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The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 27)

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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 4:48pm | IP Logged
And the suit you pictured Manyata wearing is beautiful!  It suits her perfectly, because it's simple and elegant yet still beautiful!  Nice choice!  


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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
thanks for update loved it!

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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shrarrti

How can you say there isn't excitement?  You have Udhay and Manyata questioning what it is they are feeling, and you don't consider that exciting!  I was so hooked!  You are just so talented!  Smile

Please, please, please, put part 10 up soon!  I wonder if Udhay's gift will revive some of her childhood memories?  
LOLWell, it wasn't as err...romantic? as number 8. I'm glad you liked it Preet! I try to make it as animated as I can, but I end up having more discriptive and internal dialogueEmbarrassed. Thank you for reading! I always look forward to your advice and feedback Hug
Originally posted by shrarrti

And the suit you pictured Manyata wearing is beautiful!  It suits her perfectly, because it's simple and elegant yet still beautiful!  Nice choice!
 
Thank you!!!! I loved this suite when I saw it! I was actually looking at some for myself to show my mom what I wanted; and I saw this and said "Well, I want this one, but wouldn't Manyata look awesome in it too"Wink. Personally I'm a big fan of white clothing, and I'd love to see Manveer match it out for an episode after the makeover!Big smile
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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 5:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by reeha...k

This is what I imagined in my mind!Smile


This Salwaar Suit is just perfect for M.. Me luvin how you are actually putting your time and effort even to put the image of the dress tht you have imagined in the part...
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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 5:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by limbu.simmy

Reeha.. Firstly a round of appaluse for such a great part Clap Clap 

Just luvd everything..Smile From UVs reactions to his emotions and Manyatas sudden feelings.. Its just sooo lovely.. And luvd how you've actually potrayed the media..Smile Thts just reality.. I simply adored it.. Heart

Can't wait for another part.. This part actually made me jump out of bed, Open my lappy and comment it.. As i was reading frm the cell and found it taking ages to type the comment.. Wink

This part is simply great.. Thumbs Up Thumbs Up ..You sure have got perfect writing skillsSmile  unlike me.. Can't even write during my exams.. But thts just me LOL..

Overall a great part..StarKeep up the gud wrk..Thumbs Up


Simmy


Thank you Simmy! Hug And yes, commenting from Cell phones is difficult: I can't format the colours and font the way I want!Ouch

First off, I appreciate it that you always take time to tell me what stuck out with you most: It helps me point on scenes for the next one! Trust me, this is a nice break for me too! ..
I should have been writing my psych and business notes...but I didnt feel like it: I felt like writing the next part instead!Embarrassed.

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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by meerakhan45

Tollay crazy... ufff im gonna die soon.. heheh

Okay like i have said before... im tottaly crazy about the detail u write... it feels like im reading a book.. OMG i love it like alllways...
When i read this i smile, laugh and blush hehehhe
Ur stories have every "Masala" that a story needs...
Its beautiful how u desreib the feelings for each other.. I  salut u fur thisThumbs Up

well, Meera this hug is for you then: Hug

I'm glad you enjoy reading this; its only worth writing if someone other then myself and my sister enjoys itLOL



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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 5:45pm | IP Logged
Hey!! That was such a sweet part..I would like to see Moniya falling for him..Maybe showing more concern..I absolutely adore your portrayal of Uday

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Posted: 19 January 2012 at 6:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shiv-gauri4eva

Hey!! That was such a sweet part..I would like to see Moniya falling for him..Maybe showing more concern..I absolutely adore your portrayal of Uday

Trust me! I'll get it thereWink

...but first I need to get rid of AkashAngry
...I've already thought of how as well Big smile
 
Thank you so much for reading dear (I'm sorry I don't know your name, please be sure to tell me! Since you always comment and give me your feedback, I'd like to atleast call you by your nameLOL)
I'll keep your suggestion in mind, and maybe speed it upEmbarrassed

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