Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

Love V/S Darkness [DISCOUNTUED] (Page 10)

Remya_Pillai IF-Sizzlerz

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Awesum part...
loved geet's trust for msk...

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Originally posted by mollycoddle

simply brilliant...

thanks for liking
Originally posted by shah10


Thanks for liking

Originally posted by love2_soma

geet is kidnapped...but whi is dere behind dis...
maan imagining geet...
awesome update...
really loved it...
thank u very much fr such a lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...

Well you know now na who is behind this, thanks for liking it.

Originally posted by gill123



Originally posted by Remya_Pillai

Omg!geet got kidnapped..!
Loved the song..

Yepp kidnapped, thanks for liking the song

Originally posted by meena..


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Originally posted by abinash079

awesome update


Originally posted by muraadlovesdd



Originally posted by sekhonpuneet

Felt so much of nervousness n tension while reading.
Really really hope n wish geet is safe.
N continue soon.nahi to tension increase hoti jayegi

Yep i know i myself felt nervouse wirting it... then i should have waited a bit longer naWinkLOL

Edited by Kriyanshlover - 04 March 2012 at 7:48am

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Just look above i have commented back to all your comments.
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nice part
continue soon
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waitinggg for d update
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chapter 7

The guys came out and saw some people wearing a mask standing there.

G:- what do you guys want?

P1:- we heard you guys caught two girls. We would like to buy them.

V:- How did you get to know about it?

P2:- Doesn't matter are you giving us them or not?

V:- How much?

P1:- 10 lakhs, for both of them.

Vijay and Gaurav looked at each other, and nodded, they got there money and went away to get the girls.

But they stopped and asked

G:- do you want them unconscious or conscious

All:- Unconscious.

V:- good choice one of them kicks really good.. Both of them went away ang got Pari and Geet.

Guy one and two took them and went away.

G:- hehehe we made a good deal na?

The two guys came out from that disgusting place and placed Geet and Pari softly in the back seat.

Both got in the front seat,

P1:- Thank good Abhi that they didn't recognize us-

AB:- True, but I must say our boss has good taste in girls. Looking back. Adi shot a glare at him.

A:- Don't you dare say something like that about my sister.

AB:- Sorry I didn't mean it that way.

Adi nodded and looked outside the window, he knew that Abhi didn't mean anything bad but he couldn't hear someone pass such comments on his baby sister.

AB:- Btw she looks very quite and innocent, I meant in that way.

That thing made Adi chuckle badly.

AD:- Yeah he is so sweet innocent and quite. Adi thought in his mind. They drive in the parking lot and saw Maan coming running towards them.

M:- Adi please ay you found her, you found her na?

Adi gave Maan a sad look and told him look in the car. Maan ran to the car and saw a unconscious Geet. He let out a sigh. Then opened the door and brought her inside the house, he took her to one of the extra room which was in there house.

Meanwhile Yash brought in Pari in the house, he was dumbstruck looking at her beautiful face. He had never seen such face in his life. He couldn't take his eyes of her.

Yah came back to earth when he felt someones hand on his shoulder.

It was Rishi.

R:- Dude stop staring at her and lay her in the other room which is beside Geet's Yash went away a bit embarrassed.

Maan put her on the bed and tarted pacing back and fro back and fro.

Pinky checked Geet and told him that she was fine, she was just a bit unconscious.

Maan sat on the bed and just started at his love. He face was full of tension. She looked tired as she hadn't slept for days. He felt ad that he didn't take care of her, which he had promise his parents before...

He didn't wan to think about it right now he was much more worried about Kriya, he jut hoped that she will be fine.

He sighed and started creasing her cheek, when he did that her face started to relax. He was happy that she was safe and she hadn't to many and deep wounds.


Sorry guys I can't write more I feeling tooo sleepy, sorry.

One more thing, from now on in till I don't get more comments the parts will be 3 words pgs long. Its just my Maaneet ff which will be so. Plus 10 pgs extra. I know I may sound mean but I think its fair when I Pm so many people and don't get any response.

When I have got my 10 pgs of comments I will update next part.

All who wants PM add MaaneetAminapm to there buddy list

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