Healed by Love - ArSh OS - FOR SABZ - Page 3

Vry interesting!

Hope shona becums allright

Brilliant start, please do continue soon and thanks for the pm!

WOW diferent concept.. Continue soon and thx 4 PM

First off, a big big Happy Birthday to Sabz and secondly wonderful writing...its so vivid and the portrayal of the emotion is amazing. It really hurts when happiness comes only to be taken away the next second...feel bad for both of them and especially Neha :(

nice start dear 

I dunno i replied earlier or nt. But this is interestng thnx fr da pm. Cont soon. Dun marry ammy wid sum1 else

Awesome..

happy birthday to sabzz

amazing start...

hi dear😊
amazing start i loved it
plz cont soon
and plz sent me pm
plz plz plz🥳

take care
preeti

Laila, I loved this first part. The concept is brilliant and you had me hooked from the first line. I love the way you have sketched Armaan's character. He felt so like a real person and my heart ached for him. The dialogues were brilliantly written too - they flowed so naturally and didn't feel staged at all. Superb writing hun! Now I am intrigued to read on. Do continue soon. Thanks for the PM.