SwaRon FF - "Hum pe meherbaan do jahaan" - Page 4

WOW YAR BANG ON!!!

Wow Kiddo..ure FF toh is already a hit.😃..

Great going..and do pm me whnever u update..i need to catch up this FF😉

u write really well

Kash ye sb hume dekhne ko milta... We had enough of sad swaron... [0]When you're gonna update the next chapter?[/COLOR]

OMG!!!
Mujhe pata nhi tha, u update here also!! Mujhe pm nhi kiya!! :/
I LUVD IT!!!
U knw na, mene pehle bhi kaha tha, dis is just mind-blowing!!
U knw lyk tanha's acting, v cnt believe dat it's ur first time!!
Dis is just fab!!
Koi wrds hi nhi he!! *speechless*
Luv u!! Vaise bhi nd isske liye bhi!!
Now update soon nd pm me!!

i din read ur FF til nao but luks interesting so plz pm me.
wil rew. 1ce finish readinG!! :]

SHARON KA ACCIDENT...
nD swayam is takn care of her...KYA HUA????


m eagerly w8ng 4 u 2 update...hadh hogayi yaar aab tho update karo...mujhse aur intezaar nai hora hai...nd plzz pm me

hey, its awesome...plzz pm me wen u update the nxt part...

this is really good i hope u update soon Please PM me when u do :P

WOW that was amazing and plz pm me when u update