The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 - Page 37

😳That was Simply BINDBLOWING

CANT WAIT 4 PART 12 !!!! 😃

Awwwiiieee  Reehuu!! Congos!! Love ya too! The way u write is fab so take some credit gal!!  

Originally posted by: reeha...k

WOW! I just saw the post and there are over 20,000 views!

I don't know who all the readers are, but can I just give you guys a

big big big big big:

 

 

You guys are awesome, silent readers or vocal ones: I really apprecate it!😊

Congo For This...👏👏

Reeha - anytime girl! There's nothing technically wrong with your Hindi but just the spelling errors. I will give pointers on them when I come across them. But it's not that your spellings are terribly wrong but I have his strange "keera" of wanting to see perfect romanized Hindi and Urdu :P

Hi Reeha meri jaan 🤗 sorry for coming late dear

Originally posted by: reeha...k

WOW! I just saw the post and there are over 20,000 views!

I don't know who all the readers are, but can I just give you guys a

big big big big big:

 

 

You guys are awesome, silent readers or vocal ones: I really apprecate it!😊

First of all, Congratulations! 🥳It was only possible because of you and your work! 👏  ⭐️

About the update ... Absolutely awesome! 😃
Love how both Manyata and Udayveer are confused! Manyata is slowly letting her guard down without even realising and Udayveer is starting to acknowledge the idea that he is actually in loveee 😳 Totally love it  😛

And that scene ... so passionate and personal despite the onlookers. Well, the only thing I can say 2 Majnu and J is Budi nazar wale tera mu kaala  😡
 
Awww... How Manyata was blushiing and DS knew something was going on. Soo tweet!  😳

Personally I reeally like how youve involved  other characters too - a refreshing change.

Omg UV and Majnu face-off was too good yaar! Proper intense 👍🏼
But I cant u let Majnu have the last word 😒 
*UV Style*  Tsk tsk tsk, not fair ha Princess.
I really want to see UV get full revenge off Majnu for invading their privacy and spying on them.😡

Lovely update. You seriously have some magical writing powers ... I tell you!😃

Love,

Zunaira

Originally posted by: pri01

Hi Reeha meri jaan 🤗 sorry for coming late dear

 

Reeha each time I read your FF I run out of words to express myself...you write so beautifully dear and Part 11 is marvelous⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️❤️❤️ love every bit of it

 

Loved the way you described Manyata fighting with her inner feelings and slowly but steadily she is on her way to understand the true meaning of love.

What can I say about the kiss ... it was so sweet wow☺️☺️

Yeh J aur Akash always in wrong place at the wrong time😡😡 they witnessed ManVeer private moment anyway it's good at least  they have sensed that ManVeer are soulmates.

 

Finally Manyata has accepted her family and loved UV and Akash confrontation

 

Waiting eargerly for the next chapter.

 

Hey Reeha I have a request hope you won't mind ...whenever Manyata will fall for her UV and ManVeer will be together I want a magical first kiss and I trust you on that😉...I know I am besharam😳😆 

 

 

 

GAAAH!!! Priya!! I was waiting for you lovie!!!🤗

Originally posted by: -SweetDreams-

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And that scene ... so passionate and personal despite the onlookers. Well, the only thing I can say 2 Majnu and J is Budi nazar wale tera mu kaala  😡
 
Awww... How Manyata was blushiing and DS knew something was going on. Soo tweet!  😳

Personally I reeally like how youve involved  other characters too - a refreshing change.

Omg UV and Majnu face-off was too good yaar! Proper intense 👍🏼
But I cant u let Majnu have the last word 😒 
*UV Style*  Tsk tsk tsk, not fair ha Princess.
I really want to see UV get full revenge off Majnu for invading their privacy and spying on them.😡

Lovely update. You seriously have some magical writing powers ... I tell you!😃

Love,

Zunaira

Thank you Zunaira (btw, that is a beautiful name!) Thanks! I know it's a little iffy having scenes with other secondary charecters, but I think it's important. Although, the core is still Manveer😉

I know! I'm sorry I gave Akash the Last word...but it was important..to get UV thinking.