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The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 (Page 101)

reeha...k IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsLuscious


N0body cn dislike ur ff reeha it was great amazing wel written awes0me l0vd evry bit of it! U r truly an amazing writer girl i lovd how you have explaind yash entry here m loving ur both ffs pls update jay chr0niclex t0o i wish u wud have been da writer da show den da show wudnt have been like itx n0w plx update s0on its always a treat reading ur updatex:)
Aww thank you! the JNCs will be updated later this week once I'm done!Wink

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 5:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by reeha...k

Originally posted by xxDaydreameRxx

This was an AMAZING update and definitely worth the wait!!
I just really loved Manyata in ur ff. Her initial reaction with the shoes made me laugh out loud and then the whole apology thing..im so happy u kept it realistic and she did what was best - make sure UV apologized instead of breaking all relations with him
ManVeer moments were EPIC as usual..and also really like the details about his friends as well as Mina and Manyata's bonding! didn't see that one coming and really the first half of the update made me smile. The second half however, was just too amazing. I loved the way you brought out Mina's emotions, her heartbreak, almost made me hate UV for it, but then love UV back again by showing that he did sincerely regret it.. i think thats the best part of this ff - the development of UV as a person. IDK if you always meant this UV to exist and Manyata brought it out, or Manyata changed him into this, or if its both - whatever it is - its amazing and its really what makes this ff so special, that its the story of the Prince Big smile Clap
 
I like Mina. I really do understand where she's coming from and even if you do decide to turn her into a vamp, I may hate what she does but I doubt I can ever hate her. In fact I empathize with her to the extent that I may even be okay with UV getting some of the hurt back, as evil as it sounds. Only a little, though, just enough to understand even a fraction of what Mina had to go through.
 
Thank you! The wait is pretty long, so I try to do my bestLOL
I think the issue I have with this M and UV (as Maisy pointed out) they are very different from the ones in the Show (except for UV; he went through a phase in the show were he acted like this one) I've made them tooo sweet. and sometimes I get a tooth ache. Hence why I'm trying to ensure that the romance is balanced with reactions and actions which are similar to their origional charecters: the nok joks, the insults, and the interactions. I went through a phase where it was getting too easy: Drama is obviously needed, hence why Mina is here.
 
I'm glad you like her: When I had her in my mind I wanted a charecter that some would love; others would hate: and others would have mixed emotions about.
 
Do you have any thoughts about how Mina is going to play out in Manveer's life? any prediction or thoughts?
 
I have a few readers who are usually bang on; and I've placed subtle (I think this is the MOST subtle I have EVER been) in the text: have you picked up on it?
 
 

Yea I agree, this Manyata is way too sensible and loveable then the one in the show! But I think we all like it that way so don't worry Big smile
Huh!? There's a clue!!??  Okay I'm gonna read your update again later  and then guess.. for now I have to get my ass of IF and study for French exam Dead

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Inkpen4877

Amazing and totally worth the wait!!! Not going to lie Mina? Totally crazy..that's all :-)
LOL Oh yeah.
She'll be back.
To be honest, she's not COMPLETELY psycho,
Just almost thereWink

LOL, not COMPLETELY psycho? Way to ruin my fun dear! Wink I cannot wait to see what else you have in store for her! OH and now I totally get chapter six of the JN chronicles! 

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Posted: 16 May 2012 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
REEEHA!! Hug
yayie!!Big smile you updated!!Big smile
I'm so glad you didn't stretch the mina thingy too long! and Manyata trusted UV, but was just hurt! i loved that! not the same old 'i don't trust you'!
But i'm sure mina will come with a bang! LOL
well there should some small twists and turns, that keeps the story moving.
The best part that i liked was that she stood up in UV's defense when mina didn't accept his apology.

and what mina went through was sad! i sympathize with her! But what Manyata said is right, she needs to get over the past, its been so many years. She has to move on!

And finally the UVC's has caught up with the JNC's
and when will you update jnc's??? i'm dying to read the next part!!Embarrassed

P.S- congrats on crossing 100 pages!Big smile

love
Navpreet



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Posted: 17 May 2012 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by reeha...k

Originally posted by akshi_t

ur long update was so worth the wait...just loved it to the core...really liked hw u showed UV's frnds and his relation wid them...totally loved hw m jst didn't break her relation UV rather asks him to apologize to mina fr hurting her...coming to mina i do understand her emotions her situation...bt still i just can't seem to like her...she well irritates me a bit...maybe more thn a bit :P...btw while i ws reading one of ur cmmnt in which u asked hw the readers think mina will pop bck up...it struck me...i cud be wrong...bt since i realized it maybe possible so i can't resist to ask u is mima the mina...yash's sis????...or is it jst a coicidence tht both of them hv the same name??...and plzz try to cont. as soon as u cn...can't wait fr the next chp...and plzz update the JNC's soon as well if possible :) 

LAWLS!

Oh goodness; I swear, I need someone to read things before I post them :')
It's just a weird coincidence. I really like the name Mina I guess; and one of my good friend's has that name! When I had written part 4 of the JNCs, I hadn't thought of "Mina Randhawa" of the UVCs: I just thought of Yash's sister's name that were simple, short and ambigious: meaning they could be WHITE, or EAST INDIAN because up until that point it seemed that Yash's 3 older sisters were completely  his; it's only in part 6 that we find out they're his half sister's from his father's previous marriage.
 
Yeah, I need to think of things twice before I post in the future! That would be mega confusion!
No, Yash's sister's (the Twins, are older then UV; and the youngest would be about his age) have nothing to do with Uday! LOL! I feel like smacking my forehead! I can't believe I missed that!

Good eye! and I SWEAR I'm not lieing. I had to lie about the Aryan- Yash Ryan thing because I didn't think that through and realized the names are do similar. Seems like I'm having too many blond moments as of late.
 
As for the JNC's 7: I'm working on it right now, so it should be up later this week! Big smile

lolzz...thx fr clearing it out...well i didn't thought about the age factor and all since i don't remember any of theirs (i mean the sisters)...actually i didn't even rem their names...but was pretty sure one of them was named mina...weird...tht of all the 3 i remembered just mina...i guess it's a catchy name after all...LOL...and now tht u mentioned aryan and yash ryan one...hw cum i didn't see it??...Shocked...bt i knew tht yash and aryan are the same person so well...i'll be waiting fr ue next update on jnc's this week...eager to read it!!! Big smile

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Posted: 18 May 2012 at 2:12am | IP Logged
thank you for continuing with tis ff!!!!
i absolutely love it... and the best thing is how u show the same scene from different perspectives... from j's pov and from uday's pov...
loved uday and manyata's relationship... it is strong and the best thing is that they have no illusions about each other... they truly love each other with all their better and worse parts!!!!
p.s. is mina yash's sister???

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Posted: 18 May 2012 at 9:02am | IP Logged
amazing loved the way manyta stood up for UV ...continue soon

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Posted: 18 May 2012 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Hi Reeha Hug hopeu r fine
Awesome update babe ...love the part Manveer confrontation with Mina...and M phrase regarding Mina hasn't moved on yetClapClapClap
Update whenever u can dear
TC ...love ya Hug

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