The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 - Page 52

Posted: 12 years ago
😊😛😳IM JUST LEFT AMAZED
Reeha.. THAT WAS sooo HOT AND SENSOUSE!
i loooved loveD LOVED there date, and the ending was just WOAH😳
Awesomey done!!
Please pelaseee continue and keep writing! Really bring Hapiness to this forum!!
Awesome job like always😃
Posted: 12 years ago
Reeha...Amazing part. Loved the whole concept of wooing with red roses. Love the way Brijraj and M are bonding. Its so endearing. I really liked the outfits. Its amazing how you make it so lavish and still simple.
 
Great Part
Posted: 12 years ago
OMG are you kidding..it was definitely one of my favorite parts!! And i absolutely adore Uday in your FF!! We should forward your FF tot the CVs :)
Posted: 12 years ago
OMG u r AWESOME!!!!!!! loved ur ff...plzzz cont soon n pm me on d next part
Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it Reeha...Wish this happens in DEK too😉
Add me to your PM list😃
Posted: 12 years ago
OMG REEHA!!!!!
I soo LOVED it!!
the whole valentine thing was just so cute!!
i mean i just couldn't help smiling in the entire update, be it brijraj teasing manyata or Udayveer giving a rose to manyata daily or the whole evening they spent together!
it was so beautiful! and who said the updte wasn't good?! it was great!
AND they finally kissed!!😃😳
and the part -

Damned stubborn woman. I give in. I'll do it. I'll kiss her. Screw her doing it first, because she obviously won't. She notices me leaning in, and I know she knows what's going to happen, her eyes close,  lips part, and finally I can do what I've been waiting to do ...iterally- forever. Kiss her.

hahahaha!! but in the end after it rained SHE kissed him!😆
i sooo sooo loved the update!
thank you for such a beautiful update! 🤗

love
Navpreet



Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for an aesome start to my weekend. if this chapter is slow then all I can say is te readers of ur ff are in for a real treat cause it was too good. especially after the disastrous Valentine episode of DEK. Her outfits are stunning... now I'm jelous cause I  dont wear Indian outfits. I really enjoyed Manyata being pro active with her feelings for once . She initiating the kiss I'm sure satisfied all who read this. Thanks for the pm in advance. Enjoy ur weekend !!!
Posted: 12 years ago
UnReserved

wow!! such a beautiful update

loved it
every morning with rose..☺️ and specially the red one..

and manyata's wait for the rose..
and their official date..

wow perfectly written👏

cont soon
Edited by thejazzgal - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Reserved..Just Saw That You Have Updated...Me Running To Read The update..😊
Edited by Surya.Ravi - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
wow!! and btw great choice of outfit. i loved both

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