Maan and Geet FF-Hameshaa **NOTE** - Page 24

Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

part 13
nice part...
Geet u better tell Maan about this Vikram soon...
Vikram is such a disgusting creature...
he cant be called a human at all...
how i wish he pays for it badly...
cont soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

waiting 4 next part...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Sophronia

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Posted: 12 years ago

i added u to my buddy list, do accept :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Updating soon
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priyanka

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey read all the parts in one go
superb!
vickram😡, hate him!
waiting for more

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 14

Vikram turned to see that person whom dare to hold his hand...stopping him from slapping that girl.He was shocked to see that person.It was Maan whom was holding Vikram's hand and prevented him from slapping the little girl.
Vikram:''Maan''
Maan:''I always knew that you hated the poor...you were arrogant of your money but I didn't know that you would lay your hand on a little girl whose grandfather you ran over...You are a very low person...I regret that you were ever called my friend''
Vikram:''Maan...you are forgetting to whom you are speaking to...I am Vikram Vardhan'' He jerked his hand away from Maan ''these poor people think this road belongs to them...I was driving my car and this old man came in front...so what''
Maan:''So what? You tried to kill a person with your car and you are telling me so what? You tried to slap a small girl and you are telling me so what?'' He shouted ''Vikram...we are born rich but that doesn't mean that we take everyone for granted''
Vikram:''I cant believe that you were my friend...you took a poor guy like Adi as your best friend...you are getting marry to a girl whom is not even from our class and your Dadima...God knows why that old woman didn't ever like me'' Maan punched Vikram on his face and he fell on the floor...blood started to come out of Vikram's nose and lips.He was in shocked that Maan had just punched him
Vikram:''You hit me?'' he said as he got up back on his feet
Maan:''I should have done this a long time ago'' He slapped Vikram again ''This slap was for Adi...how dare you called me brother a poor guy...he is not rich like you but he has a heart like gold...something that you will never have'' He slapped Vikram again '' This is for my wife...How dare you said that she is not from our class...she is the best for me...she is a gem'' He slapped Vikram again and this time Vikram fell on the floor again ''and this last slap was for my Dadima...she was always right about you and I am so thankful to her that she always warned to against you...just wish I would have listened to her sooner'' The police jeep and ambulance came and the inspector approached the scene.The ambulance staff attended to the old man whom was lying on the floor...he was still alive.They took him inside the ambulance
Inspector:''May I know whom is Adi?''
Adi:''I am...I was the one whom made the call...and this man whom is on the floor is Vikram...he was the one whom hit this man with his car''
Inspector:''Thank you Mr Adi for helping the police and as far as Mr Vikram is concern...not all the time your money will bail you out''
Vikram:''Inspector...you dont know whom I am''
Inspector:''I know you very well...Mr Vikram Vardhan...so well and now lets go to the police station...I will get to know you well over there...Mr Maan...Mr Adi...I would need you both at the station too...there are few papers that you will need to sign''
Maan:''Sure...we will come behind you'' the little girl came to Maan and hugged him
Girl:''Thank you Bhaiya''
Maan:''You dont worry about your Grandfather...he will be well...if you need anything...just tell the doctors...they will call me okay''
Girl:''okay...I will'' she said and left with the ambulance.The crowd started to go away and Geet, Dadima and Pinky saw Maan and Adi coming back to them.
Dadima:''What happened Maan? What took you both so long?''
Adi:''Dadima...it was an accident...the old man was injured badly''
Geet:''and the man whom hit him with the car...What happened to him?''
Maan:''He is arrested...we need to go to the police station...there are few papers to sign''
Pinky:''Who was that man who could hit an old man''
Adi:''That guy was none other than...Vikran Var...'' but before he could finish...he was interrupted by Maan
Maan:''Let it be''
Dadima:'Vikram...he was the one whom hit the old man with the car'' she said shaking her head ''I always knew that man is trouble...that is why I always told you to stay away from him''
Maan:''Well...now I know...better late than never...I never knew that he can been this bad''
Adi:''I always knew that he is very bad...just like his father'' he said ''Dadima...could you go with Pinky and Geet to Geet's house first...we will see you all there as Maan and I need to go the police station''
Geet:''of cos...Adi...Dadima will come with us''
Pinky:''Lets go Dadima''
Dadima:''Okay girls...well been long since I have seen Dr Mohinder''
Pinky:''Adi pls come fast'' she saw Maan looking at her '' you too...Maan Bhaiya''
Maan:''ya right'' he said as he smiled looking at Adi and Pinky.He looked at Geet whom was seeing him "I will come soon'' Geet nodded her head.Geet,Dadima and Pinky took a taxi and left for Geet's home while Maan and Adi made their way to the police station.
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At the police station...Vikram was walking around in the cell.He was angry and frustrated...he sat down and when he closed his eyes...he saw Maan slapping him over and over again.
Vikram:''Inspector...you better get me out of here''
Inspector:''I will...to bring you go to the court...now...sit down there quietly'' Maan and Adi entered the police station "Mr Maan...Mr Adi...I have the papers ready...pls read and sign it''
Maan:''Thank you inspector'' he and Adi sat down and read the papers and sign them.
Inspector:''Thank you very much'' he said as he took the papers from them ''tml I will bringing him to the court''
Maan:''very well Inspector...we shall take your leave'' as he and Adi were leaving...Vikram called out
Vikram:''Maan...you think by putting me here...we will be finish...no way...now the real friendship has started...but this time...we are now enemies...every happiness...every joy...every love...I will take it away from you''
Maan:''Vikram...you were always a man of big talks...till now you have seen Maan...if you touched anyone whom I love and care about...you will not be messing with Maan...you will get to see the real Maan Singh Khurana...remember...this always''
Adi:''Lets go Maan...dont talk to people whom dont have any ability to do anything on his own''
Vikram:''oye loser...remember...15 years ago...my father kick you and your father out of your home...dont forget...I can do far more worst now''
Adi:''I remember everything till now...that is why...I have always hated your family and you...Papa was saved by his best friend and I know that I will be saved by my best friend...cos we know that value of friendship...not like you'' Maan and Adi left the police station.
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At Geet's home...Pinky and Geet were making tea with snacks while Dr Mohinder and Dadima were talking to each other
Dadima:''Mohinder beta...you look worried and tensed...is it because of the marriage...if the expenses...''
Mohinder:''No maaji...its not the wedding''
Dadima:''I know that you are taking out money for Pinky's wedding as well...but if you need more money...we are family''
Mohinder:''No...No...Pinky is also my daughter...its something else''
Geet:''What is it Papa? We have been noticing since we got home'' she said putting the tea tray down
Pinky:''Mohinder Papa...its is because of me'' she said sadly.Mohinder puts his hand on her head and smiles at her
Mohinder:''beta...I am also your father ...you think that my best friend's daughter is not my daughter...its is not about the wedding''
Geet:''then what is about?''
Pinky:''Mohinder papa...pls tell us''
Mohinder:''Vikram came here''
Dadima:''Vikram'' while Geet and Pinky were shocked
Pinky:''Dadima...you know Vikram?''
Dadima:''Mohinder...is it Vikram Vardhan'' Mohinder nodded his head and Dadima was more shocked
Mohinder:''he came here when Geet and Pinky were out with you for shopping...he said...'' he told them everything.As he had finished...he saw Mana and Adi standing there...looking at him
Maan:''Vikram'' he said angrily

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No Precap cos want to keep the suspense...will be exciting

Edited by KTPROCKS - 12 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

waiting for the update..😊

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tamannA

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Posted: 12 years ago

i like the whole update but love the dialogue said by adi the value of friendship

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

good going...well written..do continue soon..😊

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