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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
This is very interesting!!!
 
 
I absolutely cannot wait to read more!!!

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 5:48pm | IP Logged
Wonderful OS ! Update soon ! It ended too soon. Dead

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
good keep updating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
great start...loved it...
continue soon

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
lovely start. Waiting for next part.

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
                                                 Currently writing the next part Tongue

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
"PART 2:

It was 8:00am in the morning, everyone had taken there place on the dining table with Raashi serving them and Gopi inside the kitchen, Gopi came out of the kitchen with a plate of Dhokla's and was about to serve them when

"Gopi vahu,what is this,why do you look so tired?,didn't you sleep well last night?"

"No its nothing maaji,im perfectly fine" said Gopi smiling and than lowering her gaze. How could Gopi share her pain with anyone,she was a guest in this house and would be leaving in a few weeks time,she had failed maaji,she had failed everyone and she couldn't look into their eye's any longer. She was shaking lightly and had to put the tray down.Hetal glanced at Gopi and looked worried.

"Gopi dikra,whats wrong?,are you okay?"

"Ji kakiji,I'll be right back" and with that Gopi rushed into her…his room and threw up in the bathroom,she had been feeling sick and going pale for a few days now and she didn't want to worry anyone.

*Knock*

"Gopi,Gop are you in there?,is everything okay?"

Gopi washed her face once and left the bathroom. It was Ahem.

"Im perfectly fine Ahemji" Gopi again did not raise her gaze and it was irritating him.

"Gopi look up at me when im speaking to you"

Gopi instantly looked up into his eye's,she tried to appear strong but inside she was crumbling apart,she didn't know what to do anymore. Ahem was just staring at Gopi's chocolate eye's,she lost her twinkle,why was her twinkle not there!?

Ahem exited the room,he couldn't take it,where was Gopi?,the Gopi he knew?,who was this stranger that he had created? His guilt was eating him up.

"Gopi bahu,come, take this,this is a black dress that you have to wear for the party you need to attend with Ahem dikra, come on,get ready now and Raashi will help you"

Raashi and Gopi both went to get ready in one room, Raashi was wearing a beautiful and short dress whereas Gopi was wearing a long and elegant dress. Both Raashi and Gopi exited to meet their husbands in the car, Jigar was in the white car and Ahem in the black.

Thats Gopi's dress Tongue

Thats Raashi's dress Wink


 "Omg Raashi looks gorgeous"


"Wow Gopi looks so different,so pretty,she looks hot,no Ahem what are you doing,your gonna divorce her,just chill and do not feel guilty" Big smile

Song of the update: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M5o6ccZmIzo

P.S guys,thanks so much for the wonderful comments and likes,i really appreicate it,guys next updates gonna be really interesting,you guys are def gonna be surprised at what Gopi does,its so funny Big smile

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
Lovely part again. Unbelievable that koki gave her that dress herself.
Tell me does your koki wear jeans and top.Tongue

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