Saath Nibhaana Saathiya


Saath Nibhaana Saathiya
Saath Nibhaana Saathiya

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--HANISA-- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
chika nice your ss love it cant wait to long for the next please pdate soon and pm me i think ahem is falling love with her gopi looks very cute in the sari than the dress love when ahem said she is looking beautiful wow

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rsk16 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
really nice story.eagerly waiting for more

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munnihyderabad Moderator

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
chika read the part 3... loved the update... gopi's saree is way too better than her dress and ahem i can guess is completely mesmerized by her in the rain and white saree...kabhi. he want's anita... kabhi he wants gopi... confused guy... get a brain u r divorcing her...

gopi needs to be strong now and teach ahem a lessonWink

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-JollyJabeen- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 6:04pm | IP Logged
Hi Saathians,before i post my update just would like to say occasionally some updates will be long and some short,sorry!,it depends on what comes up in my mind anyway here's the next updateSmile


"Ahemji,what did you say?"

"Gopi,I,I don't know,I don't know im feeling attracted to you,I dunno,I don't want to lose you but I don't know if I love you?"

Gopi's clenched her muscles in frustration,that's it,that was the final straw.

"Ahemji,what are you?,what kind of animal are you?,I've done nothing but listen to whatever you've said,Ahemji,you've runed so many lives,argh im just so angry,how can you say you do not want to lose me?,what about Anitaji?!,you can't play her around,you can't tell her you'll divorce me and love her when you don't even know what you want!.Ahemji how can you hurt me?,hurt Anitaji,how can you hurt yourself,Ahemji,I've never complained to anyone,whatever has happened to me I kept it to myself but Ahemji,I have some self-respect to you don't I,how can you treat me,treat Anitaji like we mean nothing,Ahemji,first understand,decide what you want before making any decisions"

With that Gopi started to sob and walked off,leaving an emotional and shattered Ahem.

"One more thing Ahemji, please don't play with any girls heart,you're the worst at damaging them" this line was the worst for Ahem because Gopi had said it in a broken and tearful voice,unknowingly or knowingly he had caused so much greif onto her,not only Gopi but he was plastering fake hope towards Anita aswell,"Im really a dog",Ahem knew he had to sort this out and that's what he did,as he entered the party to have a word with Anita.

"Anita,I can't do this,forgive me but I don't love you,I can't marry you,im sorry"

"WHAT!?,Ahem what are you saying,no you can't leave me again,I won't let you,no Ahem,you love me and only me that's why you don't love your wife,that's why you want me,thats why I came back for you!" Anita was crying her eye's out,she couldn't live without Ahem,although she despised hs family,they were so old-fashioned and control freaks.

"Anita,im sorry but I don't love you,I love..i love.. I love.. oh my god,I love Gopi!?"

"WHAT,Ahem what are you saying?"

Ahem grabbed hold of Anita and started to shake her.

"Anita,I finally understand,I love I love Gopi,I I I love Gopi Anita,she,she's the love of my life,I love Gopi!"

Anita was frozen to her place.What had just happened?

"Anita,im so sorry but I don't love you,forgive me,im such a jerk but.. Im in love with Gopi and you've helped me realise it,thank you so much Anita!"

And with that,Ahem ran out of the hall to speak to Gopi,his Gopi and he knew exactly where she would be,where she would have gone because that's the one place where she goes after being upset.

Song of the update: Tongue

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varshu27 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 6:16pm | IP Logged
wonderful update chika...loved how gopi gave ahem a piece of her mind...i wish gopi makes ahem sweat before accepting his love...

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Justlikethat1 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 6:20pm | IP Logged
Good one Chika.. That was really nice though Aham seemed kind of a jerk to keep swaying between Anita and Gopi. But as the saying goes all's well that ends well..

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NazmaJ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 6:28pm | IP Logged
Finally we have Ahem realising he loves Gopi and not Anita!!!
Nearly left it a little late though didn't he!!
Great stuff Chika can't wait to read more!!

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famzii05 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 6:28pm | IP Logged
aww...poor ahem, cant understand what he feels!! well done anita for making ahem find his love!! loveely...update soon!! xx

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