Lolz, I have been reading this for the past few days and finally finished reading. It seemed a little boring in the first few chapters when they were children but as Uday started to grow up, I started liking it. And now that they are grown up and together, just LOVE it! Reeha! You are amazing! Love the plot of it! Sure, there are some minor typos in some English words and major typos in Hindi ones but they can be easily ignored. The Hindi ones catch my eyes often but since you are weak at Hindi I'll forgive you :P Catching this opportunity to tell you, if you need translation from English to Hindi; I can help. Because this FF is bloody awesome! I want it to remain so!
The shopping scenes were awesome. My head was spinning reading those designer names...would defo ask you for help regarding them. You know them better than I do anyway. Also, your FF is inspiring so many short scenes in me. HAVE to write them. Will give proper credit don't worry.
Update update update! Can't wait to read more you awesome writer!!
awesome update loved everyone of the chapter found this today loved it the emotions were perfectly done they were heart felt wonderfully written the emotion were perfect their bonding is growing its good to see feel in love with maya and uday i like her more in your ff is awesome please pm me can't wait for the next update and pleas put english translation for the hindi use please thanking you in advance
have been a silent member of this forum but after reading your beautiful story couldn't stop myself...
the way you've portrayed Udayveer, his blossoming relation with manyata, manyata's slow transformation is truly amazing. i wish the show had been like this. and thank you for giving manyata the much needed makeover. just thinking about those scenes when they got out of the hotel sends me into my own sweet dreamland😃. how i wish i was "his princess"!!!!!😳
you are an amazing writer and i do hope you'll continue soon
really very good..i simply loved this fanfic..you know i'am reading the updates again & again...simply superbbb...very well written...keep it up..please do pm me when you update & continue soon..😊
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