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The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 19)

reeha...k IF-Rockerz

Joined: 05 September 2006
Posts: 7556

Posted: 14 January 2012 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angel_20

hey gal Reeha right!!!Wink
jus finished readin all of the chronicles n let me tell u did an awesome job writing these loved gal especially cause u were thinkin from Uday's point of view from his mind which i loved cause i could actual see all of this happening all the chronicles very beautiful n romantic!!!!ClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStar 5 stars 4 such great great writing really have no words!!!!!!!!Wink
soo plzzz do continue writing more n when u do write more plzzz PM so tht i can read right then n comment on it as well!!!!SmileBig smile
once again really loved n thnks 4 sharin it with all of us MANVEER crazy fans jus like u!!!!!!Embarrassed
Thank you Angel! I'm glad you enjoyed them! I'll be sure to add you to the PM list.! Smile

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SRJKiMahakaali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 17645

Posted: 15 January 2012 at 7:17am | IP Logged
it was fantastic, i liked the 1st scene and uday,s pov for Manyata
--ANGEL-- IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 4349

Posted: 15 January 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged
awesome part...loved the manveer scenes...plz update me

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MsLuscious IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 9112

Posted: 15 January 2012 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Hey i loveddd it seriously it wox mind blowing amazing!ClapClap and honestly i dont like flashbackxx s0o for me itx ur best update uptil now plzzz write more n fast cox i cant wait for the next part have already read it 10 times SmileSmileSmile and do PM me ur nxt update

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IndigoBlues IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 9375

Posted: 15 January 2012 at 10:16am | IP Logged
it was total genius! Shocked i mean kahaan se mila tumhe yeh idea? Confused they should do a 'old idea ka new idea' and put you in dek cv team yaar..ROFLEmbarrassed loved it..add me to the pm list! Smile

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-scarlett- IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3585

Posted: 15 January 2012 at 11:43am | IP Logged
HAWWW!! How do you do it!!??? Seriously!!! That was freaking AMAZING!! Briliance just poured through each sentence!
So entertaining and Uday's thoughts...mmmwaaahh!! Too good!

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meerakhan45 Groupbie

Joined: 06 December 2011
Posts: 194

Posted: 15 January 2012 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by reeha...k

Originally posted by meerakhan45

I have one request.. plzzz dont goo too much in flashback, becouse it take most of the time, but otherwice u are a giftet writer...
p.s. Cant wait for the next update...
Lotz of love XOXO

Meera (is it all right if I call you that?) I will keep that in mind. To be honest I was planning on making them rarities in the sense that they happen on serious occasion down the road, because Uday's memories of Manyata are slim (in a sense of years) BUT there will be relevent ones which I hope to use down the road. Thank you for sharing your Thoughts and I will definatly keep that in mind!Hug
Yeah sure u can call me Meera... thanks for the replay on my feedaback..
i feel all those who is reading ur stories are very lucky becoz u repley them
trouble_006 Goldie

Joined: 08 April 2011
Posts: 2349

Posted: 15 January 2012 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
great piece of work...luvd each n every part of it...UV's character has been shown so flawlessly...cont soon n plz do add me in ur pm list

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