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oh this update was amazing. unfortuntaley I can't give you an indepth comment today - I am way too sleepy. I may come back and edit this, I may not.
[but I absolutely love that you have manyata realising jai's loneliness and pain, and empathising. jai doesn't need sympathy, she needs empathy. and I also love that manyata is still a little bit of moniya - she's all princess, but with the same undercurrent of steel and stubbornness. the end, the 'oh meri' is probably the best thing ever - all I could think of was that uday took it the complete other way vijay intended, uday's thinking yes, she is mine. *squee*]
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