Originally posted by: dimpzz...
REEEHAAA!!! 🤗
Did i tell you i absolutely LOVE your name?!?love the way it sounds!😳
oh and exams eh!? how did they go?? i know it might generally be like dude who cares about how they went, just glad that they are over!😆 at least thats how it is for me!😃
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Oh and the best part i liked in the update even more than their about-to-happen-kiss was when udayveer showed his middle finger to the driver behind him 🤣 i absolutely loved that part! and to be honest i actually read that part like 4-5 times! i mean that poor guy can't do such stuff cause he's a royal and whenever he gets to do such stuff i so so sooo love it!😃
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Originally posted by: salekh1😉OKAY
wOAHHH REEHA😳
you always always out do your selfEvery time i think it cant get better, IT GETS BETTERthis i beleive was the most HOT, SENSOUSE, PLAYFUL, AND UNDERSTANDING chapter of allI LOVEEED EVERY SINGLE WORD.Loved how uday became possesive..and really really want tto read more😃What happens?CANT WIATpleaseee pelaseee continue soon 😃Thank you so much for the PM😳
Originally posted by: Manasi_16Brilliantly written reeha...as always👏👏👏👏
You brought out Uday's hesitance very well...whilst he is very used to dealing with girls & having them wanting him...it is the first time HE is wanting the girl. His confusion, his inability to understand his feelings...typically FIRST LOVE type experience!!!! Simply superb!
The beach time was portrayed very nicely...both exploring each other...getting to know their own selves also! Loved the philosophy - If we renovate something, or add something on, that's not to say we don't love it, or like it...but rather that we need it to change with us, as our needs change- it's a simple fact of life Manyata. It's not about destroying the old, but enhancing it to make it new. Never knew our Yuvraj Udayveer was capable of such thoughts😳
Its good to see Manyata's increasing comfort level with UV!!
This part seems very important from the perspective of the whole story...quite a turning point...where Manyata's perspective of Uday as well as Akash is undergoing major shifts😊
Looking fwd to the next update!
Thank you for waiting- I know it took a while before M started warming up to UV (I am a slooowww writer!😆) but I'm happy the change is noticable- not only in M and UV but in Akash- his change is VERRY important in this story as well😉Originally posted by: tvlover92...
Uday: In order to get into my head, you have to let me get into yours.
Manyata: Hmmm, well there's nothing to get into.
Uday: Thank God you said it- It would have been rude if I said it.
Gosh! These two stubborn people!! 🤣 😃Just because they're in love doesnt mean we need to lose the comic edge, no?😉
I can feel like I'm falling when she opens her eyes...Manyata has to want me. *dead* *completely and utterly dead* And then I read this: In a flash she pushed me away and started swimming, her laughter matching the trail of water behind her. REEHA! 😡 I got excited! Pst. 😭😆 I was expecting to get killed after the stunt I Pulled: TWICE. Trust me, I was getting excited and while typing was thinking "Just do it Reeha- Let them kiss you b*tch!" but I took a deep breath *be patient Reeha, be patient, not yet, not yet* and controlled myself! It was difficult, I tell you.😳
AKASH! CHIKI! WHY, REEHA, WHY?! *tears a few hairs in process* *reads, holding back her tears of betrayal caused by one of her FF writers* OOH, WAIT! A PUNCH TO THE JAW! A PUNCH TO THE JAW! I LOVE dishoom dishooms! 🤣 I LOVE DISHOOM DISHOOMS TOO! God, if it were up to me UV would kick Majnu's butt every time he sees the little squirrel. BUT realisitically that is not possible, hence why I let UV get it all out in this one---maybe later as well?😉 I'm sorry again about the teasing (regards to the Manveer kiss almost happening) but don't worry, I WILL make up for it and redeam myself in your eyes😳
I loved the entire action sequence. The raging emotions fueled by Majnu's lack of understanding. The dude just needs to grow past his infatuation for the princess. He needs to wake up. I know people say love is blind but is it really? I think love sees the other person for what he/she is, sees what is going around them, understands it... Sadly, Akash lacks that ability. No wonder it's not love. Are you trying to showcase that? Oh, please tell me my 🤓y analyzing worked! You know what, this thought has actually inspired me to write out a post...because I think what I am trying to dictate in the UVCs in regards to Akash...is possible. It would be awesome if some watered down version of this happens. It could actually work. 🤔
And oh, "the meatball headed girl" - Niiice! 🤣 Hey! I gotta give my girl a shout-out ya know? 😎
You could not have left it with a better ending than the "I love you, Manyata" and her wordlessly telling it back to him - I am having a BIG smile on my face now. I love how you pen down UV-M's emotions, their banters, their thoughts... It's obviously so close to what we feel when we are with a special person...
ink LAWLS. For a moment I didnt see the "not" between the words "could" and " have" and I thought to myself...oh crap what a Fail. Too soon, he shouldnt have said I love you if that's what Lamia is saying. THEN I re-read it a couple times and give myself this: LOL. Thank you- I think UV realizes he loves her...and willing to say it. Manyata can't but UV is intutive enough to read her face.
Thank you for your LOVELY analysis, and I look forward to the next one!🤗
Originally posted by: meerakhan45hey girl... Okay today i didnt wnet to attend my classes becoz i was sick, which first time in my life im happy that im sick becoz i have time to read ur FF full without any disturing...
I have 3 word to descreib this FF 1: intertaiment 2: intertaiment and 3: intertaiment...
I loveddd it... be honsert and tell how u manage to write everything so clean... its like perfect... everything have their own time to come and emotions and feeling everything is like their own time... OMG these moments between UV and M made me out of breath. Okay reeha im very very emotional becoz of the last scenes between UV and M so i really cant write anymore...
Here is ur stars : ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️10 out of 10... Everythign was perfect... Im sooo exited to the next part... love u reeha and wish once again a very happy valetinesday... ( i know its littel late) anyway looking forward to the next FF...
Originally posted by: -Mais-Aaah! Reeha! Loved the update! Gosh, I didn't hate the Aakash from the show with such passion like I hate the one in this chapter! What a loser! AS IF she needs your love and acceptance to even breathe?! GROW UP MAJNU!!!!
The chapter was beautiful and beachy :P Hayye, their playfulness, their comfort and the passion all mixed together. Uff! Though I would say this just as a personal opinion, I am not too fond of the breath-taking passion that Uday feels. I dunno why. But it's just ME! Ok! Just saying on my own. Not the general opinion. You portray the feelings beautifully no doubt but to each it's own right?
You just HAD to put ChiKash na? very good girl! I am proud of you! :P The sadist in me was partying like no tomorrow when Uday beat the hell out of Majnu. Was reminded of the blasting episode. Thank you SO MUCH for that! The end literally made me jump. OMG! Update fast fast! CAN'T WAIT NOW!
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Uff! What a class. Feel like a teacher now. But Papa says it is better to teach the other person HOW it's done rather than just correcting the other person's mistakes. Not a famous quote but it helps a lot 😛 Hope this was a help for you! 😉
Originally posted by: reeha...k
Maisy my love! Thank you!!! 🤗Thank you for hating this Akash- he is meant to hate, so we can hate him openly here, without worrying about "bashing" because he is such scum in the UVCs, nah?😉😆I get it, it's a little too much to fathom for some people- it's almost like if you've read a bajillion cheesy romance novels like I have, it's not a big deal. AND it's almost impossible to see so clearly into UVs head, so we'd never get this type of reaction, especially on Indian TV. At the same time, boys will be boys, so I'm sure UV will eventually feel this way about M- it will just be articulated in a faaar more PG way😆. Well...you might not enjoy 14 then. BUT I PROMISE...one the first kiss is DONE...it will be less gag worthy👍🏼I HAD to give my second-favourite-onscreen couple- in DEK a shout out! 😉Trust me, Majnu brings out the SADIST in ALL OF US. I have never really been an "action" fan, but if it's Majnu getting beat up, I am sooo for it!😃Thank you for your help, your father is COMPLETELY correct- it really helped when you showed me how to do it, this way I'll have a point of reference and can always look back and infere what I should do next, so THANK YOU! 🤗
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