hai guys plz see.verry important for GEET-2

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hello guys.hiii,😊

 Hiii friends,mene kaha tha aap se ke mere paas ek story hai jo maaneet pe suet kareti hai.& here it is.mai isme main parts aap sab ko dikha rahi hu.jo agar nisar sir or barry sir tak pahonchaye to wo is story ko bahot hi ache show me badal sakte hai wo bhi hamaare GURTI ke sath.so plz read this & give ur comments. U can also give suggestions. so plzzz read this & give ur comments.plzzz meri choti si koshish me mera sath do.

 
The Title of The Story---
 
                               VADA RAHA...
 

DD-{GEET} ek Cute, bubbly,& sweet but jiddi aur shararti ladki hai..

 

GC-{MAAN} ek ruff & tough ,angry young man with golden & romantic heart'jo apne diye har promise ko har haal me nibhana janta hai.

 

                              πŸ˜ŠThis story base on Love,😊 promise, romance,pastion.Maan[gurmeet]is businessmen.he lives in delhi. But I become bodyguard  for a resion.& the resion is one promise. ek promise jo Maan ne kisi ko diya tha.us insan ko jise wo apni maa ki tarha manta tha.usi ki akhri wish thi ki wo ek ladki ko bachaye.us ladki ko jise maan janna to dur pr usne  use dekha tak nahi.& wo ladki hai GEET[drashti].jiski jaan khtre me hai. aur maan  use bachane ke liye ek businessmen se ek bodyguard banta hai.wo bhi ek promise ki khatir.wo ye nahi janta ke Geet jindgi usse ek rishte wajah se judi hui hai jo rishta maan ki jindgi me kabhi bahot maine rakhta tha.aur wo hai uska pyar.uski mangetar SUR.

            SUR ek simple.aur ache dill ki ladki.jis maan bahot pyar karta tha.pr wo kisi car accident  me mar chuki hai.maan ne use bachane ki bahot koshish ki pr bacha nahi paya.tab se maan ka god pr se vishvas uth gaya hai. Maan manta hai ke SUR jis bhagvan me itna vishvas krti thi usi god ne use usse chin liya.pr maan ye nahi janta ke ye mot sur ne khud chuni hai.GEET ko bachane ki khatir.maan ne sur se promise kiya tha ke wo uski mom [nirmaladevi]ka khyal rakhega.isliye aur maan apni mangetar ki maa ko apni maa ki tarha manta tha.aur unhe cancer tha isi vajah se unki mot ho gayi pr mrte vakht unhone maan se  vachan liya tha.ye promise ke wo GEET ki hifajat karega.aur wo GEET ko bachane ka decision leta hai.

               Nirmaladevi.jo sur ki maa hai.aur unka GEET se bhi gehara rishta hai.GEET unki choti beti hai.jise unhe bachpan me hi chod kr jana pada tha.GEET ke do uncles hai.usme se Bade Uncle ne sazish krke GEET ke mom-dad ko juda krdiya.pr nirmaladevi ghar se jate vakht apni badi beti sur ko sath le aayi bcus GEET uske dad ke room thi is liye wo use nahi laa payi.

 

                 GEET ek chulbulisi,hasti khelti aur jindagi ko positively lekar jinevali ladki.she lives in shimla. jo ye bilkul nahi janti ke uski jaan firse khtre me hai.yes u heard it ri8 firse,wo use ek bimaari thi.jiski vajah se use aese insan ki  jaroorat thi jo use heart de sake.aur use apna heart denevali uski apni behen sur thi.jo apni jindagi GEET ko dekr is duniya se chali gayi.aur shayad apna pyaar bhi.[LIKE MOVIE "DILL NE JISE APNA KAHA.."].Wo is tarha ke jab SUR ka accident hua tha tab geet bhi usi hospital me thi.wo apni friend ki engagement pe delhi aayi thi aur vanha wo nachte vakht behosh ho gayi.use hospital lejaya gaya.vanha use sur ke samnevale room me hi rakha gaya.nirmaladevi ko ye pata tha ki wo GEET hai unki beti.unhe pata chal gaya ke GEET ko kya bimaari hai.wo khud ko sambhal nahi payi aur ro padi ki wo kitni bebas hai ki unki dono betiya hospital me mot se lad rahi hai aur wo kuch nahi kar sakti.unhe laga ki sur behosh hai.pr nahi sur ne sun liya jo unhone kaha.sur faisla leti hai ki  wo apni behen ko bachayegi.wo doctor se baat krti hai.ki uski halat to bahot kharab hai use nahi lagta ki wo bachegi pr wo jatejate kisi ko jindgi dekar jana chahati hai.pr wo vada leti hai ki kisi ko bhi is baat ka pata na chale.operation ke baad hi maan aur nirmaladevi ko bataya jaye.pr geet ko pata na chale ki use kisne heart diya hai.is tarha wo chali gayi geet ko jindagi dekar.

AFTER 1 YEAR LETER

 

            Geet ab nayi jindgi bina dar ke ji rahi hai ye bina jane ki abhi bhi uske upr mot ka khatra hai .GEET ke ek aur uncle hai jo uske dad ke dost hai.Mr. Khanna aur uske vaqil bhi hai.unke paas geet ke dad ki vasihat hai.jisme GEET unki varis hai. Jisme likha hai ki Geet ke 21 year ki hone par sari property use mil jaye .aur ye uske ek uncle nahi chahte.[wok on hai ye suspence hoga jise maan kholega.]is liye wo geet ko marvane ka plane banate hai.pr unki sazish ka pata mrs.khanna ko chal jata hai.unhone geet ko apni beti ki tarha mana hai.aur wo hi thi jo geet ki har baat aur uske photos nirmaladevi ko deti rehati thi.bcus wo nirmaladevi aur mrs.khanna best friends thi thats y.pr mrs.khanna nirmaladevi ki help kr rahi hai ye mr.khanna ko nahi malum.aur nahi geet ko ye pata hai ki uski koi behen thi aur wo to yahi manti hai ki uski mom uske  bachpan mehi mar chuki hai.

Mrs.khanna ko ek din geet ke uncle ki baate sunleti hai aur unhe pata chal jata hai ki sur ka accident bhi unhone hi krvaya tha.unhe sur ke bare me pata chal gaya tha.wo nahi chahte the ke geet ke baad koi aur varies bhi aa jaye is liye unhone ne sur ka accident krvaya aura b geet ko marna chahte hai.ye baat wo nirmaladevi ko bata deti hai.ye sunkr nirmalaji ko dohara badata hai.aur unhe hospital lejaya jata hai.maan office me hai.Nirmaladevi hospital me apni akhri sanse gin rahi hai.tab wo mrs.khanna ko ye bataati hai ki geet ko naya heart denevali usiki behen sur thi.maan ko ye nahi pata.ke sur ka dill kise diya gaya hai.wo janna bhi nahi chahta.aur wo us ladki se nafarat karta hai.jise sur ka heart mila hai.aur  nirmaladevi mrs.khanna promise leti hai ki wo maan ko na batae ki wo ladki geet hai.wo mrs.khanna ki help se maan ko geet ke ghar me pahonchane ka plan banati hai taki wo geet ko bacha sake.aur mrs.khanna se promise leti hai ki kuch bhi ho wo unki beti ko bachaye.maan aata hai. Tab wo maan se bhi promise leti hai.wo is me unka sath de.maan promise karta hai.aur wo apni sanse chod deti hai.aur fir mrs.khanna maan ko Mr.khanna maan ko geet ki pic dekhati hai.maan chonk jata hai kyuki wo ekdam sur jesi dikhati hai.use lagta hai ki wo geet ka samna nahi kr payega pr mr.khanna use baho samjati hai. aur sur ke accident ki sachhai batati hai.maan ye sun  kr chonk jata hai.aur kasam khata hai ki wo sur ki mot ka badla lega.aur uske katilo ko salakho ke piche pahonchayega.aur nirmalaji ko diya hua promise nibhayega.geet ko bachayega. us promise ko pura karne ke liye shimla jane ka faisla karta  hai.

                
                Mrs.khanna shimla vapas jati hai.geet ke liye bodyguard rakhne ki baat mrs.khnna ke dimag me mrs.khanna hi dalti hai.aur wo maan jate hai kyuki geet pr pehle se ek hamala ho chukka hota hai. maan shimala pahonchta hai .dusari taraf geet gumne jati hai tab uske piche gunde padte hai.wo bhagti hai aur pani me girti hai.vanhi raste me maan ki gadi band padti hai is liye wo pani lene ke liye nadi tarf jata hai.vanhi use geet ki aawaj sunai deti hai[geet-help..help'help..] wo pani me kudta hai aur geet ko bachata hai.aur ghod me uthake pani se bahar lata hai.aur geet ko dekhta hi reh jata hai.aur use dekh ke use sur ka chehara yaad aata hai. tabhi vanha gunde aa jate hai.wo unse fight krta hai.fir moka dekh ke mrs.khanna ko coll krke inform karta hai ki wo aa gaya hai aur geet ko leke uske ghar aa raha hai.aur geet ko uske ghar le jata hai.mrs.khanna geet ko milne ke bahane mr.khanna ko geet ke ghar le jati hai.taki maan ko milva sake.maan geet ke ghar pahonchata hai.vanha use mrs.khanna milti hai.aur use pata chalta hai ke geet vanhi ladki hai jise use bachana hai.aur mr.khanna is hadse ke baad uske liye bodyguard rakhne ka faisla krte hai.aur maan ko appoint krte hai.isi dauran maan ko pata chalta hai.aur fir GEET MAAN ki khatti mithi nonk-jonk bhi hoti hoti.geet ko bilkul acha nahi lagta ki koi har vakht uske aaspaas rahe aur uspe nazar rakhe.wo bhi har tarha se maan ko pareshan karne ka ek moka nahi chodti.har baar maan ko pareshan krne ki sahrarat karti hai aur maan har baar pach jata hai.pr dheere dheere maan ko geet ki wo shararate achi lagne lagti hai. Geet aur maan isi nok jok aur geet ki sharart ki vajah se wo jungle me bhi kho jate hai.aur usi doran geet maan ke kareeb aane lagti hai aur usse pyaar karne lagti hai.maan bhi geet ke liye kuch mehasus karta hai pr wo maanne ko taiyaar nahi.aur isi doran maan ko  ki geet ke dad ki mot bhi hadsa nahi pr socha samja plan tha.wo kese bhi karke geet ko bachane ka plan krta hai.[wo kese bachaega wo CVs decide karenge. ]aur fir use pata chalata hai ki geet hi wo ladki hai jise sur ne apna dill diya tha.maan ko khud pe gussa aata hai ki kese wo uske liye kuch mehsus kr sakta hai jiski liye sur usse dur chali gayi.pr ab wo geet ko pyaar karne laga hai pr manna nahi chahata.aur use bachake vanha se jana chahata hai.aur wo geet ko bhachake London chala jata hai.aur geet ye seh nahi pati wo maan ko dhudti hai.pr wo nahi milta.mr.& mrs.khanna ko nahi pata ke geet maan se pyaar karti hai.unhe lagta hai ki uske uncle ne jo kiya usse wo pareshan hai.is liye mrs.khanna kuch din ke liye geet ko apne ghar le aati hai pr fir bhi wo geet ki udasi dur nahi kr pati.is liye wo apni  beti ke paas age study ke liye geet ko bhejne ka faisla krti hai aur geet unki baat maan kr study ke liye London uski dost[jiya] ke paas [mr & mrs.khanna ki beti] chali jati hai.jo dev se pyaar karti aur dev maan ka bhai hai.pr geet ye nahi janti.kuch months ke baad geet jiya ke sath india vaapas aati hai.jiya dev ko apne mom-dad se milvaana chahti hai.maan bhi dev ke liye jiya ke ghar uske mom-dad se pehali baar milne jata hai wo nahi janta ke wo log kon hai.vanha jate hi wo heran hota hai ki ye to mr.& mrs khanna ka hi house hai.fir bhi wo house me enter karta hai.wo vanha jata to use vanha mr.&mrs.khanna milte hai pr wo geet ko nahi mil pata aur mr & mrs khanna se milta hai.aur mr.khanna use dekhke chonkte hai.wo puchte hai ki wo yanha kese.tab mrs.khanna & maan puri baat unhe batate hai.dev-jiya ki sagai taiy hoti hai.vanha geet firse maan se takrati hai.aur use pata chalta hai maan koi bodyguard nahi balki ek bahot bada businessman hai.wo moka dekh kr maan ka hath pakad kr use party se dur le jati hai aur maan se puchti hai ki wo achanak kyu chala gaya? aur ab yanha kese? wo dev ko kese janta hai? geet maan se que pe que puchne lagati hai.tabhi mr.khanna vanha aa jati hai.aur use maan ki sachai batati hai.geet bahot roti hai ki uske saath itna sabkuch hua aur uski mom aur sister ab is duniya me nahi.maan use sambhalna chahata hai.pr fir khud ko rok deta hai.maan ke jane ke baad mr.khanna ko pata chalta hai ki geet maan se pyaar karti hai.fir kese fir se geet maan ka pyaar ka silsila chalta hai kese wo milte hai wo CVs taiy karenge.

 

I hope that u like it.if yes plz post ur comments & suggestions.plzzz...

 

 

                                                  

 

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Posted: 12 years ago
24 views & no comments?😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow dear just awesme superb.tum plz zaroor bhejna unlogo ko..i thnk it works!
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Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Wow dear just awesme superb.tum plz zaroor bhejna unlogo ko..i thnk it works!

thanks 4 the reply.mene fir se is pe soch aur ek aur idia aya.agr is me jo SUR ka cerectore hai use GEET ki judva behen bana de.to fir aur jab maan ko use prptect karne jana ho tab Mrs.Khanna use uski tasvir dikhaye.aur maan chonk jaye fir mrs.khanna ke samjane pr wo shimla jane ke liye maan jaye.aur ab use pata hai ki ye SUR nahi GEET hai jo SUR se ek dam juda hai.bahot hi chulbuli,mastikhor.pr fir bhi wo GEET ko unhi ada aur shararto ko pasand krne lage.uski taraf khuncha jaye.aur GEET ko hi pyar karne lage.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb dear
loved it
great job
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Posted: 12 years ago
hy friends.plzzz can u help me? kya muje is story ko Barry sir ke ya nisar sir ke paas pahonchana chahiye.aur agr aap ko ye story achi lagi hai to plzzz aap ise star channel ya nisar sir or barry ke paas pahoncha ne me mery help karenge.plzzz reply friends.plzzz & i think isme action bhi hai to GC to yes hi kehaga.aur upar se DD ka 2 roles & 2 deffernt cerectors hai to wo bhi yes hi kahegi...plzzz replyyy😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
story is very nice.per thodisi adhuri lag rahi hai. pls complete the whole story with small details also. but theme is very nice i like it very much 
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aditibd

story is very nice.per thodisi adhuri lag rahi hai. pls complete the whole story with small details also. but theme is very nice i like it very much 

thanks 4 the suggesion..πŸ˜›πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
we want a new season of geet wirh gurmeet nd dhrashti...
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Posted: 12 years ago