme of things, it doesn't matter!

FIRST OFF:

Hug
It wasnt planned! But I'm glad I was able to give you somethingLOL
Plus, I fixed up the big ones: I was re-reading and was like "Oh god, theres another one"D'oh
 

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Posted: 25 January 2012 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anhdara13

yay thank god you gave her a makeover! the show is taking way too long to do that. I love how long this part is. it's so well done - Manyata remembering Tom and calling Komal 'Ma' were probably the sweetest things ever. And Uday milking his injury for all it's worth? Priceless.

I had to take into consideration about her remembering Tom- to be honest I initally wanted her not to remember- but I thought about what you said, and how you and others really wanted her to remember (Preet has said it in the past as well) so I decided that its the best thing to do. Excpet I made it a "kind of remember" LOL

 
And Yes, I think it's very much like UV to use things to his advantage, so I couldnt help myself but letting him milk the injury!Wink
 
Thanks for the input!Smile

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Posted: 25 January 2012 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srishaa16

One word WHOOPEEE!!!Sorry had to do that manyata ban rahi hai Uday ki
Dhinkachika Dhinkachika Dhinkachika Dhinkachika
Re e e e Re e e e
ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL
I started picturing Manyata dancing to the song!
Thank you for reading Srishaa, I'm glad you enjoed it! Hug
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Posted: 25 January 2012 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by IndigoBlues

amazing chapter yaar..Shocked i mean what a pov of uday...how can you write so freaking in-depth...plus, i felt like skipping majnu parts but the sadist in me wanted to know he felt on seeing manveer so close.LOLWink

waiting for 11!Embarrassed

hehehe! The sadist in me wanted him to realize that UV and M are meant for eachother, and feel their connectionLOLBig smileWink

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Posted: 25 January 2012 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Okay, so those were 30 mins of pure heaven (Yes, I'm a slow readerEmbarrassed) , but girl that was just BEAUTIFUL, it felt so real, for a second I thought this all was actually happening in the real world ... and all the media fiasco, the romantic pictures in the news paper, believe it or not I actually felt like I was seeing them infront of my eyesDay Dreaming, that's how good the writing was !!! Ohh and I absolutely love the whole hatred being chucked at Akash indirectly and in the sweetest manner from you Wink The update was soo realistic... I was completely lost , unaware of my surroundings, and then my screen saver went on, distracting my world of ManVeer, and yep that's when it struck me ... that this was a FanFic. Big smile Loved It Heart ... I hope my comment isn't too long, but then again you work so hard with fantastic updates, this is the least I can do to thank you Embarrassed Continuee Soon xxx

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Posted: 25 January 2012 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
hayyye wot a update yaar loveddd it it was so0o0o0o0 magical avani part was funny! bt the rest was awesome ax always n thnk u so0o0o0o0o0o much for such a long update... love u loads do write moreSmile

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Posted: 25 January 2012 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
hey by the way sorry if i spell uncorrect...
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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Your stories r so great and by the way reeha...k I was wondering when Uday is going to give her the book he took in part 4.I can hardly wait for part 11!!

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