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well this awesome story 👏

3 YEARS AGO...

Maanvi: you always do this, 1st u annoy me and then u act all sweet and do sweet things... 😭
Udhay: I'm sorry jaan, aur mein thumse vadha karo, this will be the last time I annoy you, I promise!
Maanvi: but...

Nani: MAANVI!!!!!!

Maanvi & Udhay looked @ nani and they wernt sure wat to do...

Maanvi: wooh nani, woh tho mein...mathlab hum...
Nani: kuch math kaho AUR thum, Mr YUVRAJ Udhayveer, you should get home!
Udhay: jee nani, bye maanu.
Maanvi: bye...

scene change: nani talking to nana

Nani: dekho...
Nana: kya hai?
Nani: you ladli was wid that Udhayveer today!
Nana: WHAT??? That low life?
Nani: haan, aur patha hai ki aapki ladli ne kya kaha? , ki woh dono sirf dost hai...
Nana: fikr math karo sab teek hojayenga! 😡

scene change: nana & udhay

Udhay: good day sir.
Nana: Udhay kya thu meri beti se pyaar karthi hu?
Udhay: jee sir, I love maanvi a lot..
Nana: and you are willing to do anything 4 her?
Udhay: yes sir whatever it takes...
Nana: THEN LEAVE HER ALONE AND DON'T CUM BACK!!!
Udhay: kya? Kyu?
Nana: because u can not manage to look after yourself, how will u look after her?
Udhay: I can look after myself...and I'll look after her too!!!
Nana: NO! U WILL LEAVE HER ALONE!
Udhay: never I will never leave her alone, she's the ONE! I love her!
I will never leave her, she's my everything!!!

Just then Maanvi came...

Maanvi: arre Udhay, who is your everything???
Udhay: u are maanvi!
Maanvi: this is nt d time to joke udhay!
Udhay: I'm not joking, I love u maanu, only u

Maanvi was shocked...how could he love her? They were just friends n nothing more...

Maanvi tried to explain to Udhay but he didn't listen...

Nana: bas Udhay, abh thum yaha se jao!
Udhay: nahin mein maanvi bigar nahin jaongi
Maanvi: JAO yaha se Udhay abhi issi waqt!!!

Then maanvi saw it..she thought it wasn't true but it was, Udhay had become obsessed! He went crazy,
To him maanvi was everything and he'd rather die then let her go!

Nana: teeke, agar thum maanvi ki saath chathi tho ek shart pe
Udhay: kya shart?
Nana: you have got 1 year to prove yourself to us, that u will be able to support maanvi
Udhay: mathlab?
Nana: u need to earn money to become maanvis other half n not any small amount
U need to earn in the millions, do u accept?
Udhay: I ACCEPT!

And wid that Udhay had left his Hometown...




In America

Udhay was lost he didn't know what to do, only Maanvi's face kept him same
main ishq uska woh ashqi hai meri
main ishq uska woh ashqi hai meri
woh ladki nahin zindagi hai meri
woh ladki nahin zindagi hai meri

Everything he did he saw her and he eventually triumphed!!!

meanwhile in India

Maanvi had left her nana's place...all off them had moved away so that when Udhay returned, he would not find them...


Eventually the 1 year was over, and udhay had become a millionaire,
He came back 4 maanvi, but no one knew were she was...they had disappeared


Udhay: I SWEAR TO EVRYTHING THAT YOU WILL BE MINE MAANVI!!!!😡

This post is dedicated to:
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Sonika
Daminipatel
Teri-dewani
&
Ruchi...

Thanks guys I was kinda down n url helped, n I cudnt let url down but...

Since I'm nt really up to it anymore, I'm not sure whether this is making sense any more...really sorry 4 rytn crap guys...

Omg!!! Amazing update!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏 Aww thanks so much for dedicating it to me.🤗 I am happy you are not down anymore.😃 Thanks for the pm and please do pm me when you update.😊

Awesome update shukar hai u didnt quit writing this... Glad u wrote it...
So maanvi doesnt like this stupid udayveer he is fircing himself on her? Nw virat is guna show his pagalpan and obsession...
Do continue and please pm me

Well ! the one n only halkat of DEB is in our EHMMBH territory ... WHOO-HOOO but he doesn't know tht Virat se jitna mushkil hi nahi naamumkin hai. haaa-hah haa..🤣 well i know its bit of cliche but i couldn't help it. You did it again dear, gave a whole new dimension to the story... Well manayata nahi pati toh Manvi ke peeche padh gaya  halkat 😆 ... but he doesn't know that our Virat is not like tht sada hua baigan Akash ... Virat will kill this man if he as much as came in 1 feet of his mannu. Way to go... its a delight for Virmans..