Originally posted by: sreya19royOMG!!!!
This SS is super duper freaking awesomeee man!!! π
Till date I haven't read anything like this n I am totally going crazy abt this SS π
U knw aftr reading d prologue n d updt (together), I m asking myself that where d hell was I that I m reading this SS aftr so many days since u have posted it...I mean how d hell did I miss this 1 man ?
Nways leave it dat must be 1 of my stupidity π
1st d prologue was amazingly HOT...She argued with him n then finally aftr giving up she kissed him, nt just any kiss bt super hot passionate kiss π
Hahaha I loved that cmplt scene...they were on d edge of shooting each-other inspite of d fact that they loved each other n felt so passionately abt each other π²
2ndly d 1st part of d SS(Introduction) was very well written, spcly d entry of d characters...d way u described every minute detail of the surroundings n d furnitures was superb n kudos to u 4 that π
Their chemistry in dis updt was a lil thanda, actually very thanda bt I blv u will compensate 4 that with much more hot n sizzling chemistry of then in d future updts π
Btw I too love that whole dhishum dhishum thing π I wonder hw things will turn out when this dhishum dhishum happens btwn Arjuhi (well I hope just like d prologue π )
Ohk I think I have said way too much...sorry bt I was too excited aftr reading this so just cudn't cntrl it π
Hope u updt it soon n add me to ur pm list plz π
Originally posted by: AAKMH2
updt soon haffie :)
OMG!
Originally posted by: -vrshn-exams over hafz? how have you been?? how did your exams go?
Btw update soon :P
-Varshu
Originally posted by: kkianOMG!
I WOKE UP IN D MORNING DREAMING ABT THIS FFI HAD SEEN D MOVIE FEW YRS BACK BT WS NT ABLE 2 REMEMBER EXACT STORY.SO I GOT UP ASAP HAD A QUICK BRAEKFAST N READ D STORY OF MR N MRS SMITH .NOW I M SO EXICTED TO IMAGINE D SAME STORY WID MY ARJUHIπ³PLS UPDATE SOOONπBTW I WS A SILENT READER, I JOINED IF FEW DAYS BACK SO THAT I CAN APPRECIATE D WORKS OF WONDERFUL WRITERS OF THIS FORUM
Originally posted by: DarkDove
hehheh i missed u varsh π³...im fine and u ??? exams went well (i hope soo..)... have to leave after two hours to write my last exam!of course i will update soon !!!!xxx
Originally posted by: -vrshn-
oh!! All the best yar! you'll do well! :D
i'm doing good too :) and i missed you all so much!
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