Originally posted by GeetHSP
Haha that has happened to me too...the late night inspirations. It always turns out good but it kills you the next day. You said to be brutally honest so I will be - that was AMAZING. Like seriously. It honestly fit Viren and Jeevika's characters perfectly. From their actions right down to their dialogues. BRAVO! Do PM me if you write anything else. I think this has to be the best OS I've read...without a doubtπ
πagreed. The tiredness kills me, and so does my mother when I refuse to get out of bed! π the gaaliya that come out of her mouth are funny! π
And thank you π³ i tried to keep the characters intact, so glad you liked it!
and noo, you're being way too kind! π³
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