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SS - Heart of the Sea (Thread 2 added at Pg 131) (Page 10)

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 7:38am | IP Logged
i am damn sure palak ka bhai adi toh geet ka bhi bhai bt palak ka bhai maan geet ka kuch aur... really a gr8 part. continue soon. really excited abt the meeting

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nice part anna.

cont soon.

waiting for the first meeting of maan n geet.

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Please Add me to your PM list and updt ASAP...I can tell it will be a gr8 story

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UPDATING PART 2

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL MY FRIENDS... MAY THIS NEW YEAR BRINGS LOT OF HAPPINESS TO ALL... PLEASE KEEP ON SUPPORTING ME IN MY WRITINGS

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Palak, Geet and Aditya reach home''.. Palak and Geet went ahead and Aditya was coming from behind'.. Looking at the huge Mansion Geet was shocked and was reluctant to go inside'' She just stopped at the door.

 

Palak: Geet kya hua''.. Why did you stop here??? Chal andar chal

 

Geet (stammering): Palak I mean''

 

Palak: Kya hua Geet''..

 

Geet: I can not stay with you'''

 

Palak: What??? I mean why??? What happen to you suddenly''

 

Geet: Palak your house is so big and I come from such a '''.

 

Palak did not allowed her to complete her sentence and says: Ohhh so Geet does not care for her best friend also'.. She thinks that'..

 

Geet: Shut up Palak you know very well I don't have any one apart from you and you are saying all this things

 

Palak: You shut up with all your emotional things and chal chup chap andar''..

 

Geet: Palak but''

 

Palak: Just shut up'..

 

Aditya also joins them

 

Aditya: Kya hua aap log yaha kyu rukh gaye'.. andar nahi jana hai kya???

 

Palak: Yeh madam adar chale tab na''..

 

Geet: Palak

 

Palak: Kya Palak'.. Did I say anything wrong''.

 

Aditya: Why are you both fighting??? What happen

 

Palak tells Aditya what Geet told

 

Aditya: Geet it happens but don't worry consider this as your own house'.

 

Palak: Ab chale mujhe bhook lagi hai

 

They all go inside''..

 

Palak shows Geet her room and tells

 

Palak: Geet get fresh and come down we will have food together'..

 

Geet: Ok and thanks for everything

 

Palak: If you once again say thanks or any such thing just remember I will not talk to you at all'..

 

Geet goes and hugs Palak and says: You are my world''.. If you do this I wont able to stay without you

 

Both had tears in their eyes''. Palak leaves and both get ready and comes to the dining hall'..

 

They have their food and suddenly Geet realises that Aditya is not there

 

Geet: Where is Adi Bhai????

 

Palak: He has gone for some work''..

 

Geet: Ohhh'' I will start searching for job from tomorrow'..

 

Palak: First take rest and settle down then we will decide about it'.. Anyways I am feeling so sleepy''

 

Geet: Even me yaar'.. this travelling was so tiring''

 

They both say good night and depart to their respective room''

 

It was around 4.30 in the morning

 

Geet woke up from her sleep hearing some noice'' She got scared'..

 

Geet (self talk) : Yeh adhi raat ko awaz kaha se arahi hai'' and suddenly the noise stopped'. She tried to sleep but was not able to sleep'.. She started searching for water but found jug to be empty'.  (self talk): Chal Geet kitchen mai jake panni pete hai'..

 

She went into Kitchen and again heard some noice'..  She got scared'. She tried to look and found a very well build up person was taking out something from the fridge.

 

Geet (self talk): Who is he??? What is he doing in the kitchen'.. He must be some chor'' She holds a stick which was lying near to her and was just about to hit closing her eyes'.. at the same time the person who was taking out some thing from the fridge just turned around and sees that the girl is coming forward to hit him'.. He holds her hand tightly and just stares at her and Geet's eyes is close'''.

 

Geet opens her eyes and was about to scream but that handsome man puts his hand on her mouth'..

 

Person: Who are you??? And what are you doing here???? And you were about to hit me?????

 

Geet who was still struggling to tells with her eyes to remove his hand from her mouth''..

 

Person removes the hand and says: Now tell me'.

 

Geet: Chor chor chor'''

 

Person: Kaha hai chor'''

 

Geet: Tum ho chor aur fridge mai se kya chura rahe ho''..

 

Person: Kyaaa''.. Have you lost it'' This is my house'''.

 

Geet: Now that I have caught you'.. you are saying all this reason''

 

Person (was losing his temper): Just shut up'''

 

Geet: Chor chor chor (start screaming loudly)

 

Before he could again hold Geet, Geet just got scared and started running'. Hearing her scream''.. Palak and Aditya and other servants of the house woke up from sleep and started running wondering what happen'''''.

 

While Geet was screaming and running she bangs herself with Palak'

 

Palak: Geet why are you screaming at midnight???? Kya hua'''

 

Geet (controlling herself): Palak there is a chor in house'..

 

Palak (scared): What Chor???? Where is he????...

 

Geet: There in the kitchen'''

 

Aditya comes near them and says: Why are you both screaming??? What happen''

 

Palak: Adi Bhai Geet saw a chor'' He is there''..

 

Geet: Ya I saw there in the kitchen''

 

Aditya: What Chor in kitchen??? What will Chor do in Kitchen'..

 

Geet: No I saw him he was there''

 

Aditya: Ok chalo'' Show me''

 

They walk towards Kitchen and sees the person standing with his hand folded''

 

Geet (screams): See I told you he is still there'.. Kaisa Chor hai itna chilla rahi thi phir bhi yahi khada hai'''

 

Aditya: Where is Chor????

 

Geet pointing finger at the person''..

 

Palak sees and runs towards him and hugs him and says: Bhai when did you come'. I thought you are coming tomorrow''

 

Person: I finished my work and came early'.. How are you gudiya'..

 

Geet just staring at both of them''

 

Aditya: Geet Geet'..

 

Geet: Ha'.

 

Aditya: kya hua'. Where are you lost''..

 

Geet: Who kaun'..

 

Palak: Kya Geet dara diya'. Yeh to Maan bhai hai, Maan bhai yeh Geet meri best friend''

 

Maan walks to Geet and says''..

 

Maan: Hiii Geet'''

 

Geet (scared) : sorry'''

 

Maan: Answer to Hiii is sorry''..

 

Geet: No I am sorry''

 

Maan: Its ok'..

 

Geet: Sorry''

 

Maan gets irritate and says: Enough'. Chup

 

Palak: Geet ab sone chale ya abhi bhi chor ko dhundna hai''

 

Geet gets embarrassed and seeing her Palak, Adi and Maan laughs'..

 

 

Precap: Office...


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Edited by ana1411 - 13 February 2012 at 9:01am

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awesome update yar
happy new year

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Edited by geetsweet - 01 January 2012 at 2:04am

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awesome update
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