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The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 13)

shrarrti Senior Member
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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 6:11pm | IP Logged
You're doing a great job!  I didn't see any Hindi errors, but then again my Hindi isn't all that great either.  I love how you have both their points of view!  Finally some one has gotten inside Udhay's head!  I love it!  And them falling into the pool, is icing on the cake!

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
HAYE HAYE HAYEEE
loveddd it
I am literally dieing to read your next scene, Manyata and Uday in the POOL..
PLEASEEE CONTINUE SOON
Thank you sooo much for the PM
really appreciated it
Amazing chapter
..
Please continue soon, by the way approximately when will the next update be?Big smile
reeha...k IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by salekh1

HAYE HAYE HAYEEE
loveddd it
I am literally dieing to read your next scene, Manyata and Uday in the POOL..
PLEASEEE CONTINUE SOON
Thank you sooo much for the PM
really appreciated it
Amazing chapter
..
Please continue soon, by the way approximately when will the next update be?Big smile
 
Thank you my Dear! Hopefully same time next week; if not sooner?
I'm trying to make sure they're roughly the same length (I aim for 8 pages on MS Word as a template) just so it's consistant. I write when I get time, and once there's a sufficent amount and a nice break I postLOL
Not really the best system, but It's worked so farEmbarrassed.
I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far!
 


Edited by reeha...k - 05 January 2012 at 10:52pm
KaShfan7 Senior Member
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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
Thank you thank you thank you so much for the pm and this scene!
I just absolutely am loving it, your imagination and writing is just fab!
You really have the essence of Udayveer's character down right! And you're really doing a great job with Manyata's character as well!
Seriously I'm just loving it and can't wait for your next update!
Oh how I wish you could be the cv of DEK right now! 

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
love it! they fell into the pool now that is just  great!ROFL keep it up!

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Posted: 05 January 2012 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KaShfan7

Thank you thank you thank you so much for the pm and this scene!
I just absolutely am loving it, your imagination and writing is just fab!
You really have the essence of Udayveer's character down right! And you're really doing a great job with Manyata's character as well!
Seriously I'm just loving it and can't wait for your next update!
Oh how I wish you could be the cv of DEK right now! 

 
Wow! Major Thanks there! I hope I can keep up with this one now that you've said itLOL

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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 12:38am | IP Logged
i just loved the update it was amazing!!!
n i found the pizza part so cuteeeSmileBig smile...cant wait for the next update
pplease update soon

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Posted: 06 January 2012 at 2:15am | IP Logged

hey Reeha awesome update love the flash of Uday and Unnati. The lunch scene is very nice but Manyata is still drown in the thought of Akash hope she will move on soon.  The last partis too good ManVeer in the poolWink.  The next chapter is promising.

Plzzz update soon and thxs for the pmHug
 

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