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MG-MysteryGirl Thread3 updated 1april 93/chk index (Page 88)

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luved it...

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Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM

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 4 PMing me...dear...Big smile
just ...
ur   update...Embarrassed
n also a  sweet
...4 u...Big smile
keep ing dear...Big smile
P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...Angry
 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...ShockedOuchConfused
Note: sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...ConfusedOuch

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...Cryme uncontorled sob.sob..Cry
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Awesomee yaarr

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wat happens to both of them

y they r saying they dont want d baby????

so confusing they r 

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Chapter 59. Happy News

Maan paced restlessly in front of the Doctors cabin. Seeing him like that Savitri Devi can't hold her laugh, She chuckled, Maan stopped,

What daadi ?

He was already in tension ,moreover his own daadi is making fun of him : and past half an hour none came out from the cabin too , not even a random nurse carrying some tray.

Maan wondered loudly ..Ek Nurse Thak Nahee Aya ..! (Not even a nurse came out )

Maan beta Don't forget we are here for check up s only!

Maan frowned at daadi what she saying don't I know !

Daadi laughed and continued ..ha ..ha , ya .,what do you expect , we came here for check up and within half an hour a nurse will come out and say "Mubarak ho beta hua hi ..ya beti huee hi " : Maan glared very angrily he was not at all in a mood to have fun

Aur nahee tho kya … You know how do you look , as if some guy who is waiting outside labour room and his wife is in labour pain .." and laughed ,Maan too joined poutin, shook his head ,sat with daadi and hugged, and hid his face in her shoulders

Oh daadi you don't know ..

Daadi touched his cheeks fondly and said .."oh I know son , You are exactly like your daadaji .."

Daadi ..

Yes , you know why he made this hospital , whenever I get sick , even smallest cold , he will make fuss about it , he will act as if some extreme emergency had happened and doctors throw out finally he decided to build his own hospital ha ha ..and you know what happened when your dad was born , I was in labour pain and he fainted and everything went smoothly …bilkul pagal de … sher bhee …Just like you ..

Maan was thrown out of cabin by Dr.Sandhya,because with his non-stop questions and doubts he was not letting her actually do her check ups

At first both Maan and Geet were very reluctant to see the doctor because they believed whatever symptoms, tiredness the ladies saw in Geet was because of their deeds only .They were well aware of what they were doing and how much they were doing and was too shy to explain it to their seniors and they both embarrassingly failed in controlling themselves too .

But daadi was adamant and she literally dragged them to hospital , but on the way to hospital Geet saw golgappa box and Maan knew how much she like this chaatt and all .But as soon as she took one bite ; she felt nauseated with the smell and vomited there itself. Geet looked totally shattered and terrified and Maan got really worried .Only person who was extremely happy was Daadi because she was sure by now what she assumed was correct and don't need a doctor ..But geet seems to be lost!

Eversince they entered doctors cabin Maan was annoying doctor with all those stupid questions , he too seems he was not in his senses , it more or like seem like he is trying to make situation comic and funny.But geet was silent and was totally unaware to the situation and her eyes were totally blank .Maan fearedon her reaction but doing all those annoyances he himself tried to deviate himself ..

Then they heard Geets screaming .

No NO ..i don't want this baby …I just don't want cant be true … no no ….

Maan and daadi shocked hearing her , and before they could realise , the door swung open and geet ran towards them , she fell on Maan's arms

Maan tell them , its not true . it cant be .. I don't want it to be true ..i don't want this baby ..No no

Savitri shocked ! Maan clenched his lips in extreme pain , seeing geet in pain ..

She hugged him tightly and cried hard hiding her face in his chest .His chest all got wet by her tears , Maan lost words ..he don't know what to say

He felt her biody shiver once and he felt her complete weight on him She fainted in his arms

Doctors and nurses rushed and she shifted to intensive care

Maan sat there holding her hands and looking lovingly at her , he was crying silently .Doctor called him , he don't want to leave geet , but doctor insisted they need to talk before she wake up for her sake .

He had a discussion with Dr.Sandhya .Amruth Also came .

then he went back to Geet , sat there quietly ,crying holding her hands ..and ..went out quietly ..


Geet woke up , she found herself among a lots and lots of flower bouquets and congratulation messages ..

but she was crying …Daadi and Amruth happily hugged her ..She asked for Maan ..

Amruth said ..i havents seen him ..

Dr.Sandhya open the door and told Geet ..

He left geet , because he heard You ..said in a cold voice .


Ok ..after a long time ..i am giving update , I don't know how you will take this update ….. dont come up in any conclusion ..

its a small part .. but ..i think i got the flow now ..will update and finish soon ..

And thank you very much for all of you ..i mean most of you for still remembering my mystery girl …

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