Originally posted by: dekhaekkhawabAwesome...more than awesome...out of the word...loved it...πππi just wanna say the way you detail the scene with nailing it perfectly with your words, it feels like the scene in going on right in front of me. Maybe that's why I read your lengthy updates in one go...really reeha...π€
i was waiting for ur update for so long...thank u sooo much for the long update...π³really u r awesome gal...πππi got goosebumps on MINA's dialogues(in uv's apology part)...βοΈ βοΈβοΈβοΈi can understand it take lots of time and mind to write such updates but still i will say UPDATE SOON...π³and again...loved ur UVC to the core of my heart...π€
Aww, thank you!
Originally posted by: BlueRobbinalso, i just wanta thank-you for ur hard work!!!!πβοΈππΌ
The Udayveer Chronicles are very well written,~~~~~~~so much detail!!!!!!πluv manveerπ³~~~~u display their feelings sooo perfectly!!!!!!!!!π
luv yaa!!!!!!!!!!!π€π
Thank you! I do my best; its you guys that make the story a success, so thanks for reading! We've got over 100 PAGES! Amazing!
...is it safe to say that this FF is the biggest Monster in the DEK family? π
Originally posted by: Inkpen4877Amazing and totally worth the wait!!! Not going to lie Mina? Totally crazy..that's all :-)
Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxxThis was an AMAZING update and definitely worth the wait!!
I just really loved Manyata in ur ff. Her initial reaction with the shoes made me laugh out loud and then the whole apology thing..im so happy u kept it realistic and she did what was best - make sure UV apologized instead of breaking all relations with himManVeer moments were EPIC as usual..and also really like the details about his friends as well as Mina and Manyata's bonding! didn't see that one coming and really the first half of the update made me smile. The second half however, was just too amazing. I loved the way you brought out Mina's emotions, her heartbreak, almost made me hate UV for it, but then love UV back again by showing that he did sincerely regret it.. i think thats the best part of this ff - the development of UV as a person. IDK if you always meant this UV to exist and Manyata brought it out, or Manyata changed him into this, or if its both - whatever it is - its amazing and its really what makes this ff so special, that its the story of the Prince π πI like Mina. I really do understand where she's coming from and even if you do decide to turn her into a vamp, I may hate what she does but I doubt I can ever hate her. In fact I empathize with her to the extent that I may even be okay with UV getting some of the hurt back, as evil as it sounds. Only a little, though, just enough to understand even a fraction of what Mina had to go through.
Originally posted by: sim1623I am loving it! I am up at 1:00 am at a school night reading this! This is how much I love ur story!! I don't read JN chronicles but I am glad to see that you brought those two stories together :D please update faster this time! Loved it!
Simran :D...
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