Love V/S Darkness [DISCOUNTUED] - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

very interesting part !




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-Mounika- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow nice concept.bt lil confusd..is maan living in india?u said that they live in newyork..then how can geet chase maan when she receivd parcel..and ha i thnk the persn who's sendng flowers to geet may be maan..waitng 4 next part
anupm04 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome parts
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome love it...
i just love ur ff...
pls add me in ur pm list...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Wow nice concept.bt lil confusd..is maan living in india?u said that they live in newyork..then how can geet chase maan when she receivd parcel..and ha i thnk the persn who's sendng flowers to geet may be maan..waitng 4 next part




Thanks for liking. Yes Maan was living in New York but something happened which made him come back to india.
Posted: 12 years ago
love ur ff
sending u a buddy request :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Maan ran in the hall and said fast to Adi


M:- Adi I am going to the hospital you will handle everything na? Maan looked really tensed.


Ad:- Maan everything OK na?


M:- Adi I don't have time to talk now. I need to rush.


AD:- OK go I will handle everything here.



And Maan ran out if the house the next moment.


All looked at them dumbstruck. With open mouths and everything.


Adi looked at them and said



AD:- WHAT!


All raised there eyebrows.


AD:- OK I will tell you all.


In the hospital:


Maan ran to the rep, and asked for Geet Handa. She told him the directions. Maan rand there, and saw Jugnu there.


J:- Sir she is right now in the ICU.


M:- What happened to her?


J:- She got hit by a bus!


M:- What!!!!!, he looked that he could cry any moment.

J:- And I...


M:- I what Jugnu mama tell me.


J:- And I think she... she tired to commit suicide.


Maan was already half broken and got more broken when he heard that.


M:- But how... I mean what got you think she did this?


Jugnu mama took out some papers. And showed him.


J:- You see this. You signed these papers na?


Maan nodded.


J:- Did you look what you are singing at?


Maan nodded his head in negative.


J:- This papers on, that if something happens to Geet Handa. Her whole property will get in name of Maan Singh Khurana.


Maan started go backwards when his legs hit a stool he sat down it brush his fingers down his hair.


When the doctor came out running.


Dr:- Mr. Khurana you need to come with us we need to come with us. She needs blood.


Maan got up and went away with the doctor. As it wasn't the first time he gave her blood. Many times after chachi had hit her, but this was the worst thing which had happened with her, she had lost a big amount of blood.


After some of Maan was taken. He was rolling down his arm on its place when he hear the nurse say that they need more blood.


M:- Doctor you can take more blood from me!!


D:- Sorry Mr, Khurana we can't take more blood from you, we can't risk your life.


Maan got up nand said


M:- Maan Singh Khurana kuch bhi kar sakta hain Geet ko zinda rakhne ke liye. And if tyou don't do it I will do it my self.


D:- Mr. Khurana, what are you doing? Mr. Khurana is very life risky.


M:- I don't care do it our I will make sure to close down this hospital.


The doctor gulped down the saliva he had. And told the nurse to take more blood from him.

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Ok Here is next part, hope you like it. I need to sleep, guys I',m not home tomrrow so I needed to update today. I know its a bit short. But hope you like it


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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god!y did she do dat?
waiting for deir confrontation..!
-Mounika- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg!!!!!geet tried to commit suicide and those papers contains her decision abt her property..omg iam really shockd!i never expectd that geet took sign of maan 4 that purpose..and here poor maan is shattered after knwng abt the reasn of geet's accidnt and gvng litres and litres of blood...i hope ki sab teek hojaye..cntinue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part.. Though i feel this part like teaser or sneak peak but its ok 4 now as u r feeling sleepy n part is nice

but make sure u give a bit longer part not precap type parts

and ofcourse see ur comfort first dear..