Pratigya

::SS- THE DEVIL'S PARADISE:: Ch3 Return of.. Pg5 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Anondo.R

Nice one. Carry on


thank you so much Bhai
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: riyya6

nice one.. carry on


thanks Riyya..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Veena.S

Lallontop, soo passionate..., i lubb tis Krish,


thanks Vee..
Even I lubb him
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Posted: 12 years ago
heey buddy ... just now i came across ur SS...
 
nice start...
 
love it...
 
continue soon
& add me in
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey ramona
its awesome start
when will u update ur other ffs dear
update them also plz
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heyaa everyone.. Time for update. Yeah yeah.. I am very very late. But I was a lil lazy..



Chapter 2: Birthday Bash

Krishna: Are you sleeping inside? Whats taking you so long?

Pratigya comes out wearing the dress: Sorry!!

Krishna was furious. But when he saw her he couldnt stop admiring her beauty: You're luking gorgeous. Here.. This is for you.

He gave her a brand new Diamond set.

Pratigya: thank you.

Krishna: anything for you sweethrt.

Pratigya was struggling to tie the strings of the dress. Krishna went up to her and : May I help you?

He gently took the strings and tied them whilst looking at her in the mirror. His cold fingers sent chills down her spine. She wanted to protest but the next thing that he did made her completly numb. Krishna placed his lips on her neck and kissed her all over.

Pratigya: Krishna.. The party..

Krishna (letting her go): Oh yeah.. Lets go..

They drove for 20 mins and finally reached the Grand Palace. Krishna wrapped his arm around Pratigya and walked in.

'Prats.. ' yelled Lavanya. 'what took you so long? Did you forget that its ur best friend's Birthday?'

Pratigya: Im sorry La.. Happy Birthday.

Both of them hugged each other

La: Aww.. Thank you swthrt

Krishna too wished Lavanya and she introduced them to the other guests.

La's hubby Akash also joined them.

'Hey Pratigya.. You're looking Gorgeous'

Krishna didnt like any other man complimenting his wife but he kept quite as Akash was their friend. Soon everyone was invited on the dance floor. Krishna grabbed this chance and took Prats in his arms. He held her protectively close to him and gazed at her lovingly. She was beautiful no doubt, but today she exceeded his expectations. Pratigya was feeling uncomfortable. She just couldnt look up to him. Her eyes were roaming elsewhere.

After the dance, Akash and Krishna were having important talks with other men. La noticed Pratigya looking all gloomy and dull so she took her outside in the garden.

La: Are you ok Prats?

Prats: Ofc I am. Why? Anything wrong?

La: nah.. Just like that.

La knew she was hiding sumthng but before she could question her further, an arm snaked around their waists. Both the girls were shocked.

'Surprise'
La and Prats: UDAY!!

Precap: who the hell was he? You enjoyed being in his arms, right?
'krishna.. Trust me.. ' but before she could complete Pratigya found herself on the ground.Edited by KriYa_life - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow superb update⭐️
love it 😳
Edited by Mitaly.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great...Update Soon...😊Edited by -aHnAf- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow superb update 👏 u took too much time to update but der aye durust aye n aye toh sahi
n wat happen to ur previous 3pending ffs r that still alive or not
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...loving d over-protective Krishna😍...
Precap seems interesting...ab tera kya hoga Pratigya😆😆😆😆
plz update soon Rams...itni der lagadi tune ki mujhe firse first page par jaana para story ke liye😆
Edited by Eden_luvsKriya - 12 years ago