::SS- THE DEVIL'S PARADISE:: Ch3 Return of.. Pg5 (Page 4)

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 1:03am | IP Logged
heey buddy ... just now i came across ur SS...
nice start...
love it...
continue soon
& add me in

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Posted: 26 January 2012 at 3:37am | IP Logged
hey ramona
its awesome start
when will u update ur other ffs dear
update them also plz
cont soon

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Posted: 28 January 2012 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
Heyaa everyone.. Time for update. Yeah yeah.. I am very very late. But I was a lil lazy..

Chapter 2: Birthday Bash

Krishna: Are you sleeping inside? Whats taking you so long?

Pratigya comes out wearing the dress: Sorry!!

Krishna was furious. But when he saw her he couldnt stop admiring her beauty: You're luking gorgeous. Here.. This is for you.

He gave her a brand new Diamond set.

Pratigya: thank you.

Krishna: anything for you sweethrt.

Pratigya was struggling to tie the strings of the dress. Krishna went up to her and : May I help you?

He gently took the strings and tied them whilst looking at her in the mirror. His cold fingers sent chills down her spine. She wanted to protest but the next thing that he did made her completly numb. Krishna placed his lips on her neck and kissed her all over.

Pratigya: Krishna.. The party..

Krishna (letting her go): Oh yeah.. Lets go..

They drove for 20 mins and finally reached the Grand Palace. Krishna wrapped his arm around Pratigya and walked in.

'Prats.. ' yelled Lavanya. 'what took you so long? Did you forget that its ur best friend's Birthday?'

Pratigya: Im sorry La.. Happy Birthday.

Both of them hugged each other

La: Aww.. Thank you swthrt

Krishna too wished Lavanya and she introduced them to the other guests.

La's hubby Akash also joined them.

'Hey Pratigya.. You're looking Gorgeous'

Krishna didnt like any other man complimenting his wife but he kept quite as Akash was their friend. Soon everyone was invited on the dance floor. Krishna grabbed this chance and took Prats in his arms. He held her protectively close to him and gazed at her lovingly. She was beautiful no doubt, but today she exceeded his expectations. Pratigya was feeling uncomfortable. She just couldnt look up to him. Her eyes were roaming elsewhere.

After the dance, Akash and Krishna were having important talks with other men. La noticed Pratigya looking all gloomy and dull so she took her outside in the garden.

La: Are you ok Prats?

Prats: Ofc I am. Why? Anything wrong?

La: nah.. Just like that.

La knew she was hiding sumthng but before she could question her further, an arm snaked around their waists. Both the girls were shocked.

La and Prats: UDAY!!

Precap: who the hell was he? You enjoyed being in his arms, right?
'krishna.. Trust me.. ' but before she could complete Pratigya found herself on the ground.

Edited by KriYa_life - 28 January 2012 at 8:31pm

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Posted: 28 January 2012 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
wow superb updateStar
love it Embarrassed

Edited by Mitaly.. - 29 January 2012 at 2:19pm

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Posted: 28 January 2012 at 8:34pm | IP Logged
Great...Update Soon...Smile ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.

Edited by -aHnAf- - 29 January 2012 at 6:45am
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Posted: 28 January 2012 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
wow superb update Clap u took too much time to update but der aye durust aye n aye toh sahi
n wat happen to ur previous 3pending ffs r that still alive or not

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Posted: 29 January 2012 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Nice update...loving d over-protective KrishnaDay Dreaming...
Precap seems interesting...ab tera kya hoga PratigyaLOLLOLLOLLOL
plz update soon Rams...itni der lagadi tune ki mujhe firse first page par jaana para story ke liyeLOL

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