SS:Virmaan: Raba ishq na ho ve...

Hy guys I know I'm starting to bore all of u but I just had this great idea...well 4 me @least tell me if u like it n plz leave comments whether positive or negative...this ss is dedicated to Talli...who has supported me throughout...

                                                Prologue:

It was 3 weeks after jeevikas wedding...and manvi's illness was getting worse by the day...due to her illness manvi now spends a lot of her time with Dr Manan, but can't seem to get that annoying chep out of her head...

Manvi(thinking to herself) maybe if I keep myself busy then I won't think about him...

Manvi spent everyday with Dr Manan...and the Dr didn't mind, as long as she was getting better it was f9 4 her to stay as long as she wanted...but what Dr Manan did not know was that slowly slowly manvi started thinking of him more then a Dr and more then a friend...she thought of him romantically...

                                                Scene shift:

Virat could not stop thinking of the bandariya...wat she would be doing now...where she wouldd be...how funny she would look...

"Ring ring""Ring ring"his cell phone...
He noticed the caller ID and saw the name:
"SANJANA"

W*F???what does she want after all these years? After stealing my life...after breaking my heart and leaving me...



Plz do comment...

part 1 = page 2
part 2 =page 5
Note = page 6
part 3=page 7
part 4 = page 8
Note = page 8
Update + note= page 9Edited by thesh - 12 years ago

Good start, please continue. Do PM me when you update😃

this is really nice:) hope to hear more from you i'll enjoy thanks so much:)

OMG!!!!! I luv this already...please continue and could u think any1 would punch after such a AWESOME start!!!! ;)

Nice
Cont soon
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good start..PM me wen u update..

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please continue and PM me whenever you update..

Thanks guys...sorry 4 d delayed update, I actually 4got that I had started this...anyway here's part 1

             PART1: Dr Manan n I in ALLAHBAD 😉

I knew this would work after all I am the MANVI CHOUDARY... 😃.   All I had to do was tell BG that Dr manan was my Dr n that I needed him in case I got sick again...of cause Bg was reluctant but then, I had a point isn't? Wat if I did become sick again??? Ok maybe I'm being dramatic again,,,

Dabbu: di, kya hua?
Manvi: kuch nahi yaar, kya thum hamesha mere sapne...
BG: bas thum dono, hum sab shaadi ki ghar ponch newali hai aur thum dono main????
Manvi/dabbu: sorry BG...hum maaf kare...
BG: teeke lekin ab...
Chachi: BG, itni bari ghar??? 😲

Manvi looked out of the car window...sure enough it was a big house...it was owned by BG's friend Mr & Mrs Malhothra...

''Aaahhh...teri meri meri teri prem kahani hai mushkil..."

Dabbu: di thumhara phone!!!

Manvi piks up the phone and looks @ the caller I'd...she smiles hugely...
DR MANAN 😃

Manvi: hello?
Dr Manan: manvi, kaise hai aap?
Manvi: ji main teeku, aap kaha?
Dr Manan: bas 5 minute aur...aur main vaha ponchainge..
Manvi: acha tekke...BG bularihai...
Dr Manan: tekke, see u soon.

Manvi disconected the call...YES YES YES!!! He was here!!!!!

Manvi and the rest of the choudry's got settled in their respective rooms...

Mr Malhotra: Manvi betta, Dr Manan yaha hai

Manvi heard Mr malhotra call...she ran down the stairs and there she saw the man that she was definately falling 4...

Manvi: Dr manan aap agaya..
Dr manan: haa, woh to main...
BG: manvi, dr manan ko unki kamer dikayenge...
Manvi: ji BG...

Both Manan and Manvi walk up the stairs, manvi talking continuously...nut Manan didn't mind...he liked the way that she was open with him, he felt so relieved that she could talk abt everything and anything...he had grown quite fond of the girl that he knew since she was a kid...

Manvi: waise Dr manan, apka GF kaise hai?
Dr manan: GF??? Mujhe nahin patha ki, I had 1...kaha hai woh???
Manvi: lekin aap ithni handsome, caring, loving, understanding aur family orientated...yeh kaise ho sakthi ki aap koi GF hai nahin?
Dr Manan: bas aise...koi muje pasand hai...
Manvi: haa...pyaar bhi bohot complicated hai...
Dr manan: acha complicated??? So miss complicated, what do u know??? Kaise janthi ki pyaar complicated hai??

Oops...manvi...now what u gna say??? IDEA... 😉

Manvi: woh main kisise pyaar karthi hoon. Lekin woh mujhe pyaar nahin karthi...
Dr manan: kaise janthi ki woh thumse pyaar nahin karthi???
Manvi: bas janthi hoon...
Dr manan: manvi aap bohot pyaari hai, woh ladka pagal hai agar woh nahin dekh sakthe ki aap kithni achi hai!!!

Manvi blushes...if only he would say that directly to her ...

Chacha: Manvi, Manan, jaldi tayaar hona hum sab mandir jarahai...

Great idea manvi thought...I'll get his attention tbere...manvi leaves manan to get ready

1 hour later

Bg: yeh ladki kaha? Hum dher hojayenge
Chachi: bas ajayenga BG.
Dabbu: ha bg thum janthi ki manvi di kitni waqt...
Dr manan: bg kya aap janthi ki main usse buladu?
Bg: haa beta, plz warna hum dher hojayege
Mrs Malhothra: arre, Manan ek kam karado, thum yaha inthizaar karo manvi kiliye hum chalenge..aur jab manvi tayaar hai thum dono aja...
Dr manan: teeke...

All leave except 4 dr manan and dabbu...dabbu insisted that he wait 4 his di...manan hears footsteps and turns around and sees manvi...
Wow...manan thinks to himself...she looks so adorable!!! The man that she loves must really be lucky...


That's all 4 now guys...I knw a lot of u may be upset that virat wasn't mentioned @ all and also that manan and manvi...well, there's still along way to go 4 this story...plz leave comments...and likes...

PRECAP

@ the temple

Dr manan: manvi, I think I know who u are in love with...
Manvi: acha, kaun??? Patha mujhe...
Dr manan: I'm definitely sure that its VIRAT!!!

Manvi...W*F????? He thinks I love virat????? Wat???? I???? VIRAT???? Of all people he thinks the CHEP!!!!! 😲

do pm me whn u update d next part..