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Originally posted by: moonstruck

love it can i get a PM?

thank you sweetheart 😳. AnD I will defo pm u 😊

loved it plz pm me wen u update...😃

Originally posted by: preethi12345

too gud , pm me !

😊 thank you and will do 😊

Originally posted by: daminipatel12

loved it plz pm me wen u update...😃

. Thank you, it really means a lot, that u liked it. I'll defo pm u when I update 😊

Loved the start. Please do PM me when you update.

PS: I think that what -Talli- said as the first comment after part 1, is going to happen. As she said, I may be wrong

Originally posted by: shehroon_riaz

<font color="#666666">Loved the start. Please do PM me when you update.

PS: I think that what -Talli- said as the first comment after part 1, is going to happen. As she said, I may be wrong</font>

Thank you sweety...but ul av 2 w8 n see... 😉 😉 Edited by thesh - 12 years ago

Thanks 4 all the awesome comments guys...so here goes part 2



                                                               Part2: Sanjana thu kab aye?

Virat was about to leave the restaurant when he saw her! SANJANA??? 1st she tries phoning and now she's infront of me! God why can't she leave me alone?

Sanjana: VIRAT???? Ek minute Please???
Virat: kya jathi hai thu?
Sanjana: virat mein tho sirf...I'm sorry 4 everything virat, please 4give...I was stupid, I got carried away...I really am sorry...
Virat: whatever!!!I'm outa here

(Virat thinking to himself) god I can't believe her! Wat the hell? Sorry? Like that helps...

Virat was fuming and decided that it was time to go home

Scene shift: Vadhera house

Viren: virat thank god thum wapas agaya, jaldi pack karo hum log allabhad jaraiye...
Virat: kya? Kyu?
Viren: woh shaadi killiye.
Virat: teeke bhai chalo..

Scene shift: allabhad temple

Manan: manvi, aap bohot achi lagrahi

Manvi blushes n thinks so are u😉

Manvi: shukriya...challo sab humaraliye intezar kariliye..
Manan: haa dheko sab shivji hai..

Manvi and everyone else go around the temple praying n all..manvi only has 1 wish..please let him love me...

Scene shift:on the road in allabhad..
Virat: woh bhai ahb kaha jarayi ?
Jeevika: actually virat, BG ne kaha ki woh sab mandir main hai isliye hum vaha jarayi hai..
Virat: kya? Mandir?
Viren: haa virat, u need the prayer, khuda janthi hai ki aaj thumhara mood teek nahin hai
Virat: kya bhai thu nahin kaha tha ki thu psychologist hoon, bhabi waahh waahh!!
Jeevika: aab thum dono shuuru maath! Dheko mandir agaya...
Viren: haa, ahb challo viratji ki pooja karo..kya hum ek baba milsakthe uskiliye?
Virat: bhai!!! 😡
Jeevika: dheko, waha sab hai!

Scene shift: in temple

Manan: manvi, kya hum baat karsakthe?
Manvi: haa, certainly...
Manan: tho challo...

Wow...where is he taking me? I knew using this saree would get his attention!!! Yes his mine...oyeah...I wish it would rain...then it will be like in the rain...

Manan: manvi, mein janthi ki thum kise pyaar karthi hoon...

Yes manvi...he knows its him, he looks so cute when he smiles like that...as soon as he says its him run in his arms...god plz let it rain...


Manvi: acha? Tho bata mujhe kaun?
Manan: thum Virat se pyaar karthi hoon haina?

W*F???? VIRAT????HUH???? Ogod!!!
Manvi: woh, Virat? Mein, kya? Aap?
Manan: koi baat nahin hai main sab janthi hoon...aur vese bhi thu aur Virat bohot achi hai...yourl look great 2geder!!!
Manvi: kya? Really? Erhm thanks...

Manvi what are you saying? Ur telling him thanks 4 guessing the wrong man n thanks 4 calling url cute??? Well...mybe this can be used...mybe if I act like I need manans help to get Virat, then Manan will fall 4 me! Yes this could work! N Manan will never know...

Manvi: haa, thu teek hai...mein virat se pyaar karthi hoon...lekin mujhe lagtha hai ki woh mujse pyaar nahin karthi hai...
Manan: arre manvi fikar math karo...sab teek rahunga...arre speak of the devil n here he arrives...

What? Virat? Here? Unbelievable??? I thought he was busy n he couldn't make it?

Scene shift: virat

Jeevika: arre challo thum dono dheko manvi aur...erh...Dr Manan?

Virat looks up shocked...Dr Manan yaha? Kyu???

Viren: haa! Shahid woh BG ne kaha tho kya?
Virat: bhai yer...yaha...
Every1 sees each other greet and do the prayers...

Viren: srre saali saibha, muje batado, kya yaha hai ek baba hai?
Manvi: Baba??? Virat kiliye??? 😆
Virat: haa huso thum dono...bhabhi dheko na..
Jeevika: arre meri pyaara dewarji chordo...
Manan: arre yeh bohot mazar hojayenge..
BG: srre thum sab challo aaj Mehndhi ki raat...challo na...

All preparations are done 4 the Mehendhi raat...and manvi has a programme...

Manvi: woh Manan, muje help chahiye, programme kiliye...
Manan: acha tho hum virat se pooco thummse madad karo...hum ahbhi ayye...

Yeh Manan bhi hai! Haar waqt, virat virat virat...challo manvi thayar challo...

Manan goes to virats room (using this 4 the mehendhi raat)
He knocks...

Virat: under ayye...

Manan opens the door and sees virat(using)
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Manan: hy virat, kese ho aap?
Virat: ooh Dr Manan aap? Mein teeke aap?
Manan: arre bas muje Manan kaho na...aur mein, teek hai, bas thumhara madad chahiya..
Virat: acha? Kya hua?
Manan: woh manvi ki programme...
Manan tells virat abt the programme...

Virat: thum janthi ki muje gana gao...bandariya ki saath?
Manan: haa virat manna math karo...please...
Virat: teeke...

Scene shift: Mehendhi

Every1s ready and waiting 4 manvi to come down when Virat sees her...

Arre yaar, yeh kaun hai? Yeh bandariya nahin ho sakthi...yeh tho ek koobsurat...

Manan suddenly sees virats disturbance n looks where virat is staring...MANVI. God she looks beautiful...I can see what any1 would stare @...virat is a lucky guy...manvi loves him...who knows...mybe if she didn't love him...then what could be...

That's all 4 now guys...do leave comments likes n criticism...

Precap:

manvi dancing and singing then suddenly she falls in some1s arms...he has brown eyes...a face so handsome...that any girl would die 4...but she also knows that now her past faces her...how can it be??? Why now??? Why did he return when life was so hectic????Edited by thesh - 12 years ago

Sorry guys havi trouble with the pics...

This is mannans 1
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N this is manvis:
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Awesomeee!!!! OMG I think while pretending, she will really fall for virat and virat for manvi and manan will play the cupid? Hmm this is amazing waiting for the next one from you so so eagerly!! U made my morning (1.12am here) HAHA pls pls continue soon! :)

Originally posted by: inlvwithehmmbh

Awesomeee!!!! OMG I think while pretending, she will really fall for virat and virat for manvi and manan will play the cupid? Hmm this is amazing waiting for the next one from you so so eagerly!! U made my morning (1.12am here) HAHA pls pls continue soon! :)

. Thank you so much...I did nt think that any1 would like this becouse I actually don't like this part...