VriKa OS: Jungle Suhaag Raat Ke Baad... - Page 5

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by shrutiavm


Hate!!! R u kidding me πŸ˜²
 I loved it...
 Well... I absolutely love all ur work so pls keep writing...
Coz as soon as I get up... I come on this forum to read ur work n others also... Greeeaaattt work guys!!!
Thank you 😳 i'm glad you enjoy reading my work 😳
And I'm more glad that the others writing and mine are the first thing your eyes see in the morning! thats sweet!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by GeetHSP


Haha that has happened to me too...the late night inspirations. It always turns out good but it kills you the next day. You said to be brutally honest so I will be - that was AMAZING. Like seriously. It honestly fit Viren and Jeevika's characters perfectly. From their actions right down to their dialogues. BRAVO! Do PM me if you write anything else. I think this has to be the best OS I've read...without a doubt😊
πŸ˜†agreed. The tiredness kills me, and so does my mother when I refuse to get out of bed! πŸ˜† the gaaliya that come out of her mouth are funny! πŸ˜†
And thank you 😳 i tried to keep the characters intact, so glad you liked it!
and noo, you're being way too kind! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Nikhi.


That was so romantic! I had goosebumps on me the whole time whilst reading it! I love the besharam Viren, and Jeevika in the OS reacts exactly how one would expect her to. You're a fantastic writer...especially since you've posted this at 2.38 a.m.! Don't ever stop writing! 😊

You had goosebumps? Was it really that romantic? 😲😳
Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for sharing this wonderful OS with us, it was a good one πŸ˜‰
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by TrueMuskaan


You had goosebumps? Was it really that romantic? 😲😳
 
Trust me; I really did! 😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Really really amazing OS!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ And aww poor Jeevika is so timid 😳 Thanxx for the pm πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
THIS WAS FANTASTIC...KASH YEH REAL MEIN HOTA...HAAAYYEEE😍
Posted: 12 years ago
Omiiigawwd! 
This was amazing!!!!!! =D ❀️
Posted: 11 years ago
πŸ‘πŸΌOMG ! I jusr read this.. YOU ARE A BRILLIANT WRITER!! Plz write more VIRIKA OS! And plz PM me πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant job...enjoyed it so much...it was really well writtenπŸ˜ƒ
please do write more such work n if u do so please pm me for the mext time!

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