Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

VriKa OS: Jungle Suhaag Raat Ke Baad... - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: shrutiavm

Hate!!! R u kidding me πŸ˜²

 I loved it...
 Well... I absolutely love all ur work so pls keep writing...
Coz as soon as I get up... I come on this forum to read ur work n others also... Greeeaaattt work guys!!!

Thank you 😳 i'm glad you enjoy reading my work 😳
And I'm more glad that the others writing and mine are the first thing your eyes see in the morning! thats sweet!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: GeetHSP

Haha that has happened to me too...the late night inspirations. It always turns out good but it kills you the next day. You said to be brutally honest so I will be - that was AMAZING. Like seriously. It honestly fit Viren and Jeevika's characters perfectly. From their actions right down to their dialogues. BRAVO! Do PM me if you write anything else. I think this has to be the best OS I've read...without a doubt😊

πŸ˜†agreed. The tiredness kills me, and so does my mother when I refuse to get out of bed! πŸ˜† the gaaliya that come out of her mouth are funny! πŸ˜†
And thank you 😳 i tried to keep the characters intact, so glad you liked it!
and noo, you're being way too kind! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Nikhi.

That was so romantic! I had goosebumps on me the whole time whilst reading it! I love the besharam Viren, and Jeevika in the OS reacts exactly how one would expect her to. You're a fantastic writer...especially since you've posted this at 2.38 a.m.! Don't ever stop writing! 😊

You had goosebumps? Was it really that romantic? 😲😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for sharing this wonderful OS with us, it was a good one πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: TrueMuskaan

You had goosebumps? Was it really that romantic? 😲😳

 
Trust me; I really did! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really really amazing OS!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ And aww poor Jeevika is so timid 😳 Thanxx for the pm πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
THIS WAS FANTASTIC...KASH YEH REAL MEIN HOTA...HAAAYYEEE😍
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omiiigawwd! 
This was amazing!!!!!! =D ❀️
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Posted: 11 years ago
πŸ‘πŸΌOMG ! I jusr read this.. YOU ARE A BRILLIANT WRITER!! Plz write more VIRIKA OS! And plz PM me πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant job...enjoyed it so much...it was really well writtenπŸ˜ƒ
please do write more such work n if u do so please pm me for the mext time!